''ManVeer~IshQ kiya mohabbat kiya~''chp4 pg 41

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prologue

A beautiful day start one beautiful girl sit on auto she start shouting to auto driver she look like awsome girl she wearing suit red colour suit her sleeves gazing in net perfect body n suit is fully net her tammy to visible to see n she look waer churi dar she look so pretty inno...she start shouting

girl-bhaiya pls fast chaliya late horaha han...(bro pls fast driving me already late)
auto driver (AD)-kiya aura(fly)kar lejao ya auto han koi hawijaaz nai (wat i fly this auto this is a auto not plane)
girl-han tu maine kab kaha aurao lakin jaldi chalao is khatara ko(den why i m said u flying this unwell auto)
AD-dekhu ap koi ricksha lelo ya jaise chal sakta han waise hi chalega(see u take another auto )

manyata say something but sudden one big car come to front of auto n both come near eachother both crush...thaaak...auto driver hand is touch in miror n his hand is bleeding manyata saw n she angry cuz she already late..

girl-univers jee ab kiya hoga mai tu already late hogayi or ab ya uff...(univers jee now what doing me already late ufff)
AD-or ya sab apki wajah se hua han madam ap itna bolti han ab ap hi mujhe mere paise dilwaya or phir dusre ricksha mai bathiya...(n all unwell doing cuz of you cuz u talking like hell)
girl-wat the faa**** wat do u mean mai q de wo dega jisne ya kiya han

she go towards car n knock the car door mirror but mr.car not give her responce she again knock the car now someone open the door n come n say he is a handsome young boy.he pic his goggles n put his eyes

boy-who'z you??why u irritating me nounsence girl
girl-yahi tu ya baat mujhe tumse pouchni chaya bari dhoop han barish ke muasam mai jo chasmah pehan kar car chala raha ho andha ho or me nounsence u nounsence bloody...han nai tu she boiling in anger

boy-first ya batao tumhe kaam kiya han jungli biliyon ki tarah kyu chila rahi ho miss han nai tu?? (first u tell me what work u doing wild cat miss han nai tu)
girl-mr.car or mr.anda tumne na us auto wale ka mirror tod diya uske paise do q ke tumhari galty thi...(mr. car give me rupies cuz u crush auto)
boy-ohh mujhe smajana chaya tha tum jaisi girls ko paise chaya hote han isliya drama karti han miss DQ...(oh now me understand ur types girls always need money den u drama front of me miss dq)
girl-ya miss dq kiya han?? or paise do mujhse behaas na karo waise mai tumhari wajah se buhot late hochuki..(wat is miss dq n give me auto money i dont want to talk u more i m alaredy late cuz of you)

he took some money on his voliet n give to AD he start move n girl start moving but sudden he hold her both arms tightly n tolk 5 hundred n put her hand both share angry eyecontact

girl-ya kiya han (what is this)
uday-tumhe jo chaya tha wo (ur need)
girl-ohh helloo mr.attitude apne paise apne pass rakh smaja (oh hello mr. attitude ur money u take)
uday-q or bhi do?? (why u need more)

manyata throw the note on his face n pic one stone n she throw on his car mirror...mirror is divided million pieces she put her finger on his face..

manyata-ya tu rakh or apni gari ka shisha ban walena han nai tu...she give a smirk (u take it n make ur car mirror han nai tu)
uday-u r too much
manyata-i knew n dekhna tujhe ek din dekh logi mai (i knew already n i will see you one day)
uday-or us din ka hum intezar karega (n i m waiting wen u see me)

both moving...

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precape:boy n girl second meet.

😊ayshu😊😊




(all links are clickable you just click n got the chapters.)
chapter 1 87993571
chapter two 88226207
chapter three 88949784
chapter four
90867862

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start
i love it..
Precap seems intresting..
Please do con😊
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Love it janiii pm me fr sure
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Hey nice start, do continue...bt dere r a alot of writing errors... Its a suggestion dont mind han, proof reading will help u in correcting this...
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Hey u really have to continue...it was soo intresting... Thanks for the p.m...
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Awesome update di 👏
You ought to continue this😡
Update soon 😊
Mera matlab hai bahut soon 😆😆

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nice i like it
and unvierse jee kriya always use to say
remind me of her
thanks for pm
advance happy birthday day
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hey u thought too
its dam good
pls we what cs
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loved it
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