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Originally posted by: palindrome
Aww..what a beautiful chapter...!!!
Two lovers stuck somewhere because of weather...!! Setting itself was very romantic..!!!😉😊Dev has fallen very badly for I star...!!! I loved the part where he was watching her playing carelessly with the kids..I think,he had some fascination with the sight of her pulling her hair to the bun..Did he count the twists this time too???Avi,you and reet are making me aware of some "weird and interesting" things that guys notice in a girl..remember,"bangle less" wrist of geet in My teacher..here the other diwana counting the twists of bun..!!!!😳It is true they notice weird things about us. It is a weird fascination. I am so unaware when he asks questions like why did you put pleats in the saree this way, last time it was the other way. I am like, huh. I don't even remember such things. O don't talk of Reet, I will go into the la la land of that proposal again... as it is my feet are barely down to the ground now..😆😆I loved the "the family picture" formed in mirror reflection at airport..Though despair that tara felt after that pained me alot...!!!!😭 I want to admire you for thinking this thing.👏.👏.👏.It was novel..I have never read such a scene or sequence before...!!!!😃I was trying to portray it as a reflection of her wants and the moment was so fleeting before she had to control herself.Dev is very naughty..He called her "Haathi"..but that little boy was more naughty than Dev..He wants to marry tara...!! A big hug to monu for inducing that cute and brief "eye lock"...🤗ok events after this on the bed...I loved the gentleman dev who decided to sleep on floor,checking in his desires...😉😆Dev is a gentleman but since he is the hottest bachelor of Delhi, thoda fast forward hai..😆Tara's past haunts her in the dream..oh it feels great to have dev there to soothe this time..!!! This was my most favourite part from the entire update..You have described it so beautifully avi..!!!! It was soothing as well as evoking those mushy mushy feeling in me simultaneously...!!!!Morning after was hot but ended quite painfully{actually for dev😆},,poor boy,could not find the difference in reality and dream...!!!!waiting for tara's reaction on it..I hope,she won't kill dev...😆Love you avi for giving us this beautiful love story of dev tara along with mannet...!!!
Thanks Palin! I never find my story or writing worthwhile so for you to praise it means a lot.
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