''ManVeer~IshQ kiya mohabbat kiya~''chp4 pg 41

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Rashmi_pari
hey! loved ur updates to the core
loved manyat & uday's character
fight between them was soo cute
eagerly waiting to read further
please update soon

THANK YOU SO MUCH BUDDY
AWEE...
REALLY WOW I M GLAD U LIKE IT
I WILL UPDATE SOON DEAR
SO NOT WORRY PARI BUDDY

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: serat
awesome update
yaar plzzz
update next chappp
plzzz
plzzz

THANK YOU SO MUCH YEAH YEAH I WILL UPDATE SOON

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: maneet..
sry for late cmnt

i loved it
awosum update
keep it up
thanx for pm

IT'S OK PARI
THANK U SO MUCH
UR MOST WELCOME DEAR

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..
am loving ua story!!!
its simply awesome!!!
chap 2!!
so small the update is 😭
am really sorry for late comment!!
exam tha isliye !!
aweee!!! waiting for next update!!!!!

THANK YOU
SORRY DEAR
IT'S OK NO NEED SORRY
YEAH I M UPDATING SOON

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: nature2
Update soon 😉

SURE..😛

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: shanya8
Sorry sorry sorry saleem late ho gayi sorry plz... :'(
Now time 4 ur lovely ff di is It u only my saleem omg wow yr just can't believe u know ere 1st meet was awesome n second meet 2 lolz love it my saleem plz plz update soon n gussa nah hona sorry n haa itna chota update qq huh any ways it was awesome so now gv big wala update kk

IT'S OK ANARKALI NO NEED TOO SORRY WIFEY...:)
THANK YOU SO MUCH 4 COMPLIMENT ANARKALI
AWEEE...U LIKED IT I M GALD DEAR WOW
YEAH YEAH YEAH I M NOT ANGRY DEAR SO RELEAX
HAYEEE U LIKED BOTH MEEET THANKS
SORRY YAR CHOTA UPDATE U KNOW MY CONDITION
THANK YOU OK AB BIG WALA UPDATE PAKKA

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..
its beautiful!!
coz of my exams am not able to comment regularly dear!!
am sorry for that!!!
but am loving it!!
once my exams gets over i will comment regularly
love ua work dear!!

THANKS
IT'S OK DEAR NO NEED 4 SORRY
THANKS AGAIN
OHH YEAH PLSS THANKS
LOVE UR COMMENT DEAR

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

NOTE-GUYS THIS UPDATE I DEDICATE TO MY 3 SPECIAL FIRENDS...!!
1ST-MY CHOTI CUTE LITTLE SIS MAHAM SHE IS BECOME A DAZZLER SHE CHANGE HER COLOUR SO SPECIALLY THIS UPDATE 4 YOU MAHAM PLS WISH HER..
2ND-MY STORY BEST READER N MY BEST FIREND ON DEK FORUM ONLY THAT'S WAY MAHI WAY MY FIREND MAHIMA (MAHI)
3RD-DEK NEW MEMBER N MY NEW BEST FIREND PARI MY SWEETY PARI (RASHMI_PARI)

both got up immediatly manyata embrass she saw only floor not him he smirk n said

uday-u want to hug me again
manyata-never i m not mad n listen this is a co-insident nothing else
uday-really nothing something between you n mw
manveer-afcores

[he said all lines on smirk n she rolled her eyes]

uday-ok miss fatty
manyata-dont you dare to call me fatty
uday-really i dont think so
manyata-look mr

[he intrupts]

uday-where u want i see??

[his eyes seeing her all body manyata moth is open like O]

uday-uff not again bye miss fatty

[he start running another way n she boiling her anger n moved]

after 2 weeks manyata still dont know uday is boss n now she is settled n being hardworking try only concertrat her work she reached the office n today is office big meeting day all reached on meeting room manyata also sit sudden manyata thought
*where is mr.attitude he is a manager?? kaam chor kahi ka*
sudden other company boss mr.abex come fro newyork specially deal wid company n manyata make the presentation...😉😉

abex-wat is this where is the company boss i m come there specially mr.
someone intrupts
someone-me here
manyata turn her chair n saw this person she shocked her tongue stuck she wooried angry shocked mix reaction uday saw her n smirl an evil smirk...she lost on her thoughts uday come close to her both feel all is steel like stop😉😉sudden air between both n her hair is flying on her face uday again smirk took his hands on her checks n took her hairs on his back ear both lost..eachother

but sudden angries abex..😡😡intrupts
abex-mr.uday ??
both come to sense n seprate fastly
uday-hello
both hand shake
uday-so miss manyata plss show ur presentation
lights off manyata show full presentation very sweetly n like talented all shocked n she give uday many shocks uday thought..*wow she is brilliant she is so talented but i m not thinking this idea den how she think this good hat's of you miss faty*
all start clapping uday to his sence n say
uday-weldone miss manyata
abex-very nice deal is done
all office members happy n hug manyata give wishes n go out side now here is only manyata uday n abex n abex n uday talking manyata saw n rolled her eyes she also try to moved but abex stop her...!!!

abex-nice presentation manyata
manyata-thank you so much sir
abex-u look very nice in red colour
manyata-ohh thank you so much
abex-ok den it's already late mr.uday bye cya soon
uday-yeah we will cya tommorow
both hand shake n little hug eachother...
abex-bye manyata
manyata-byee
abex huged her manyata little shocked n abex now go(finally kamina han abex)

uday-so fatty why u shocked n u know u stood up in AC den ya pasina kaisa??
manyata-hmm
uday-hyaa sexy i m talking to you
manyata-nothing

she try to move but sudden she feel she blocked he held her arms tightly n pinned her to the wall uday go towards her ear n whispered...

uday-something something
his lips touch her ear she feel his touches n she breathing heavily
manyata-nothing nothing
uday-really really??
manyata-yes yes
uday-shocked shocked
manyata-no no no
uday-sure sure?
manyata-afcores afcores
uday-faty faty
manyata-who who??
uday-you you
manyata-ahan
n both bursted of laughing like hehheh😆

n den uday her beauty hold her hands n pinned her hands on the wall she embrass confuse but after few mins she also lost on his chocalate brown eyes uday kissed her forehead den checks n he go towards her lips...😳

and tabhi chapter end 😆
we reached too end guys it's so long i knew
so i also want a long comments😉😉
i weill update soon ok guys
precap-manveer passinatly romance☺️
guys enjot this update love you
res not allowed u give res den update delay 4 many days😡😡😡
bye all hugs take care
cya soon

😛AYESHA😛

Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 12 years ago

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

THANK YOU

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sonu/ sonali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

awesome ayshu loved the third chapter it was mind blowing omg so now manyata knows uday is the boss and loved the scene between manveer u were making me blush i really like the precap and now cant wait for the next part so update soon and thanks for the pm in advance since i read the part before u sent the pm lol

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