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!!~Tangled Love ~!!

the room was filled with darkness , it was cold and even the sky outside had been crying since a long time , it had been snowing since past three days , since the days she found out how fake his words were , how his every promise was meant to be broken and how she was fooled by his love ...and there all scattered and broken she sat down in a corner of her room hugging the teddy he had gifted her last valentime and cried her heart out , she curdled on the floor like a child and kept crying while his words echoed in her ears and every time she recalled the word , "ITS OVER" the storm got harder , her life had always been struck in a mess , she was just five when she on a day back to school she watched her mother walking out of the house in arms with another man since that very day her father had been her world but what did she do? she went against him .. he was so right but she was too blind to see what was right or wrong , she was again scattered and broken the only solution she could see was the sharp edged knife right in front of her , she got a strong grip of it and as she placed it on her nerve their was a knock at the door , she knew her dad had been waiting for her to open the door and for the very last time she battled her heart and opened the door their he stood with a moist eyes , she was aware that it was she who was responsible and she loosen her grip on the knife letting it fall down as she gave her dad the tightest hug and cried on his chest as he stroked her hair and trying consoling her by saying
it is ok we all need to fall in life it helps us to be stronger
no dad i never thought i needed anybody i mean he was everything that i wanted but dad he ,,, how could he ?
manyata life is not a fairy tale bacha their are knaves in disguise of prince charming i do understand but you need to move on
but dad i love uday how can i move on it was so easy for him he cheated on me and then just said its over how can he do we loved each other for the past five years dad
bacha LOVE is a big word for you , you are just in high school a girl of fifteen you will be trapped but do not worry your dad is there with you life is much simplier but love makes it look hard do not worry a day will come when everything will be fine and you will get your prince charming as for now the only thing we need is to get you out of this place lets go back to India
Dad we are leaving London...forever

done with the prologue
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i should or not continue?
no res post please

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Posted: 12 years ago
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~*characters sketch*~

Udayveer Singh :28
the woman loves him and he loves to party he represents the new age man; one who is self confident, efficient, cheeky and occasionally even smug. He is also extremely handsome and gives the impression of being a skirt chaser. He enjoys female company and makes no bones about the fact that he has a weakening knee effect on women. He is used to being the centre of female attention and also knows how to sustain that attention when he does receive it..success does not come easily and uday knows how to achieve it , his parents passed away when he was twenty and after that the entire buisness is being handled by him , he is one of the biggest buisness tycon with several hotels around the globe .he had every bit of it though with a very less of hard work and perserverance , he is a cassanova and their is nothing that he want and cannot claim it but their are mazzes in hair logs to same with uday ' life he has all the happiness but no one to share it , his life took a U turn since she left yes his childhood friend and his girlfriend when he broke with her that was the last time they ever met but it was only after that she was gone he realized that how important he was to her and how badly he needed in his life , but still his mind is complicated whether it was love or was just friendship maybe luck should give him another chance to find it out?

Dr Manyata Arora:25
she is warm hearted ,kind a
nd good-natured girl. This single most important thing in her life along with being a good human being is her dream to make her father, Bridgraaj Arora proud off her achievements in the medical arena. She is intelligent and modern in her outlook to life, and yet respects and represents all the core Indian values inspite of spending her 15 years in London ,She is focused on her career and doesn't get distracted. She is the reliable and responsible daughter of her parents. manyata has a high sense of justice, is simple yet smart, sensitive and compassionate. She is the star of her city , Mysore . She is always seen in salwar kameez with distinct style and look , but at a point her heart still aches for her mom , her dad was right she is again in love and this time with a right guy and they are going to engage , she is in love with ayaz

Dr Ayaz Garewal

Everybody is a doctor in his family, so he has been sent to Mysore to get real and focused. But for ayaz life is a one big PS3 game. He is never serious about anything in life and has a general disregard for everything. He didn't want to become a doctor as it takes a lot of hard work. A complete gadget freak wants to get out of this filth and go back to his high life in Udaipur. he is in deeply love with manyata and they are in this relation for two year and she is the only thing when this playboy turns matured he loves her and at any cost cannot loose her he knows about her past and want to make her future bright but , he is an overgrown temperamental kid. The shrew who needs to be tamed. But he is capable of being brilliant because with minimal effort he does well.

Manav Arora:28
he is the cousin brother of manyata and they both are extremily close , he is a doctor too , he is fun loving and very kind hearted he is always by his sister side and he is extremily possesive about her he loves his sister they are more like own and he is married to Arthi , and they had fallen in love since their college days and got married before a year they love each other very much

Arthi Arora:27
she is the sister in law of manyata she loves her like her own sister , she is a wedding planner and she is very soft spoken and sweet . she is a simple , traditional indian wife but she has her own identity too as india ' s best wedding planner and manyata bonding with her is really good like own sister


so this was the cs
other character will be coming in the further story
do hit the like button
no res post
pm send only those who add me as buddy
or those who mention it in their comment


Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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{~INDEX~}
CLICK ON THE LINK
PROLOGUE PAGE 1: 86549373
CHARACTER SKETCH PAGE 1 86549427
chapter one "the lost love" 86789215
chapter two "known stranger"
87236855
chapter three "a stolen beat "
88313112
chapter four "a helping hand"
89333479
chapter five "kiss and tell"
89944869
chapter six "happy ending" 90063073



Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yaayy
I m first to comment

Gripping Concept Annesha ...
I m loving the concept ...

Prologue and character sketch were beautifully written

I hope Fate gives another chance to Uday
Lets see what happens

Do cont ASAP

thanks for PM
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey shona...
Howz u???

Was waiting for this ss since yesterday lol...
And it was worth waiting...
As we say sabr ka phal meetha hota hai lol...
And it is the sweetest one...

The prologue was fantabulous, interesting...
Aww... just in love with ur writing...

And the cs awww... am in love with it all mah favorite telly actors...
Thanx a lot...

Waiting for the update eagerly...
Do continue soon..
And thanx for the pm...
Hugzzz
Edited by htgcute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey... U r one of my favourite writters...
And a new story from u is a treat for me...
U r such a wonderful writter...
Itni sari stories likhne ke baad bhi...
Ek story ka doosri story pe zara bhi impact nahi padta...
And this one is also very gud...
I am really waiting how the story proceeds...
How manveer meet...
Update soon...
And thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey... U r one of my favourite writters...

And a new story from u is a treat for me...
U r such a wonderful writter...
Itni sari stories likhne ke baad bhi...
Ek story ka doosri story pe zara bhi impact nahi padta...
And this one is also very gud...
I am really waiting how the story proceeds...
How manveer meet...
Update soon...
And thanx for the pm...


Awn thank you so much
but so are you
loved your update
haah paar abhi thorri sudargayi sirf 4 ss
hahahahahaha
i will try
awn no thanks my duty

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Posted: 12 years ago
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YIPEE u wrote another story
all ur stories are different from eachother
i love the titles of ur story
the prologue was lil confusing
cant understand much but i know u will reveal more
in the upcoming updates
well update it soon
and saare hansome and popular heroes in one ss
mazaa aajayega
triple dose of entertainment ashish,barun and karan
good casting lol
Edited by ZOYA_K - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hiii babyyy sister


hws u


awsssmmm prolougeee


uday ditch manyata


manyata comes to india


manyata love AYAZ (KSG)


manav and arthi arroraaa love theemmm


hope uday get his love back


and most importent manyta ayaz and manav all r docters parhako family


no thanks 4 PM


love u baby

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely concept annesha...
cont it and thanku for the PM...

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