The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part. pinky is so sweet .
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Did I tell you I Love this teenage Maaneet and their subtle progressing emotions and their hesitations and gestures wanting to do the talking even in their silence. ❤️

His eye infection did have a benefit for him ... because of it and his dark glasses hooding his soulful eyes from her she was made aware of how empty and craving she is to see and peep into those eyes that have love filled and just emotions for her . Also she came to know of how he feels when she keeps averting her gaze from him. 👏

Pinky is a true and loyal friend.. 👏 her interrogating and questioning him for her friend's benefit was true to her self and protection she feels for Geet. Maan answering and clearing her doubts through his sincerity and honest feelings were too good and high point for me in this update. 👍🏼

This inner thoughts was ❤️ "I just want to walk with her on her path. If I can't give her roses, I want to take away the thorns before they come in her path." Spoke of his pure thoughts and feelings. 😳

I so love the simplicity and beauty you associate each time while describing Geet... it makes me believe there's so much truth present in her persona that makes me love and adore her.

The whole dinner was so romantic in its own way ... there was love in the air ❤️ with such subtle description of it all... it was smooth flowing with making me live those moments with complete feeling of all that must be transpiring and all of the emotions. 👏 👏 The song added to the whole feel of the part... ❤️

Munda took advantage of her innocence and goodness for having those precious moments with her ... she had to serve him with her own hands... but then she willing gave him the cake so dreamy and love filled action that was... 😳

The bike ride, her acceptance to ride with him with trust on him by placing that hand on his shoulder was like the cherry on the cake... 😉

Do continue soon ... Thanks for updating 🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks for writing your comments though. 😃
Sometimes I get so down when I see no interest from anyone to read an update or the likes decreasing per update but it is only those that comment that make me keep on going.



i understand yaar... and for this i really salute all the ff writers... as they r not getting any reward here other than likes, comments ... and understanding this i really try to like comment as much as i can... if i left by chance... dil pe kabhi mat lena... as u and ur ff will always reamin on my stalking list

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG...let me breathe...
You used my one fo the most favourite songs...probably in my all time top 10...I just love this song and each and every wording of this song. I heard it first when I was grade 6. I still remember, writing the lyrics and remembering it by heart. Since that day I have not forgotten even a single word...
Ok...coming back to the update while humming the song...
aweosme brilliant and beautiful.
I just loved Geet's possesivenes. Yes I used word possesivenes. She doesn't realise but her mumrmuring about him hiding his eyes...OMG that was just beautiful. She has lot of responsibilites on her head but then dil to hai dil...dil ka aitbaar kya keejiye...aa gaya joh kisi pe pyaar...kya keejiye.
Pinky the protective sister. My respect for ehr just went higher and i am sure so did in Maan's eyes as well. She is a true friend.
Last but not the least the DATE...haye...kya kahoon. It is so hard to describe what I am feeling. It was his wish which came true. I could just visualise her hesitation and shyness when she served him. The little murmur in his ehart when her dupatta touched him. And then that bike ride...ufff...kya kahoon...
I am in a different world...dreaming and floating in air. Yeh update padh ke toh mera bhi mood kar raha hi ki jaake apne husband ke liye kuch special banati hoon khane mein...well that is lot of work but socha toh na...yes...awesome just awesome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Love the way the story is progressing! Maaneet's love is beautiful ! Lovely song! Geet posessive n Pinky is being protective! Amazing date! Maan happy! loved it! Superbly written! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Hi!!!
Tearing me up inside...? Kaisa hai title?






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Posted: 12 years ago
part 22/23/24/25

Awesome updates..loved it

thans for pm


Edited by Ru_21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj

Did I tell you I Love this teenage Maaneet and their subtle progressing emotions and their hesitations and gestures wanting to do the talking even in their silence. ❤️


His eye infection did have a benefit for him ... because of it and his dark glasses hooding his soulful eyes from her she was made aware of how empty and craving she is to see and peep into those eyes that have love filled and just emotions for her . Also she came to know of how he feels when she keeps averting her gaze from him. 👏

Pinky is a true and loyal friend.. 👏 her interrogating and questioning him for her friend's benefit was true to her self and protection she feels for Geet. Maan answering and clearing her doubts through his sincerity and honest feelings were too good and high point for me in this update. 👍🏼

This inner thoughts was ❤️ "I just want to walk with her on her path. If I can't give her roses, I want to take away the thorns before they come in her path." Spoke of his pure thoughts and feelings. 😳

I so love the simplicity and beauty you associate each time while describing Geet... it makes me believe there's so much truth present in her persona that makes me love and adore her.

The whole dinner was so romantic in its own way ... there was love in the air ❤️ with such subtle description of it all... it was smooth flowing with making me live those moments with complete feeling of all that must be transpiring and all of the emotions. 👏 👏 The song added to the whole feel of the part... ❤️

Munda took advantage of her innocence and goodness for having those precious moments with her ... she had to serve him with her own hands... but then she willing gave him the cake so dreamy and love filled action that was... 😳

The bike ride, her acceptance to ride with him with trust on him by placing that hand on his shoulder was like the cherry on the cake... 😉

Do continue soon ... Thanks for updating 🤗


❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Koi itni superb analysis kaise kar sakta hai...ClapClap
Every word touched my heart...Clap
hearts are very pretty...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



i understand yaar... and for this i really salute all the ff writers... as they r not getting any reward here other than likes, comments ... and understanding this i really try to like comment as much as i can... if i left by chance... dil pe kabhi mat lena... as u and ur ff will always remain on my stalking list

🤗 Thanks Lakshmi...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

OMG OMG...let me breathe...

2 OMG's in a comment for me... Avi in la la land, I know its for Maan but never mind...😆😆
You used my one fo the most favourite songs...probably in my all time top 10...I just love this song and each and every wording of this song. I heard it first when I was grade 6. I still remember, writing the lyrics and remembering it by heart. Since that day I have not forgotten even a single word...
Ok...coming back to the update while humming the song...
I was surprised how many people love it. It is one of my favs too...
awesome brilliant and beautiful.
I just loved Geet's possesivenes. Yes I used word possesivenes. She doesn't realise but her mumrmuring about him hiding his eyes...OMG that was just beautiful. She has lot of responsibilites on her head but then dil to hai dil...dil ka aitbaar kya keejiye...aa gaya joh kisi pe pyaar...kya keejiye.
She has started to accept him. Maan hai ji... aur kya chahiye..😉
Pinky the protective sister. My respect for ehr just went higher and i am sure so did in Maan's eyes as well. She is a true friend.
Last but not the least the DATE...haye...kya kahoon. It is so hard to describe what I am feeling. It was his wish which came true. I could just visualise her hesitation and shyness when she served him. The little murmur in his ehart when her dupatta touched him. And then that bike ride...ufff...kya kahoon...
I so want to go to India to have my husband ride a bike. People crave so many things and I crave weird things...😆😆
I am in a different world...dreaming and floating in air. Yeh update padh ke toh mera bhi mood kar raha hi ki jaake apne husband ke liye kuch special banati hoon khane mein...well that is lot of work but socha toh na...yes...awesome just awesome...

Kabhi bana dena... who knows he will start singing for you..😉
Such a positive comment... If only you know how much I scrap before I dare to post.
Thanks Ritzy😃

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