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Tanni

@moralthing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Its really gonna be amazing..plz pst 1st chap fast waiting rafgerly too read

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

heyy lovely prologue and cs!!! would love to read itr further,do pm me😊😊

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: pia.raha
heyy lovely prologue and cs!!! would love to read itr further,do pm me😊😊

i am glad you liked it
surely i will pm you

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

ossum it was ...

ur an fabulous writter ...nd the story is so ossum

manyata loves someone else

how will she fall for uday ?????

but anyways loved it continue soon

eagerly waiting for the 1st chapter

nd plzzz plzz do pm me aswell

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: anu1299
ossum it was ...
ur an fabulous writter ...nd the story is so ossum
manyata loves someone else
how will she fall for uday ?????
but anyways loved it continue soon
eagerly waiting for the 1st chapter
nd plzzz plzz do pm me aswell

thank you so much
awn i am so glad that you think so
yes it is a light hearted story
with more fun and less roi roi
yes sure

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

The following 28 member(s) liked the above post:

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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

*~the lost love*~
Bichad ke tujhse ab mujhe marna hai
Yeh tujurba issi zindagi mein karna hai
the sun rose but hardly was noticed as it was lost in the dark clouds it had been a snow storm last night , all roads were blocked and the flights were delayed too as he sat their going through all the meeting he had cancelled and the important files . he could feel himself as the centre of attarction as all the girls in the airport drooled on him and the boy envied him for his richness but hardly did he pay heeds to any as he continued to work and after he was over their he rested his head a turmoil was going on his mind he was finally going back to India after several years the time when he came back from India he was five when his only grandparent his beloved grand mother passed away since that very day he took an oath to never return but today he was dragged to the past again and he could not deny as it was the marriage of his best friend or more like his own sister Jainandini so he was taking a leave and going to her marriage for a long one month , to Devgarh , suddenly disturbing into his thoughts his phone buzzed it was Nitika the chick he spend the previous night , to him the biggest bimbo and despo last night indeed rotten a part of his mood , but he rolled his eyes and answered her call
hey baby whats up darling?
uday veer today morning i got up and found you missing by my side where are you honey?
see i have to leave for India for a month i am sorry i did not get enough time to inform you
Ok honey i miss you bye .. love ya
he disconnected the phone as the annoucement was made finally he could board his flight he got his security check and shortly boarded in the flight as a foreigner lady l had the seat beside him , gradually talk started then into exchanging numbers and finally ended up in making a hot sensation make out after all he too needed to entertain himself and kill his time finally the journey was over the flight landed in Devgarh he was our in the airport as waiting for his luggage to come but suddenly his eyes caught something it was a girl she was facing the other side so her face was not visible , she was in a beautiful red salwar as her milky skin added to the glow and her hair strand falling on her face , her frangance was similar , uday could feel his own heart skip beat a similar feeling he always had when he was with his manyata before he could turn to talk or ask her she was already gone but his eyes feel on the ground where she had left her belonging mistakenly he unknown to himself picked it up to find it was a locket coated with gold , a heart shapped locket it reminded him of something but he could just not push his memory to what was the thing that he missed and why was he so connected to this locket ? admist in his thoughts he took his luggage and drove away towards jai 's house
in the surging ,seething murmuring crowd she decided to issolate herself ,while she watched her friend applying the beautiful henna on her hands but manyata did not want to be a spoiler of the hapiness she could not risk her friend sad for her problem after all this was the most memorable days of her life , her best friend was finally getting married and here she was sulking over the fact that she was missing her own boyfriend she had just reached today but it felt like it had been ages she has been away from him unknown to herself the real cause of her sorrow was the pendant the locket she was gifted by her ex boyfriend before their first kiss , she never parted away with that it was a part of herself but today in the hustle fusltle she lost it admist in all her thought she was shook by her best friend Jainandini as she asked
what the matter manyata ?why do you looks so lost?
nothing jai it is just that..umm i am ..missing him
awn i must be the sinator here to part you two love birds just a month before your marriage
she joked as manyata passed a smile and said
no jai don't be but you know him how careless he is wonder if he even took his lunch
woa good going manyata i am getting married to jaggat but i am still not so good like you
it is ok in your case tabled are turn jaggat plays the wife here
they would continued this for hours but was disturbed by manyata 's phone it buzzed as she looked down her face turned in the shades of pink as jai got the signal and said
its is ok first you attend the call
she smiled as manyata walked out from the balcony she received his call and got the loudest squel from him
manyata i missed you choo much
i missed you too ayaz how badly i wished you was here
baby if i would come their who would look after our marriage
awn yea right so is the hall booked the one outskirts
no uncle bridg want to do it in his country house the reception
ok and what about the decorations people
i will go shortly to talk to them but their is an important reason i called you
aha what is it doctor ayaz
today i brought a little boy into life he was so chubby and cute it hurted me to hit his back and make him cry
awn that is adorable but that is your work so what is the important thing you wanted to tell
it reminded me of us
of us and why is that so
in a month even we would be married and we would be parents shortly so even i want a girl like this child
manyata blushed furiously as the only thing he continued
life is going to change but i want you to be by my side
i will always be by your side ayaz
ok baby have to hang up another surgery is waiting bye muahh love ya
love ya too bye take care and go home early don't party just coz i am not their
ok baby i will not bye you too take care
they both disconnected the call together as a smile crept in her mind at the very thought of ayaz but her dreams were scattered the very next moment as she heard a voice and was rooted to the ground she turned it was him with that dirty smirk on his face as he annouced proudly
hey manyata glad to see you again

do hit the like button
no res box please
sorry for my mistake
20likes needed for the next chappy
any body want pm please mention in your comment
thank you
hugz
anni

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago

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HARSHITA

@htgcute

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Hey Anni...

Howz u???

Am really happy thag I am first t like as well as comment hehehe...

Now coming to the update...

Wat should I say u only suggest...

I mean everytime I say the same thing...

That it was fantastic...

U make me always speechless...

Well every part was grt and very well written..

I know am saying like am a pro writer hehehe but am not also half of it...

Anyways the airport seen was gud...

The pendent scene and manyata and ayaz scene were very cute...😳

And that manyata and jay convo was cute and funny too heheh...

Lol enough of my bakwaas..

Bubye..

Take care..

And do continue soon and thanx for the pm..

Edited by htgcute - 12 years ago

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Nitya Tandon

@nityatandon

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Hey... Aneesha...

Yieppii... I am the second to comment..

The update was superb..

Just luved it...

Manyata and ayaz's talk was very sweet...

Waiting for the next update...

Wonder what will manveer do together..

Update soon...

Thanx for the pm...

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: htgcute
Hey Anni...
Howz u???
hey jaan
i am fine

Am really happy thag I am first t like as well as comment hehehe...
seems today forum a bit low as all ct are vacant well congo

Now coming to the update...
did you come yet lol

Wat should I say u only suggest...
I mean everytime I say the same thing...
That it was fantastic...
U make me always speechless...
hahaha say you are horrible writter that will be new hahahha

Well every part was grt and very well written..
I know am saying like am a pro writer hehehe but am not also half of it...
ah i am glad you liked it

Anyways the airport seen was gud...

The pendent scene and manyata and ayaz scene were very cute...😳
awn glad you found so

And that manyata and jay convo was cute and funny too heheh...

Lol enough of my bakwaas..
Bubye..
Take care..
you too take care
And do continue soon and thanx for the pm..

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