The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 45

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Love the way the story is progressing! Maaneet's love is beautiful ! Lovely song! Geet posessive n Pinky is being protective! Amazing date! Maan happy! loved it! Superbly written! update soon

Originally posted by: Ru_21

part 22/23/24/25

Awesome updates..loved it

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

<font color="#660066">Aww.. Geet was cutely cribbing abt Maan wearing goggles becoz of eye infection.. so she can't see him looking at her.. Cute Maneet moments... Nice update..
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Thanks Teju 😃

First of all, congratulations on the 25th chapter! Up until this chapter, the story has been such an enjoyable read that I want the number of chapters to go much beyond the double of the mark it has reached. 😳

What a lovely chapter! It had me smiling through and through!

The tiny steps that Geet is taking towards accepting her feelings, the way she has started to consider how she is feeling and why and how Maan must feel when she won't look at him, it feels so natural. It feels real. And the credit for that goes to you, Avi! 👏

Waise how ajeeb she must have felt - embarrassed probably - if she had known that behind those dark glasses, he was observing her sneaking glances at him. 😆

I'm glad that at least Pinky now knows it was Maan who had sent the notes to Geet. Even though I did not like the way she was being all negative while questioning Maan, I do know that it was her sisterly worry for Geet that was speaking. Since she has clarified it from Maan and hopefully satisfied her concerns, she might even be helpful in making Geet befriend Maan. 😳

What really had me loving this Maan even more was his thought of walking with her on her path. He is so selfless, not expecting much from her yet he is ready to give her his all. Love him! ❤️

The song is nice. I've heard it before and I like the emotions it holds...

Finally one of his wishes has come true! But I can bet this is just one of the many that are to follow. 😳

Even when Geet has apparently been ignorant towards him, she has noticed the way he dresses, the way he looks like, the way he behaves and now it has been confirmed that no matter what Maan feels, no matter that he believes he is just another person in the crowd for her, she has accepted to herself that he stands out.

The dinner was a treat, to say the least! Maan thoda toh chaalu ho hi gaya hai, with all that waiting out for her to serve him. And she didn't disappoint him. 😳

It is definitely some progress in the one-sided 'hi' bond they share that she didn't protest to him dropping her, rather she sat with him in silent acceptance. Like Maan, I too hope for this time to never end but I'll believe that this day which gave Maan so many memories to cherish, will end to give way to a new day and even more memories to be made.

Loved it Avi! Eagerly waiting for more! 😃

Originally posted by: dqno1

I had my fingers crossed that Ritzy or Reet were not going to use the song too..

I am so glad you liked it..

You were singing with it...😆😆 I played it non-stop when I wrote.😆😆

Dono same hai..😆

🤗Sheen

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Originally posted by: dqno1

I did..😆

Coming attractions for which story? SOL, right...😃

Tu Aashu se apna update kyun DEMAND nahi kar rahi hai...😕

Wo tujhe na thodi kahegi...😃

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Locket nahi ho sakta kia 😉😆

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

😳
Locket nahi ho sakta kia 😉😆

Abhi toh chori chupke se pyar ho raha hai 😳

SOL mein bol na Aashu ko 😃

SOL address tho woh bhol gayi hai