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Posted: 12 years ago



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neel11

lovely update waitinggg



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swetaaga20

Lovely update... 😊 Was waiting for it since long time... šŸ˜‰



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

tarazan wala line was amzing
wonderful




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

when are you updating



Not at all getting time yaar..i will update asap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
THANK YOU ALL...
I KNOW I HAVE NOT YET REPLIED TO UR PMS AND M SORRY FOR IT BUT I AM SERIOUSLY NOT GETTING TIME TO COME ONLINE FOR A LONG TIME.
I HAVE LOST TRACK OF ALL UR FFS BUT I AM TRYING TO COPE UP WITH THEM.
I AM SORRY I HOPE U ALL UNDERSTAND 😊
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CHAPTER 19
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RED=FLASHBACK
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"Nupur betho."

"haan."

Saying it she carefully sat on his bike.

Mayank was slowly driving the bike while Nupur was lost in her chain of thoughts.

They had just covered a little distance when Mayank stopped his bike in front of a place where some stalls were standing.

"Mayank yahan kyun roka?"

"Wo Nupur ek kaam karo zara utar jao."

"Kyu?"

Nupur immediately asked.

"Utro to baba"

"Thik ache."

Saying this she got down.

"Nupur mujhe do batein kehni hai."

Mayank said while taking off his helmet.

"Bolo."

"Pehli baat ghari ghari Bengali mat bola karo mujhe samajh nahi ata."

Nupur laughed at it and said

"ok.."

"Aur ye ki please kuch khalo tumhe bhook lagi hogi subah se tumne kuch nahi khaya."

"Nahi Mayank main theek hun ghar ja kar kha lungi."

"Nahi Nupur dekho main keh raha hoon na kha lo."

"No its ok Mayank."

"Nahi tumhe khana parega because tum mere saath ayi ho isliye."

"Tumhare saath to kya…"

Before Nupur could add more Mayank placed his fingers on her lips and leaned down to her face and gently whispered

"Nupur I know subah se tum tensed ho about Rhea par please kha lo todha sa mere liye aur bhook mujhe bhi bohot lagi hai aur aj to maa bhi late se ayegi.Please."

Nupur couldn't reply as she was lost in him and his words.

Butterflies fluttered in her stomach when he came close and gently whispered in her ears ,and as he did so shivers ran down her spine and she found herself in a very different world with a different feeling and different a Nupur.

Just at that instance, she just felt like listening to him and not replying ,she felt like going close to him and be there.

Nupur, who was lost in her thoughts was brought back by a tough voice

"Nupur chalein?"

"Ha-a-a-n"

She said while shrugging her thoughts aside.

Nupur and Mayank had some chaat and now they headed to grab an ice cream for themselves.

As they were moving Mayank's phone rang

"Nupur tum ruko main ata hoon do minute ok?"

"yup"

Nupur was just standing there with her hands crossed and was looking here and there , when a guy came and stood just next to her.

Nupur felt uncomfortable so she moved away but the guy again came and stood next to her.

Again Nupur moved and the guy again came close to her.

Nupur felt something fishy and hence she shouted loudly

"Kya hai?"

"Kuch nahi bas apse baat karni thi."

The guy said while coming more close to her.

"Ab karli na Niklo yahan se chalo phuto."

"Aaaeee tameez se baat kar samjhi na."

Saying this the guy held Nupur's wrist tightly.

"Haat choro."

Nupur said while getting worried and tensed.

"Nahi chora toh kya karlegi."

The guy said while laughing.

"Wo kuch kare na kare main tujhe zinda nahi chorunga samjhe."

Nupur turned her face and her tension reduced.

It was Mayank so obviously she had nothing to worry about now.

"Tu kya karelega be."

"Dekhna chahta hai?"

Mayank said with anger completely visible in his eyes and voice.

"Dikha bachu."

The guy Nupur's hand with a jerk and moved forward to hit Mayank .

The duo soon got into a terrible brawl with Mayank dominating.

With two or three punches on his face the muscular man was found on ground in an unconscious manner.

"Chalen Madam."

"Mayank."

"Haan"

"tumhe chot to nahi ayi?"

"Nahi Nupur chalo ab chal te hai ok?"

"Are you sure Mayank?"

Nupur asked with concern.

"Yes baba."

They both sat down and moved towards Nupur's house.

Mayank was casual though he had got a bit hurt whereas Nupur was all confused.

She loved the way Mayank protected her , assured her a lot of things, supported her when everyone else was against her and most importantly never tried hurting her. She had found a good friend in him and he had certainly occupied a place in her heart. Nupur thinking about all of it had a continuous smile on her face and dint even realize when they reached home.

After bidding him she moved towards her house with a broad smile on her face.

Naye-naye naina mere dhoonde hain
Dar-badar kyun tujhe

She turned just to see him reversing his bike and smiled.


Naye-naye manzar yeh takte hain
Iss kadar kyun mujhe

She smiled and started turning around.


Zara-zara phoolon pe jhadne laga dil mera
Zara-zara kaanton se lagne laga dil mera

She touched the flowers kept in the garden and smiled lovingly and then realized that people were watching her so she immediately ran from there.

Main pareshaan pareshan pareshaan pareshaan
Aatishein woh kahaan
Main pareshaan pareshan pareshaan pareshaan
Ranjishein hain dhuaan haan..


she entered the house and while smiling and dancing a bit with her mom, moved to her room and sat in front of the dressing table.

Be-baat khud pe marne lagi hoon
Marne lagi hoon
Bebaak aahein bharne lagi hoon
Bharne lagi hoon

She sang while combing her hair and finding herself really attractive.


Chaahat ke cheete hai, khaare bhi meethe hai
Main kya se kya ho gayi
Zara-zara fitrat badalne laga dil mera
Zara-zara kismat se ladne laga dil mera

She sang while spraying the water from her water spray bottle.


Main pareshaan pareshan pareshan pareshaan
Kaisi madhoshiyaan...
Main pareshaan pareshaan pareshaan pareshaan
Mastiyaan Mastiyaan...

She sang while getting engrossed in the song.

Main pareshaan pareshan pareshaan pareshaan
Aatishein woh kahaan
Main pareshaan pareshan pareshaan pareshaan
Ranjishein hain dhuaan haan..

Singing she lied on her bed and fell into deep slumber while smiling.

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HOPE U ALL LIKE IT😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow its beautiful update
as a Bangladeshi i loved when nupur use bengali langiage- lekin ye mayank bhi na!! use Bengali sikha do plz..LOL
mayank saved Nupur - hmm akhir HERO jo hai...

awesome update dear- keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nupur loved mayanks caring attitude and she was happy for their frship.
beautiful part
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really like this part ..
nice update

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