New FF: One more dance part 4,pg 6(FINAL) - Page 6

Wait.....by final, do you mean end?!!

Sudhu, I haven't even read the FF yet and your ending it?!!

Let me read, comment and then bash you over PM!!😡

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Omg Omg Omg!!

Haila!!

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Sudhu.....what in the world were the warnings for?!😕😆.....the writer i so young, I'm sure the reader will be fine, that is if they don't die of a stroke!!😆

To tell you the truth, I didn't like this FF.....to short!!😭

I demand another FF with longer parts and a proper stroyline NOW!!😡

Except to recieve lots of PMs from me!!😈

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sweetu,

Hehehehe yaar I was too mad until now to come and comment on ur ff phele comment karti tu u would have gotten nothing but dandas from me but now I have cooled down so here I am.

Kya kahu tumhe it was a fabulous ff (as long as it lasted) saachi main I like every ff of urs better then the other and I want to read more and more of them and this was such a passionate and ahem ahem ff and it left me wanting to read more of it but …. Ok ok I'll stop grumbling now lol but main kya karu I can't help myself.

Hey I read ur comment on my ff. I didn't get any pm from u, I was the one who sent u the last pm and I am waiting for urs ma'am, better send it soon.

And didn't I ask u to stop the hugging match coz u can never win from meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee heheheh i'll show u how i can beat u as soon as my emoticons start working again until then u can laugh lol

Luv ya lods
minks

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sweetu,

Hehehehe yaar I was too mad until now to come and comment on ur ff phele comment karti tu u would have gotten nothing but dandas from me but now I have cooled down so here I am.

Kya kahu tumhe it was a fabulous ff (as long as it lasted) saachi main I like every ff of urs better then the other and I want to read more and more of them and this was such a passionate and ahem ahem ff and it left me wanting to read more of it but …. Ok ok I'll stop grumbling now lol but main kya karu I can't help myself.

Hey I read ur comment on my ff. I didn't get any pm from u, I was the one who sent u the last pm and I am waiting for urs ma'am, better send it soon.

And didn't I ask u to stop the hugging match coz u can never win from meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee heheheh i'll show u how i can beat u as soon as my emoticons start working again until then u can laugh lol

Luv ya lods
minks

I can't believe you ended it this quickly Sweetu!!!

Please start a new ff soon!!!

And now, onto the actual part!! 😉

It was totally amazing!!!!

I loved it, and yaar those warnings aren't really needed!!

Luv ya,

Meera 😳