''ManVeer~IshQ kiya mohabbat kiya~''chp4 pg 41

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: sweet-pie
Awesome update!
Loved it loads!!
Manveer scenes were superb
so uday is her boss😆
nd the precape was mindblowinggg yarrr😳

AWEE...HOPE U LIKE NEXT ALSO
THANK YOU 4 LOVELY COMMENT

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: roopali15
hey when will u update

I m updating now..!!😉

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Thank You Everyone.

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chapter 4

uday slowly slowly close to her lips but sudden manyata come her sence and push him tightly.uday shock but he understand and now he know what he going to do manyata walk out of the room. uday still stood in room and thought.

uday-what's wrong with me?? i m mad? why GOD why why?? what i m doing with manyata???
alot's of questions running his mind he didn't understand what happened with him why sudden he stick with her why why and why???

other side the same position is manyata she sit on her cabin and also thinking a kiss moment and she also don't understand she did not undersium why she didn't stop him why? and why she hypnostise with his eyes?? her thought

manyata-what will i am doing with him oh God what happened please tell me what happened with me??

after 2 days manyata came office previous two days also but didn't face not talking him not went towards him and now she came in office she go in her cabin and sat on the chair den cabin telephone start ringing beep-beep-beep she pic the phone.

manyata-hello

its none of them uday.

uday-hello MS-Manyata come in my office now.
manyata-yes sir
uday-u have 5 minutes and i want to check mittal's groub file hope this file is completed?
manyata-sure sir.
uday-nodded.

manyata went uday's cabin now and she knock the door. and she open the door she try to enter on his cabin but he said.
uday-stop.
manyata-but sir
uday-what's time now?
manyata-it's 3:pm
uday-i know?
manyata-so why you asking me time?
uday-stupid girl what's time i call you??
manyata-on...on...on...
uday-say...[shout]
manyata-2:35 [wishpered]
uday-and how muxh time i give you?? damit
manyata-fi...fi...fiv...five ...mi...minu...te...minutes.[she worried she scared on his loud voice]
uday-you are late get out
manyata-i m sorry sir
uday-u know what.??
manyata nodded
uday-you middle class peoples forget ur statue always you live in gutter but dreams all of banglows
i talk to you sometimes joking with you laughing with you than you think i like i love you. you bloody i hate you
i hate girl how always acted like you always.
manyata-but sir why you so angry tell me what can i do??
uday-you talking in siddart and don't do your work where is mittal's file?? where is abex company project?? all ready nah cause you search one new firend b4 two days you spend you all time with him and my office is lover point cause of you.
manyata-ohh really enough is enough
uday-why it's hurt's you bdw tell me where you going with him?? his home
manyata-stop it please
uday-his cabin?
manyata-siir please stop it
uday-or his bed room??
manyata out of control she go towards him and slap him tightly.??

manyata-now 1st all u know what mr.singh i don't care what you think about me
2nd-i hate you i hate you and i hate you always and i dont care what you think about me and middle class people but tell you one thing middle class peoples are hardworking not like you and i really told you earlier whenever i saw you tabse always i hate you cause you desever only my hatered you're cheap man you unbeliveable man i didn't see ever in my life and who are you? who gave you right too questioning me?? you have know too say something about my personal life my character is that's and MR.UDAY today i m giving you my resignation letter i didn't work with you more.

uday-goo away now get out from my office
manyata-i don't want too see you again.
uday-me too GOOD BYE.

she out of his office and reached to home his words really effect her really really muxh don't know why but she upset she sad she crying she remember all scence what she spend with him but she didn't understand what was happened with her and why she don't know??

chapter 4 end

guys i know i m so muxh late but u know i have noo so muxh
and than my own marriage and high fever really sorry guys
hope you like this chappy and give ur long comments.
don't disappointed me guys and demand is 50 likes.
than i will update otherwise i can't update next chappy is that clear

precap-uday went in manyata home through window.

question1- who is siddart??
question2-why uday behaving like this??
question3-manyata come again in office??
question4-why uday went in manyata's home??
question5-uday succes to went to manyata home or not??

Ayesha.

Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 12 years ago

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Kritika

@Karkit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Nice update
uday jelus to see manyata talk to other man
its mean he love manyata bt nt undestand his feeling

1 i think siddhart like her brother

2 jelousy

3 yes

4 uday manyata ko mafi magne or manane gaya

5 uday ko manyata ka ghar jarur milega or vo use manayega bhi

do pm me nxt time n update soon

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Priyanka

@capriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

hai iam sorry for not responding your ff.its a very nice ff.i loved it.update was superb.what happened to uday suddenly?

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

di...its jst awsum..

read all in one go..

loved it..

update soon..

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

hey superb update...

luv it...

thx fr the p n do continue soon n do pm me...

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osina

@gal.angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Hey Ayesha great update
hate dat cheap uday .. how can he say all diz to manyata
n feeling so bad for manyata but she gave d answer to hiz face which he deserve .. all of sudden fighting happen coz of kiss .. hope jaldi dey become fren again
waiting for nxt update

Osina

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pooja urf pari

@parish99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

hey!
awesome update dear,
but uday was very rude to manyata
u have written it beautifully
please do continue soon
i'm waiting for it, tc

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#280

awesome update uday looked for that slap how dare he insult her just because she is not interested in him and so he did not like her talking to some one that does not give him the reason to degrade her character awesome update thanks fort he pm

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