The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 41

Avi jhappisss...

Part 24 - lovely part avi...loved cute dev...his bodnign with kids also amazed nt...omg he kissed nt thinking it was a dream and got a slap...he too could saw a diff nt...

Part 25 - loved how pinky is concerned about geet and warned maan ..may be she guessed what is going on in maan's mind

Maan could tell pinky wht he wants...hain na...bt he didnt...will pinky tell geet abt it...lvd th dinner party n their silent lv..perfect song selection...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

Their sweet innocent romance is so endearing! Pinky and Adi are unknowingly (or perhaps knowingly?) bringing them closer...

Read chapter 24. Shukar hai! 😃

Loved the songs you used in here. Actually, Bheegi Bheegi reminds of GC's performance in JDJ but it suited here too.

So the weather has started conspiring against Dev and Naintara and testing their restraints too! 😆

The picture that a laughing and smiling Naintara presented as she danced to the rain's tunes made me wonder how old she actually is. Has it been mentioned earlier?

So not only the shy and silent Maan but also the flamboyant and lively Dev as well adores kids. I like that! 😃

A little of how these two had come face to face earlier has been revealed but is that all there is to it? I have a few questions regarding them but I won't pester you with them, rather I'll wait for the story to unfold.

I like the way these two are getting to discover the real person each of them is under their names. He is seeing the new Naintara who smiles and who laughs while she is seeing a side of his of which she already knows yet she couldn't help but be softened up by that sight. Her thought about the picture perfect family when she saw him at the airport for the first time was something that surprised me a bit. I guess I was putting her on a different plane altogether but she's just a young girl who has dreams and desires for her future. I sincerely hope (and I know!) her dreams and what she saw in that reflected picture becomes her reality.

One question. Dev was going to fly if they had reached Delhi just the way it was planned but he only had one track and one shirt in that bag? Was he just going wherever to touch the ground and come back? 😆 No offence intended of course!

I felt sad for Naintara when she whimpered in her sleep. True, we can be the toughest of mankind when we're awake and our thoughts and our bodies are in our control but the real hurt and the real vulnerability that we have in ourselves only comes out when we're asleep... I'm glad that Dev was there to witness this moment but Naintara won't be glad about that. She won't be glad about him seeing her vulnerable or him being there on the same bed as her or about him kissing her like that. He's already got his reward for it. 😆

Now it's going to be AWKWARD between them! 😆

And last but not the least, the first song you used became prophetic for Dev. He will never forget this barsaat ki raat when he met an anjaan haseena. 😳

I can't believe you updated twice in just four days! Will get back with my views on the next chapter as soon as I read it. 😊

updated comment on pg 63

Originally posted by: Onir

Did I tell you I Love this teenage Maaneet and their subtle progressing emotions and their hesitations and gestures wanting to do the talking even in their silence. ❤️

His eye infection did have a benefit for him ... because of it and his dark glasses hooding his soulful eyes from her she was made aware of how empty and craving she is to see and peep into those eyes that have love filled and just emotions for her . Also she came to know of how he feels when she keeps averting her gaze from him. 👏

She is so used to him always being there that she misses him despite herself. Also she now has an idea how he feels when she does not give him any attention.

Pinky is a true and loyal friend.. 👏 her interrogating and questioning him for her friend's benefit was true to her self and protection she feels for Geet. Maan answering and clearing her doubts through his sincerity and honest feelings were too good and high point for me in this update. 👍🏼

He did not want to reveal his heart but he wants to make it clear that he won't hurt her...

This inner thoughts was ❤️ "I just want to walk with her on her path. If I can't give her roses, I want to take away the thorns before they come in her path." Spoke of his pure thoughts and feelings. 😳

I so love the simplicity and beauty you associate each time while describing Geet... it makes me believe there's so much truth present in her persona that makes me love and adore her.

I am glad everyone is liking it but considering how much I talk, writing these quiet communications makes me pull my hair... But I want them like this for now to contrast with the present DD avatar of MSK.

The whole dinner was so romantic in its own way ... there was love in the air ❤️ with such subtle description of it all... it was smooth flowing with making me live those moments with complete feeling of all that must be transpiring and all of the emotions. 👏 👏 The song added to the whole feel of the part... ❤️

Munda took advantage of her innocence and goodness for having those precious moments with her ... she had to serve him with her own hands... but then she willing gave him the cake so dreamy and love filled action that was... 😳

The bike ride, her acceptance to ride with him with trust on him by placing that hand on his shoulder was like the cherry on the cake... 😉

It is Maan after all. How can Avi deny his wishes? 😉

Do continue soon ... Thanks for updating 🤗