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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz

wow awsome lovely but i feel very bad for manveer.
it's awsome lovely chapter and heart broken chapter
uday heart broken in hndred pieces why manyata do this and wat past it's lovely awsome manveer dance just fablouse and kiss scene was amazing very lovely manyata running and got accident OMG hope she will get fine why uday feel manyata accident cause of his love yar please safe our manyata and please manveer together again very painful update anni love ur this story and this part update soon awsome and thanx 4 the pm sorry 4 the late comment yar lovely awsome update soon and do pm me 4 sure really sorry 4 being late loved ur story brilliant conti asap..!!


thank you so much dear
indeed but one heart break was needed for him to regret
i will save her don't you worry
next update tomorrow

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: serat

awesome update

superb
sad for uday:(
he loves her really
seriously
awesome update
but sad too
nd
thxx for the pm


thank you so much
yes but they will be together
thankss
awn that was my duty

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

Awesome Anni manveer dance was lovely just loved it ad also the kiss... Omg poor manyata met with an accident I hope she is k... No I hope uday doesn't leave her because both need each other please update soon and thanks for the pm


thank you so much yes she is ok
awn that was my duty
will update tomorrow

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

o noo,ye accdne bhi abhi hona tha,bechara udayy!!!!!! abhi abhi to dono pass arahe the,ye kaya ho gaya,ab to uday bhi koi try nehi legaa😭😭😭 i hopee miracle ho jaaye!!!!!!😊😊


do not worry trust me saabh theek hojayeega saabh kuch
they will be together no matter what

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey di
How u? 😊
Sorry for replying so late
Wow di, amazing update 👏
Aww, poor Uday, he blames himself for Manyata's accident 😭
Felt really bad for him
N so quickly they are apart
Just when Manyata's brother was fine with Uday trying to woo Manyata
All this happens
Very eager to read next chapter
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
So sad 4 uday
he think tht he ws responsible 4 her cndition
use lagta hai ki o use hurt karta hai bt they r in love na
dance n kiss ws gr8 love it
thanks 4 pm n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey... Aneesha...
The update was fantastic...
Your description of the dance was so sweet...
You are a really nice writter... (As if there is a need to say it... everybody knows it...)...
The song was also gud... (I hope that was the song... I don't listen to ebglish songs much..)...
Haawww... Manyata ka accident...
Aur yeh kya...
Uday thinks ki yeh uski vajah se hua hai...
And now he is leaving...
Pls usko wapas le aayo...
Don't become the next Ekta Kapoor...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM...

PS: Aneesha... I think youb have not seen my comment on your update of beauty and beast... because you have neither liked it nor commented on it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey di
hey
How u? 😊
i am fine what about you
Sorry for replying so late
it is ok dear
Wow di, amazing update 👏
thank you
Aww, poor Uday, he blames himself for Manyata's accident 😭
yes he does
Felt really bad for him
dnt worry
N so quickly they are apart
they will be soon
Just when Manyata's brother was fine with Uday trying to woo Manyata
yes
All this happens
Very eager to read next chapter
will update in a minute or two
Thanks for the pm 😊
awn that was my duty
Plz update soon 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

**~!! HAPPY ENDING !!~**

The snow fell down and settled in the window , as it melted away after some time , he watched as each of the snow flakes had there own unique pattern a small smile crept in his face , he looked outside everything was decorated in the color red as the following day was Christmas , he himself had just return from an orphanage after donating clothes and toys to the poor orphan as he counted himself among them , he had no one to call as his family and he hurt the girl he loved it had been six complete months since he left manyata but her thoughts always lingered in her heart , even being far from her he could not forget her , she was there …..in his thoughts every single moment . the red signal changed into green as he started the engine he drove smoothly into the road towards his house , it was dark and covered with heavy snow on either of his side , he drove it smoothly but just then his eyes fell on a shadowy figure , before he could figure out how to stop , he pushed his accelerator hard still it failed to stop as the car banged against the figure but rather softly just brushing against her body , as he was successful in stopping the car at the right moment , he came out to see the person crumbled down on the floor , as he stretched his hands down to help her she looked up at him , the ray of light from his headlight hit her face softly , as he stood there , a lone tear escape his eyes as he was certain this was another illusion of him , one he never want to wake up from , but little did he know his dream had turned into reality as she stood there , time froze for them as the snow softly settled down on there body after six month she was there right in front of him as all he could do was mumble softly

Manyata

While as soft smile placed on her face and she said

Hey uday

In a rather cool and calm voice he stole gazes from her as trying to suppress his emotions and replied to her

What are you doing here ?

I was returning back home but my car broke down

Watching her body covered with snow as she shivered in cold and her tiny nose grew red he did not care of anything else and said to her wiping off his tears

Come in I will leave you home

As she followed him inside , he started the engine as there a was a long silence and finally he broke it , he wanted to hear her voice be with her till the time she was here with him as he feared that they would not meet again

So you mentioned earlier that you are going home ? so did you shift here after marriage

The last word pierced his hearts like thousand thorns as he was sure that by now she would have married but the next few moments were something very unacceptable as she said playing with the end of her hair

No I shifted here before a month after my accident and I am not married yet

Then…… what about ayaz did you all post ponded your marriage

No he is married to a girl that would keep him happy and give back the love he deserve and as far as I know he is really happy now and it is only me who shifted here

But why so did his rejection hurt you to that extend

It was me who rejected him for marriage

Why I thought you loved him very much?

That your problem you think a little too much but that is adorable to only a certain extend

He minds were filled with a valleys of question while she looked outside the window with a cute blush on her face as he stole glances at her he still tried to recollect her words and understand what she meant as he halted the car infront of her new home and he asked her making the last attempt

So why did you reject him?

She remained silence and just took out a small box from her coat and said to him

You always analyze situation according to yourself and even that day I was in my full sense but you were so mist in tears and all those vows you failed to hear those words of love from my mouth before the doctor took me to the ICU . ok my home here bye

Saying this she stepped outside her arms wrapped around her body as she made her way to the doorsteps it was only than by watching her leave he realized what her words meant and he knew there was no looking back no more as he rushed outside his car and as she turned the lock of the door to open the very next moment she found herself in his embrace her lips claimed by him , her hands travelled to his neck he caressed her waist he left her all breathless as he said her

I thought it was best for me to leave you that day

Her eyes were brimmed with tears as she said him rather screaming

How could you think so I needed you I wanted you I loved you and thanks a million times for making me realize by kissing me as I am incomplete without you do you have any idea who scattered and broken I was when I did not find you there , I wanted to hug you and tell you how much I loved you but you had just gone away you planned to do things your way and left my life in mess for entire six months

Like the way you left me earlier

I was just a teen at that time but no matter what now that we have found each other we will never let any of us draft apart

I will never leave you again

As he cupped her face and kissed her all over again , their tongues danced together leaving each other breathless as he said to her

I love you

I love you too

She rested her head in his chest as he took her into his embrace while the snow fell off their body , the starts twinkled in the sky as they were lost in the moment , love was indeed in the air and they tied the knot a month after and remained together always and forever finally they could solve there tangled love and lead a happy life forever

the end

a happy independence day to you all

i hope you all liked my ss

thanks for the encouragement

hugss and kisses

anni

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago

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