The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 42

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

u portray maaneet in such a dreamy way that i just keep on thinking about them...

a single glance, a single touch, just sharing a dinner with a loved one, ... i hadnt felt all this to be sooo romantic before...
The magic of first love and the special moments, the anticipation, everything meaning something to each other is what I am trying for with them. Glad you are liking it.
i loved how maans dreams are coming true... the way he had a dinner served by geet and with geet is really lovely...

and the song... hayee... romance jhalak raha hai aaj har jagah... tumhare update, pic, song sab main...

Shukriya Lakshmi.. It is hard to write of quiet love and romance because they have no dialogues but I like this sweet quiet love.

i know i didnt comment for the last part... sowiiee... being lazy these days... baarish main ungliyaan zyaada hilaane ka mann nahi kartha!😉any ways i loved our istar-dev part too... especially the slap... but am wondering about taras past now... even happy to see a patient dev ready to wait and even understanding...

will be waiting for the next...

Thanks for writing your comments though. 😃
Sometimes I get so down when I see no interest from anyone to read an update or the likes decreasing per update but it is only those that comment that make me keep on going.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

AWESOME UPDATE LOVED HIS CONVERSATION WITH PINKY LOVED THAT SHE JUST WANTS TO PROTECT HER FRIEND LOVED HOW GEET WAS FEELING ATTRACTED TO HIM YET SHE DOES NOT UNDERSTAND THE FEELING LOVED THE UPDATE THANKS FOR THE PM


Thanks Kathrina... Glad you are liking it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

ahhh so she wonders why he has the glasses
woh kya hai naa he has eye infection
awww she was feeling odd that he wasnt looking at her
well he was doing that
he was noticing her more due to the glasses
ahhh so pinky caught onto the fact that he gave her his notes
and wanted to know what he wanted
well nothing to be frank
because he knows that she has worries as it is
and he would never add onto them no matter what
well at least pinky was satisfied that he wont play with geet feelings or anything like that
inn dono kaa chori se jo pyaar ho raha hai naa i just love it
awww they had dinner together
true that asi and pinky were there but he did have the chance to be seated next to her and enjoy dinner
and what appropriate song naa
hmmm so wonder what the slap to dev will bring about
cheers for pm

One more Maaneet for Aashu's b'day then Dev-Tara...
Thanks for the support..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

CONGRATS FOR THE 25TH


PINKY WANTED TO KNOW MAAN'S INTENTION TOWARDS GEET AS SHE KNOWS GEET IS TOO INNOCENT
SHE COULD READ IN HIS EYES THAT HE WILL NEVER HURT HER
AND ADI 'S BIRTHDAY GAVE MAAN AN EXCUSE TO HAVE DINNER WITH GEET AND DROP HER HOME

Thanks Punam..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Beautiful Part Avi 👏
Just Simply Loved It 😃
The song U choosed is 1 of My Fav 😳
n this Stanza

Tum sochungi kyun itna main tumse pyaar karu

tum samjhogi deewana main bhi ikraar karu

Deewano ki yeh baatein deewane jaante hai

jalne main kya mazaa hai parwana jaante hai

tum yuhi jalate rehna aa aa kar khwaabon mein

Pal pal dil ke paas tum rehti ho

literally I was singing it with the Update 😆

Loved Silent talk b/w Them 😳

Awesome Jaani 😉

Continue Soon 😃

I had my fingers crossed that Ritzy or Reet were not going to use the song too..
I am so glad you liked it..
You were singing with it...😆😆 I played it non-stop when I wrote.😆😆
Dono same hai..😆
🤗Sheen
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Coming Attractions 😳



Enjoy Ur Party 😳😉

I did..😆
Coming attractions for which story? SOL, right...😃
Tu Aashu se apna update kyun DEMAND nahi kar rahi hai...😕
Wo tujhe na thodi kahegi...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks Mannu. Glad you are liking it.😊

kahe ka listen.. ab tak mera ek bhi BF nahi hai u know.. ek to ho sirf ek..😉😉


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

kahe ka listen.. ab tak mera ek bhi BF nahi hai u know.. ek to ho sirf ek..😉😉



Ek kyun Rab kare bohut ho but special Prince ke liye time lagta hai na Mannu...
baki sab frogs hote hai...😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 25
awesome part dear...
lovely...
only if Maan gets a whiff of Geet's thoughts...
Pinky is very protective of Geet...
that was so lovely dear...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Congrats in reaching twenty-five chapters!

The update was so sweet. Maan's silent support of Geet, and Pinky's interrogation of Maan, Geet's accepting Maan's offer to drop her home.. All of it added up to a wonderful update! It was so...nice. I know that probably sounds like a little adjective, but it's true.

Thank you for the update! :)

Krishna🤗 Thanks!
Glad you are liking it..😃

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