Swaron poem:Meri dua hogi Mukammal

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys,these are just a few lines i have written based on the current swaron track.Its basically from swayam's pov describing his wait and longing for sharon.This is my first attempt on writing poem with hindi wordings and second attempt on poems in general...so pls forgive any mistakes.


Meri dua hogi Mukammal



Yaad aate hai woh pal

Jab teri ek jhalak se dil mein hoti thi hulchul


Teri woh haseen harkatein

Tere paas hone ki aahatein


Tera khwabon mein nishaan chod jana

Mumkin nahi unhe bhool pana


Ab toh bas teri yaadein paas hai

phir se tujhe milne ki aas hai


Phir dikhe teri aankhon ki kashish

ek yahi hai is dil ki khwahish


Tujhe choo kar tera hona hai

tujhe paa kar kahi kho jaana hai


Tere sang dil ko sukoon hai

ab tu hi mera junoon hai


Dil ki guzaarish poori hogi jab... lamha woh khaas hai

mere rubaroon ab tera hi ehsaas hai


Jaane kab aayega woh pal...

... jab meri har dua hogi mukammal


guys do leave ur reviews and likes😊

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-spongy- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was beautiful
simply amazing
missing swaron a lot
vrush your fans are waiting for you
get well soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!!!!! just amazing...so beautiful and pure... 😳
You took us to the Swaron Dreamland...
Great job chaitra... šŸ‘
loved it!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dear it was really cute...luvd it...
missing swaron like hel...
vrushii come back soon,...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg!! This is something really good šŸ‘
This really suits Swaron very well šŸ‘šŸ¼
Awesome attempt, keep writing more 😊
Vrush see how much ppl are missing you so plz get well real soon and come and complete our Swaron šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow such cute and beautiful poem on swaron...
Luv it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW very cute poem.😳😳
Loved it.šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome poetry..i just loved it..All the lines are beautifully potrayed and written as well..I like all the lines but last lines is just perfectly suited..I am lover of hindi poetry..And i appreciate u'r poem..
Great work

Thanx for PM

Prateek
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely poem
n missing swaron like hell
thanx for the pm
keep writing

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Posted: 12 years ago
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simple and sweet thoughts... loved it...

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