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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: preya_radev

awesome part aneesha loved it... ayaz and manyata phone call was sweet and cute so finally manveer meet wonder what is gone happen next...did uday hear manyata talking to ayaz?... the airport scene was lovely where uday had that feeling whenever manyata is around please update soon and thanks for the pm


awn thank you so much
yup atom bomb will explode
aha lips totally sealed about it
awn that is my duty

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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Lovely start
Loved the cute conversation between manyta & Ayaz
Update soon pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely start
Loved the cute conversation between manyta & Ayaz
Update soon pls[/QUOTE
thankss
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Great update anni,
just read the cs, and chap1 and i loved it. Uday is so bad but that why we all like him na.
Looking forward to read more. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: huma12.

updateee baby sister


i will try jiji 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

*~Known Strangers~*

Time stood still , she felt herself rooted to the ground . her heart started to pound at his sight , he looked so majestic and so handsome , his fragnance was driving her insane all over again as flashes of the past came running into her minds but she the happy moments they spend , the long chats by the beach . the promises , there stolen kisses , the long love letter but just then a fear crept her mind to , the memory of the day all promises was broken came to her mind why did god have to be so cruel the moment when she was happy and ready to move away from all this memories why did he come back? But this time she was no soft hearted teenage she was a sophisticated fianc of a person she loves more than anything he was nothing to her than a stranger and that was the exact kind of behavior he deserved as a sweet smile plastered to her face and she asked

I am sorry but I could not recognize you

His heart felt scattered and broken but he was unknown as to why , he felt so rejected and felt himself all alone in the crowd of million , how could she forget him? As she noticed his confused reaction and found it was the perfect time and excused herself

Ok I am sorry I have to leave bye

Saying this she was almost made it to the hallway but luck did not favour her and she was held back by him , he holded her wrist as with a smirk he completed

I am uday your boyfriend remember princess

She wanted to scream at him , slap him , and lastly hug him to take out all her pain , frustration that she suppressed for so long but her ego spoke words she did not mean to say

Ok I remember hey where had you been for so long

A smile crept in his face he did not except suck a cold behavior he excpected her to scream at him , slap him and then hug him and take out all the feeling she had suppressed but for now he was satisfied that she recalled him , he was more attracted to her even now and would not leave a stone unturn to play around with her but little did he know that she was no more HIS toy as he continued

Excuse me it was you who left everything abrubtly

At times it is better to leave than to drag certain thing na

But sometime nature drags us as we need to rectify some things and clear the mess

Woa since when did you become such a intense heart broken philosopher

Since the day you left me with my heart

The winds blew softly hitting their face as a small stand of hair came into her face he took it and put it behind her ears they shared an intense eye lock , she could feel herself drowing in his eyes all over again but she was saved by a phone she looked down as a small smile crept in her face she answered it as uday stood their listening to her words that was going to give him shock

Hello dr ayaz aren't you supposed to have an operation now

Actually I was but just then I remembered something

Ok so what is it that you remembered all of a sudden

A good luck peck I always get from you before any operation

Her mouth opened wide as he replied

If I was their my tongue would already be exploring your open mouth ok actually called you to say that bhaiya and bhabhi will reach their by evening so bye love miss you take care

Love you too ayaz bye miss you too

The phone was disconnected as uday looked at her , his face turned pale and his eyes filled up , he had no idea why his heart prickled so badly ,as all he could do was ask in a weak nervous voice his heart was too scare to hear the truth as he finally asked

who was he?

a sweet smile appeared on her face as she replied

ayaz my fiance we will be getting married this coming month


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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
hey anni
such a short update
but nice one
i wanted to see uday's face
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: roopali15

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0000">hey anni</font>

</div><div><font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0000">such a short update</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0000">but nice one</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0000">i wanted to see uday's face</font>

Evn I want to see his expressions... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Awesum update...👏

Do cont soon..

N thnks 4 d pm...

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