taarey os: kaise tere khud arzi [no pms]

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay guys I know I am inactive but still I couldn't stop myself after the mindblowingly kharab episode of d3 episode .. I had high expectations after that scene but it didn't happen so I thought of writing it down...it will be really short but I hope you will enjoy my venture and this will be fully dedicated to my friend shanu... happy birthday re... one more thing I won't be sending pms for this maybe later when I get the time. So here is presenting my hopes which were crushed by palki


"Mein jaa rahi hoon... iss college se aur iss city se humesha ke liye... "

Reality hit him like a bolt of lightning.

It couldn't be possible could it? how Can taani leave? She can't... she won't... he hoped and prayed it was a dream... that he would wake up and everything would be fine..

"I am going back to jodhpur...all the formalities are over. "

he noticed every word of hers. How effortlessly it came out. He saw her lips moving and words streaming out but nothing made sense.. he even noticed beads of water exiting her eyes but wondered if it meant anything.

He got up with a jolt. An angry jerk. She couldn't do this to him.

"How Can you be so selfish taani! you think everything revolves around you...no...there are others too!"

now Rey could see her soft expression covering into something more...

"Others? Who? You mean the guy who broke my heart and the mended it only to break it again.. the guy who I Can never trust again or the guy who thought he Can be the one who makes decisions for me or maybe even that guy who decided I was too hopeless to even talk to me about anything! That guy?"

Taanis tears were now hot with rage. And as for Rey her words hit him in all the right places...all this time get was engulfed in self pity ...about how much he loved her and how she didn't love him back and even how selfish she was for not seeing his sacrifice.. now he knew she wasnt being selfish it was all him...
he was too selfish to notice her pain too selfish to see what he did to her.. self pity have way to guilt which pressed down on his heart mercilessly.. suddenly he realized that if it was anyone's fault...it was his.

Done..sorry for the torture but this is my version of what should have happened thanks for reading and shanu..hope you liked your gift...and those who haven't wished her please do. Take care and keep smiling guys

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..Shanae.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res :D

Unres...

Wow angel! Amazing OS... Loved it alot! And i too wish something like this happened... Was disappointed they didn't develop on that scene :(
Really loved ur version of it!
Love u! Muaah!
❤️
Edited by Shanae_Diamonds - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I ws utterly dispntd wit d abrupt end of dat hearty-convo scn of TR.Rdng ur os,a sigh of relief! Its truly d best way wch CVs cud hv shwn.Well,u hv pend it dwn wndrfuly dr.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os...
bt it ws too short
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OS chota tha but kaafi accha tha ... Taani's dialouge was amazing !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey angle its awsum os yaar
Grt work
Edited by Ayesha05 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww, that was soo sad, but I understand u needed to get ur frustration all out loll

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