The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 43

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful song
loved maaneet moments
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

Was this update too short?? or i was too lost in the chapter???

Aww! Thanks..😃
But for me,It ended very soon,,, I was enjoying those blissful moments with them ...😊
So geet was actually bothered with his sunglasses...!!! No matter how much you try to control,it's impossible to control the love..!!! His presence,his attention matters to her a lot..!!!😉😃
Yes when someone gives you attention as a beautiful lady you don't notice as much as someone taking that attention away. Same for Geet. I need her to start interacting with him a little bit so it was necessary for her to walk in his shoes.
Pinky,the protective sister cum friend,I love her protectiveness for Geet..Though her words pained maan a little because of her judgemental and suspecting attitude...!!!
I totally loved it,when he said,he wanted to remove thorns from her path,if he can't give her roses..!! His love is far more mature than his age..!!!!😊
His character has had to mature early in life but his stubbornness to never leave her is appealing.
Whole party sequence was cute and beautiful..For first time,geet had opened up to him a bit..He was cutely naughty by not taking the food himself,so geet could serve him..!! I thought,geet would not feed him cake,but she did.! She kept her hand on his shoulder during the bike ride..!!!
Adi and Pinky being together around her too makes a difference.
I really admire the way You have portrayed this trust for maan building in her,so beautifully with these mundane ,small and natural things,avi..!!!👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.
Thank you so much for giving this blissful chapter dear...!!!
waiting eagerly for next...

PS- music selection was perfect...!!!!😃

Thanks Palin for your support. I am glad you are enjoying it.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

it is sooo dreamy dinner date...though they were not alone...he was completely immersed in her ! it felt like I am actully watching them... beautiful ! and both songs are my favourites...I remember writing down the song pal pal dil ke pass and byhearting it...and the vm...just brought back many wonderful memories...donot know why this maaneet magic never even lessens...a little bit too...thank you soo much ...

So true... We are all crazy Maaneetians...😃
Glad you are liking it..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yappingduck

first i must compliment u for ur song selections..they add value to ur updates...
somebody is missing someone's beautiful eyes...goggles se kisi ki khubsurat ankhen chip gayi hai jo...

i loved pinky, she being protective of geet and confronting maan, asking him his intentions towards geet bluntly... quite gutsy she is

and then the dinner..those sweet cute moments were priceless... loving it... a lovely update

Thanks Reva...
I am a music mad person so like Dev has background music, something is always playing in my head too😆
Geet is missing the attention he gives her and also now she realizes how he must feel when she does not give him a look.
Glad you are liking it.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww.. Geet was cutely cribbing abt Maan wearing goggles becoz of eye infection.. so she can't see him looking at her.. Cute Maneet moments... Nice update.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

Avi jhappisss...

lovely mindblowing updates yar...

Sona...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 25 - loved how pinky is concerned about geet and warned maan ..may be she guessed what is going on in maan's mind

lovely dinner...and both couples get time to spent with their loved ones

Thanks Madhuri.. Glad you are liking it..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -jaanleva-

Their sweet innocent romance is so endearing! Pinky and Adi are unknowingly (or perhaps knowingly?) bringing them closer...


Unknowingly..
Nice to see that Geet is also missing his enchanting eyes, her feelings are growing 😳
Yes, she is missing him.. It's Maan after all 😉
Maan's precious moments with his lady love are always such a delight to read, he gets more romantic with every update! 😆

Update soon Avi 🤗

Thanks Fozia. Glad you are liking it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jannat89

wow dear
awesome update
maneet was too good
thanx 4 d pm
waiting 4 next part.. update soon ❤️

Glad you are liking it...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

😃

awesome part...loved pinky's concern for geet though i dint like the way she blasted Maan...
She was being a loving and concerned friend...
Anyways glad that Pinky came to know about him...hope she tells Geet that it was Maan who send all those notes her way...😊😊

If I can't give her roses, I want to take away the thorns before they come in her path loved this line...

Thank u..
aha now she understood how he myt have felt...thanx to the glasses tht he was wearing for whatever reasons😃
btw did he exactly hear what she was saying during self talk sessions?? did he come to knw that she felt bad ??
He heard the part with the mumbling. The one I marked as self thought, she did not speak so he did not hear.
slowly slowly their relation is improving...glad to see that...and bike ride , woh bhi maan ke saath....lucky geet😆

nice song Avi 😊 old songs have so much meaning in them...their lyrics speak a looot in a very simple way...😊

very interesting precap Avi...cant wait now...

But missed Dev-Istar 😳😊agar dev tara diya toh we say we miss maaneet, and ab jab maaneet diya toh missing them ryt,...😳 sowwie...cant help...

Purvi you are too much dear...😆😆
When I give Maaneet u want Dev-Istar and when I do them you want Maaneet...😆😆
Glad you are liking it..😃

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