The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 36

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ek dozen thapad toh banta hai with double the number of returns in love tokens... 😉 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Did I tell you I Love this teenage Maaneet and their subtle progressing emotions and their hesitations and gestures wanting to do the talking even in their silence. ❤️

His eye infection did have a benefit for him ... because of it and his dark glasses hooding his soulful eyes from her she was made aware of how empty and craving she is to see and peep into those eyes that have love filled and just emotions for her . Also she came to know of how he feels when she keeps averting her gaze from him. 👏

Pinky is a true and loyal friend.. 👏 her interrogating and questioning him for her friend's benefit was true to her self and protection she feels for Geet. Maan answering and clearing her doubts through his sincerity and honest feelings were too good and high point for me in this update. 👍🏼

This inner thoughts was ❤️ "I just want to walk with her on her path. If I can't give her roses, I want to take away the thorns before they come in her path." Spoke of his pure thoughts and feelings. 😳

I so love the simplicity and beauty you associate each time while describing Geet... it makes me believe there's so much truth present in her persona that makes me love and adore her.

The whole dinner was so romantic in its own way ... there was love in the air ❤️ with such subtle description of it all... it was smooth flowing with making me live those moments with complete feeling of all that must be transpiring and all of the emotions. 👏 👏 The song added to the whole feel of the part... ❤️

Munda took advantage of her innocence and goodness for having those precious moments with her ... she had to serve him with her own hands... but then she willing gave him the cake so dreamy and love filled action that was... 😳

The bike ride, her acceptance to ride with him with trust on him by placing that hand on his shoulder was like the cherry on the cake... 😉

Do continue soon ... Thanks for updating 🤗


Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
now a days best thing about updates are song selection..

i'm humming the song while reading. net problem sun nahi sakti...

avi, this song was like first time i'm humming with original tone (otherwise beech beech me mai apni tone bana deti hu.😆😆😆) but this is like singing and picturising them.. so perfect it was..


pinky behaving like elder sis.. badi bahne aisi hi hoti hai (actually more khadus, my sis usually ask me to go for relationships "koi boyfriend banale" ye words hote hai uske, once i mentioned abt a boy, she clearly told me wo sab majak hai, u r too innocent don't u even dare..)


adi pinky ki to ful setting ho gayi..
or unke sath maneet ki bhi baat ban rahi hai..

loving it..

Edited by mannubhardwaj - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃


awesome part...loved pinkys concern for geet though i dint like the way she blasted Maan...

Anyways glad that Pinky came to know about him...hope she tells Geet that it was Maan who send all those notes her way...😊😊

If I can't give her roses, I want to take away the thorns before they come in her path loved this line...

aha now she understood how he myt have felt...thanx to the glasses tht he was wearing for whatever reasons😃
btw did he exactly hear what she was saying during self talk sessions?? did he come to knw that she felt bad ??

slowly slowly their relation is improving...glad to see that...and bike ride , woh bhi maan ke saath....lucky geet😆

nice song Avi 😊 old songs have so much meaning in them...their lyrics speak a looot in a very simple way...😊

very interesting precap Avi...cant wait now...

But missed Dev-Istar 😳😊agar dev tara diya toh we say we miss maaneet, and ab jab maaneet diya toh missing them ryt,...😳 sowwie...cant help...
Edited by honeygrape - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats for the Silver Jubilee
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Absolutely dreamy update
😳

Na kaha jaaye aur na saha jaaye
Geet bechaari boori phasi

Geet's self thoughts are always a treat to hear and an additional advantage when Maan overhears her
Dil ki baat direct pohuch jaati hain😉

Now that madam is missing looking in his eyes 😎
poor Maan's eye infection took some other direction but madams wish is his command😳

Pinky actually confronted Maan😲
Had it been The MSK toh pinky gayi🤢😆
but loved the concern which she has for Geet plus somewhere it did give her a insight to Maan's take on the note issue and Geet😊


Aadi's surprise party and Maaneet unofficial date😳
Loved the chori chori chupke chupke nihaarna
He lost in her beauty and she having a tough time to distract her thoughts😛

Finally Maan's wish to have dinner with Geet and she serving him and they spending quality time together all realized though not the way he wanted but still
These small moments will always be memories to be cherished all your life😳

Maan has become too cheeky keeping safe distance from her still has his way out
Loved the how he deliberately took initiative to make this evening special, having her near him, fulfilling all his small wishes and Geet too was at ease today, she too didn't deny him being around her 😃

A ride back home on a bike☺️

Avi fantastic update yaara
just loved every part of it
It was so naturally weaved nothing seemed out of place
Typical college moments and romance
But now I'm curious about the MU

Superb song selection on of my fav songs again😳

I'm sorry but past few days all is going wrong and I comment late
Sowwieee😕

Thanks for the dreamy date
Love u
🤗



Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pal Pal Dil Ke Paas Tum Rehti Ho
Jeevan Meethi Pyaas Yeh Kehti Ho
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Posted: 12 years ago
Har Shyam Aankhon Par
Tera Aanchal Lehraye
Har Raat Yaadon Ki
Baarat Le Aaye
Maein Saans Leta Hoon
Teri Khushboo Aati Hai
Ek Mehka Mehka Sa
Paigham Laati Hai
Meri Dil Ki Dhadkan Bhi
Tere Geet Gaati Hai
Pal Pal ...
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Kal tujko dekha tha maine apne aangan mein
Jaise keh rahi thi tum mujhe baandh lo bandhan mein
ye kaisa rishta hai yeh kaise sapne hai begane hokar bhi kyu lagte apne hai
main soch main rehta hoon dar dar k kehta hun
pal pal...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tum Sochogi Kyon Itna
Maein Tumse Pyaar Karoon
Tum Samjhogi Deewana
Maein Bhi Iqraar Karoon
Dewaanon Ki Yeh Baatein
Deewane Jaante Hain
Jalne Mei Kya Mazaa Hai
Parwane Jaante Hain
Tum Yunhi Jalate Rehna
Aa Aakar Khwabon Mein

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