New FF: One more dance part 4,pg 6(FINAL)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hello,
Yes i am back to writing FF's. I stopped for reasons only known to me and a few others, but my fingers just started to itch to write...so i had no choice but to write this ff down.
It is very short about 1-2 ( maybe 3) parts long.
It is romantic and aroung BJ. What can i say other than i love this pair!
I need to say a big thank you to my sweetdishšŸ¤— poor thing, bothered her alot for this ffšŸ˜†. Though she is an absolute angel!
I must say : raania, nibbles, dc, minks, ziddi, aarthi and the many others who blackmailed and tortured me to write a ff... i still said no!😃 But now their wish has been granted! Love you all sweetiesšŸ¤—
So read all you wish
Luv
sweetu
p.s. permision has been taken from the viewbie to post this ff so i am therefore doing so!

Part one: pg 1
part two: pg2
part three: pg4
part four:pg6-final




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Posted: 19 years ago
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great sweetu..can't wait 😃 😃 😃 ....glad u starting a new one 😳 😳 ....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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One more dance
WARNING: read at your own will, i will not be held responsible whether this is liked or not.

Part one

The slow and gentle rhythm of the music pulled her closer to her partner, whose hands were now trailing a path of intense fire down her naked back. A contented sigh escaped her lips, his hands moving further down, and her head lay to rest against his chest. It's strong and muscular form was evoking an unknown response inside of her…the combination of his touch was not doing justice, yet the gentle movement of their sway was.

The music entranced her…it intoxicated her eyes so that if others looked they would believe she were drunk, drunk on love.

She felt a sudden rush of want as his lips brushed her ear and the shallow husky breath breathed a tickle through her skin. His voice was even more intense, yet the passion that was raging through her didn't stop …his words only infuriated her heat.
"I want you…"
His actions managed to prove so. With one swift movement he had bent down to capture the very lips that had entranced him during their first meet at work.
A gentle smirk managed to glide its way through as he thought of their first encounter, yet soon all was shunned as he found her little body clinging on to him, her hands travelling to his hair…crushing his lips deeper.

Before either could begin to explore their new venture, the music stopped, leaving way to silence. Both were no longer able to hear the soft tingle that had pounded their ears seconds ago, they broke apart breathing hard.

She felt his harsh gaze, and looked up into his drowning eyes. His fingers touched the side of her face and she saw his lips move in a lull trance… whispering
"Let me put it back on…"

His eyes were smothered in an ignited fire; she knew it would never die. It caused her heartbeats to quicken and body to dance.





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Hope you liked...this is just the start!
To all my readers, you are so sweet...will you like this ff?
Luv ya
sweetu 😳
p.s. rani...poetic romance? i think not!
minku...no more threats pls!
btw i know it's short...that's because its the teazeršŸ˜†
Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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welcome back sweetu šŸ¤—
I miss chatting with you 😭 😭 😭
but i am good to see you back in writing 😃
sounds interesting please write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i just read one of your previous FFs yesterday...and should say they are awesome....hot hot hot...for the lack of a better word....i was all 😳 by the time i finished reading it...rivs
Edited by rivya - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its very romantic and ... 😳 😳 😳
plz continue soon ur new ff
waiting for more 😊 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey sweetudi..
first welcome back..
and second thanks for a new ff..
ur ff's are always rocking..
and please continue soon..
please please


thanks
ā¤ļøNiraliā¤ļø
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow really nice and romantic šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

thanks
radha šŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!!! this is the frst time hav red ur ff.. n now im off to read ur other ones šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

it was awesome!!! amazingly (is that a wrd... šŸ˜• šŸ˜† )well written!!!! bt plzzzzzzzz dnt end the ff in 2/3 parts...pretty plzzz with sugar on top.. 😃 😃 šŸ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WARNING: READ AT YOUR OWN RISK. I WILL NOT BE HELD RESPONSIBLE FOR YOUR ACTIONS, NOR WILL TAKE ANY BLAME.

you have been warned...

Part two:

His eyes were smothered in an ignited fire; she knew it would never die. It caused her heartbeats to quicken and body to dance.

She watched his strong form, his muscular hands reaching for the CD and enclosing it within. She shuddered and their eyes locked once more, she was dazed.
His shoulder hunched as his body bent to adjust to the level of the CD player, it slipped in and another slow number hit her ears.

Seconds later she felt the warmth of his body, as his strong arm wrapped itself around her waste…pulling her in. The gentle whispers of his husky love dripped voice caused ripples of lust to explode within her.
"Bani…one more dance…one more dance"
He turned her head upward letting her drown in his betraying emotions. The music continued to tingle and she finally allowed an answer to seep through.
"Jai" she whispered, tracing the strong outline of his rough jaw.
He smirked at her bold action and scooped her closer to his heart, allowing its gentle thuds to calm hers.

Once more she allowed the music's gentle tingles to entwine with her soul and her lover. Her slender fingers rested in his and her heart raged as he brought their hands to his rough lips. Their gaze now locked and bodies swaying, he whispered, leaning in.
"Bani dammnit, why do you have to look so good…they were all staring at you at dinner". His grip suddenly tightened, a lean possessive glint now burning in place of passion.
"I don't like it when other men stare at you…." His voice was husky and deep and held a threatening tone, daring her to answer back.
She laughed, amused at his jealousy. He looked down, eyes hard, and stroked the soft skin of her back gently…allowing his hand to slip up to the two thin strings that held the whole dress in place.
Her eyes widened.
"I mean it Bani, this is not a joke." His eyes softening suddenly at her expression of anguish and pleasure, he let out a soft seductive laugh…allowing it to echo in her ears.
She looked up startled, and smiled slyly, reaching up and stroking his mouth, allowing her fingers to trail down to his jaw line. His eyes followed her every movement.
She shuddered under his gaze and drew herself towards his face.
He enveloped her in a deep quenching kiss, allowing their lips to play in a fire of their own. His fingers traced her naked back in sensual delight.

"Banee"
His soft and husky voice whispered between desperate pauses of passionate want.
Was this how feeling in love was, damn it was amazing.
He groaned and whispered "Marry me".

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Read and leave comments.
NOTE: I am not the one of the best writers from here in the KS forum, i know those that are and i am sure dear readers you do too, so therefore i am saying loudly i am in no league of theirs.
I hope people liked the second part and understood it.
Best wishes
Sweetu
p.s. decided to be kind and make it 3-5 parts.

Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago

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