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tasnim. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved mayur a lot
do cont scene
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updt
loved mayank caring nature..
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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4 pming me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

wow its beautiful update
as a Bangladeshi i loved when nupur use bengali langiage- lekin ye mayank bhi na!! use Bengali sikha do plz..LOL
mayank saved Nupur - hmm akhir HERO jo hai...


awesome update dear- keep it up


Hehe tym lagega mayank ko bengali sikhne me
Thanks :)
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanks :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you all 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 20
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Nupur got up from bed and gave a broad smile after thinking about last night. Just to drive away the thoughts she hurriedly got up from bed and started looking for a dress.

"Di tum uth gayi?"

Gunjan called her from behind.

"Yes.Acha batana Gunjan kya pahenu."

"Di kuch bhi pahenlo."

"Nahi Gunjan aj kuch special pahenna hai."

"Kyu di?Fresher's party to kal hai na"

Gunjan asked while giving a confused look.

"Haan par.."

Nupur kept quiet after that and slowly bit her lower lip and started looking for a dress again.

"Par kya di?"

"Nahi bas aise hi Gunjan."

"Acha di mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi."

"Abhi nahi Gunjan mujhe late ho raha hai."

"But sun to lo di."

"Raat me haan Gunjan raat me."

Saying this Nupur took out a dress and went inside the washroom to change.

"Di main kab se tum se baat karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon."

Seeing that Nupur dint even bother about her talks,Gunjan moved out of the room murmuring something to herself. ---

Nupur was waiting for Mayank in the college. She wore a beautiful light pink frock churidaar with elegent make up. She looked beautiful and different, exactly as she wanted to look. She dint know why was it that she wanted to look good ,all she knew was that she wanted to look good and catch attention of that one person.

Nupur had been waiting for Mayank for more than 2 hours but he was no where to be seen

. "Kahan rehgaya yeh Mayank.Uff." She was said to herself and then started moving out of the practise room. But then she bumped into someone and fell on the floor. Nupur got up and started screaming while cleaning the dust from her dress and not looking at the person in front

"Andhe ho dekh ke nahi chal sakte ankhe hai ya aloo?pure kapde gande kar diye Stupid"

Saying this she looked at the guy standing in front. He was smiling while showing off his dimples.

"Mayank tum?"

"Haan main. "

"Bye Mayank mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni."

"Are sorry main jaan bujh nai giraya tumhe."

"Mujhe koi baat nahi sunni Mayank."

Saying this she started moving.

"Nupur practise nahi karna kya?"

He followed her while waiting for her to reply.

"Nupur iss baat ke liye itna gussa. Are I am sorry Nupur age se dekh ke chalunga." He said while smiling.

"Dekho Mayank mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni please jao yaha se."

Nupur said while turning towards him and after completing she again turned away and waved her hand to say hello to Shruthi and moved towards her after giving a dirty look to Mayank.

"Nupu..." Mayank just nodded his in disbelief and gave a sigh without realising that Nupur was angry because he was late and not because he made her fall.

Mayank was walking when Samrat joined him. "Dude what happened?Itne dukhi kyu lag rahe ho?"

"Are wo Nupur mujhse takra gayi aur gir gayi maine sorry par fir bhi gussa ho ke chali gayi." Mayank said sadly.

"Dude baat zarur kuch aur hai girne se shayad hi wo gussa ho.Tune reluctantly sorry bola?"

"Nahi."

"Tune jaan bhooj ke use giraya."

"Bakwas na kar."

"Tu late aya?" Mayank became silent for a minute

"Bol na." "Haan yaar main late hoon."

"Dekha Samrat ne kaise jhat se pata laga liya."

"Thanks yaar."

Saying this Mayank started running

"Your welcome."

Samrat shouted with a smile.

Mayank went on looking for Nupur, asked a few about her and finally found her in the canteen,sitting alone. He entered and sat next to her .Seeing Mayank Nupur took a deep sigh and got up to move away but Mayank held her wrist and made her collide with his chest.

"Mayank mujhe choro." Nupur said while trying to escape.

"Pehle meri baat suno."

"Mujhe tumhari baat nahi sunni."

"Shhh." He said while placing his finger on her lips.

Nupur got a bit uncomfortable as everyone was watching them but Mayank was fine with it. They were just at an inch away from each other, so close that their breath could be felt .

"Nupur I am sorry I am late kyu ki main Rhea ko dekhne gaya tha aur wo kafi pain me thi to main thori dair waha ruk gaya."

Saying this he removed his finger from her lips in hope of a reply.

"Par tum mujhe.." Getting what she was about to say Mayank interrupted in between "I know mujhe tumhe inform karna chahye tha par main nahi kar paya mujhse galti hui hai i agree aur maaf kardo is baar Nupur agli baar se nahi hoga I am sorry aur maafi magne wale ko to zarur maaf kar dena chahye ."

He said while smiling Nupur too responded with a smile.

They both were so lost in each other that they dint realise that all eyes were on them and that they were so close with Mayank's hand on her waist.

"Waise aaj bohot alag aur ahi lag rahi ho."

Mayank said while noticing a change in her.

Nupur just lowered her gaze as she felt shy and her face flushed with red colour.

"Itna kyu sharma rahi ho maine tumse Mrs.Sharma banne ke liye nahi kaha hai." He said while chuckling.

Nupur hit him on his chest and they both laughed.

Just then Sonia interrupted as she dint like what was happening. "Mayank." They both parted and akwardness filled the atmosphere inside the canteen.

"Ye kya ho raha tha."

"Kya?" Mayank asked.

"Jo bhi ho raha tha theek nahi tha."

Mayank just gave a confused look and said "Nupur practise karna hai chalo."

Nupur silently followed him and realised what exactly happened in the canteen. She realised how people must have intepreted it. She went restless and irritated. She thought she should have stepped back. With all weird thoughts in her mind they moved inside.

The entire day they were extremely busy in practising. Nupur had forgotten about morning and was focussing on the performance. While practising,time to time she getting distracted due to his good looks and adorable nature.

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Shruthi was walking towards the canteen when she heard someone talk over the phone "Nahi Rhea ab to pakka kuch karna parega the situation is going out of hand . Ab Mayank ko sahi aur galat ka batana parega. Mere pas ek plan hai tum bas sham tak wait karo main tumse akar baat karungi."

Shruthi saw Sonia turning around so she decided to move away. Shruthi became worried and when she was walking she met Gunjan so shedecided to talk to her.

"Hey Gunjan."

"Hi"

"Tumne Nupur se baat ki?" She asked just to enquire.

"Nahi di se baat hi nahi ho pa rahi. Main jab bhi baat karne jati hoon di meri baat ko taal deti hai. I am very very worried about her. Agar di ko kuch hua to..." She said while trembling.

Seeing her so upset and worried Shruthi decided not to tell her about Sonia's conversation. "Dekho dont take tension tum araam se Nupur se baat karna ok?" Gunjan just nodded her head and parted..

Shruthi was worried for her friend. She herself wanted to talk to Nupur but she thought Nupur might take it in a wrong way.

hope you like it 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice and late update.
I so hate this rhea and os k chamchey.
Thnx for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago


thanks :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Irum.

very nice and late update.

I so hate this rhea and os k chamchey.
Thnx for PM



thanks :)Sorry exams arahe hai na..
even i hate them hehe..

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