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Posted: 12 years ago
amazinggg...
wht is d prob???omggg arnav cudnt confess it nw also...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
i am scared of that phone call
can't wait to see what happens
i hope nothing bad happens
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Arnav want to propose Khushi
But here again Shravan calls him
Hope it's not like Saanchi met with an accident and lost her memory and remembers Arnav
SonArnav will go back to her
Lolz no please not this way
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Awesome update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
read all last few chapters
sorry for late comment
superb updates
Khushi and Aranv living together
Shravan and Sanchi become one
she finds out the truth
she is hurt and decides to marry him for sake of baby
Arnav is broken
but at last goes back to home
and realizes love for Khuhshi
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Living together with love or friendship? Part 12









Arnav:Sanchi had a miscarriage.She is in the hospital now.
All are shocked and upset.
Nilanjana:My God!
She cries.
They rush to the hospital.

Nilanjana sits near Sanchi who is motionless.Nilanjana's eyes are full of tears.
N:I understand the mental trauma you go through now.But it is in God's hands.We can't control it.
Sanchi bursts into tears.She faints.All are shocked.
Shravan:Sanchi!

The Doctor comes out of the room.
Shravan:How is Sanchi now?
Dr:I'm sorry.She is in coma.
SHRAVAN:Nooo!
All are shocked.
Shravan cries loudly.
He goes near the God's idol in the hospital.
SHRAVAN:Till now i have not stood before you and prayed.First time i'm begging you to do something for my Sanchi.Please save her.If you want tp punish me kill me.But please don't punish that innocent girl.

Two weeks passed.
The nurse runs to the doctor:Dr,Mrs.Shravan Singh Raizada is showing some good symptoms.
Dr:That's a great news.
The doctor runs to her.

The doctor comes out of the room.
Dr:Mr.Shravan Singh Raizada..there is a happy news.Your wife Sanchi is out of coma.
Shravan is excited.
Dr:It's a miracle.You are the most luckiest husband in this world.
SHRAVAN:Thank you so much Doctor.

Slowly Sanchi comes to the conscious state.
Sanchi opens her eyes and sees Shravan first.He smiles:Sanchi!
SANCHI:You?Can't you give me peace of mind?I should'nt have escaped from the coma stage.
It hurts Shravan.
SHRAVAN:I'm not troubling you anymore.
He goes away.
The nurse comes:Why did your husband go away so fast?Hew was shattered when your health became bad suddenly.He prayed a lot for you.He did everything for you.
She can't believe it.
N:You are so lucky to get a loving husband like him.
Sanchi thinks about Arnav's and Shravan's dialogues:

Arnav:Believe me.Shravan will take care of you.He loves you very much.
Shravan:I'm happy that you are not leaving this house.Thank you so much Sanchi.
Sanchi:Why should you care if i stay here or not?
SHRAVAN:I care..because i love you and i want to see you everyday.

Sanchi is discharged from the hospital.
Sanchi is walking downstairs.Her leg slips.She begins to fall down,but Shravan catches her.They both look into each other's eyes.He leaves her hand.
SHRAVAN:You need rest.Don't exert.Go to your room and take rest.
SANCHI:Why do you think so much about my health?
SHRAVAN:Because i love you.
Sanchi looks deeply into his face.
SHRAVAN:Don't worry.I won't force you to love me.You married me for our baby.But since we lost our baby,you don't have to stay here.Don't sacrifice anymore.You can go back.
He goes away.
She thinks:Why do i feel sad even though i'm released from Shravan?
Sanchi's and Shravan's hearts sing without their own knowledge:
Tum ko bhi hai khabar
Mujhko bhi hai pata
Ho raha hai judaa
Dono ka raasta
Dur jaake bhi mujhse tum meri yaadon main rehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna..{Kabhi alvida na kehna}


Sanchi goes near Shravan.
SANCHI:I will go back.
Shravan is upset.
SANCHI:But not now?
He looks at her face carefully.
SANCHI:When my parents got separated they gave me a lot of wealth and went their own ways.But now i want to be financially independant.I don't want to depend on them.So i have decided to find a job.After that i will go back.
SHRAVAN:Ok.But not now.Take rest.Don't strain yourself.

Sanchi attends an interview and waits outside for bus.It is raining heavily.
SANCHI:My God!I did'nt take umbrella.I'm not getting bus or taxi.
A car stops before her.Shravan gets out of the car.She can't believe her eyes.
SHRAVAN:Why are you here?
SANCHI:I attended an interview.I got the job.
SHRAVAN:Why are you in a hurry to work?Don't you know that you need rest now?You are drenched in the rain.You will catch fever.Your health will become worse than before.
His tone changes:You don't care about others.You are not bothered about what others feel when you become sick.Now listen.I will not allow you to go anywhere.Because if you get freedom you will become careless and does'nt take care of the health.
SANCHI:I was waiting to hear this from your mouth.
SHRAVAN:What?
SANCHI:I'm happy that you will not allow me to go anywhere.
He looks at her seriously.She smiles slowly.Slowly he also smiles.He extends his arm.He holds his arm.He leads her to the car.

Khushi looks at the red roses in the mall.Adhiraj appears there.
A:Hi Khushi.
KHUSHI:Hi..
A:Where is Arnav?
His eyes search for Arnav.
KHUSHI:Arnav is not here.I came alone.
A:Ok..
His eyes search for someone.
KHUSHI:Whom are you looking for?
A:Nupur.
KHUSHI:Nupur?Our classmate Nupur?
A:Yes.Recently we met each other.And...
She smiles:And?
He is shy.
A:She will come now.I want to propose to her today.
Khushi smiles:Good.Even i have decided to propose to Arnav today by giving red roses.I wore red salwar kameez specially for that.
A:Great.But i'm tensed to propose to her.Can i rehearse with you?
KHUSHI:Sure.
A:Suppose you are Nupur..
Arnav reaches the mall.He thinks:I will buy red roses for Khushi.I will give them to her and propose.He sees Adhiraj and Khushi together.
Adhiraj buys red roses from the mall and sits on his knees before Khushi:Will you marry me?
Khushi smiles nodding her head.
Arnav is shocked.He runs away with tears.
Adhiraj stands up.
A:Is it ok?
KHUSHI:Ya.

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Posted: 12 years ago
alas shravan and sanchi's story is gonna move nicely.great and for the first time i'm first to comment.yipee😊😊😊
Edited by rukuswasthika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 11
nice part...
now what?
cont soon...

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