MG SS: HOT VS COLD epilogue on page 97(Completed) - Page 36

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awesome dear
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awesome updates. This trip really helped them in opening up and expressing thier feelings for ech other. I hope they get time to really confess and announce thier rleationship to their friends and family.
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awesome parts..
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Awesome update
Soo maaneet came close
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TEASER

Maan : yaa, if u dnt like me, if u hate me then u must be hating the place also where we came close to each other..

Geet : its nt that..

Maan : yes it is… yes Geet I have used you.. I came close to you only for my needs to complete.. I hv no interest in you… you were just a toy for me…

Geet starts crying… and said… I knew it.. I m not a girl that any one will like me.. college me itni sundar girls thi bt u chose me… mujhe hamesha se lagta tha ki I m not that speciall then y u chose me… mujhe apse koi shakayat nahi hai, mujhe apne aap se hai.. u tried on me but I couldn't satisfied you and so u decided to leave me…

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god..very very sad TSR...what is happening yaar..pls cont soon..
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what are u trying do intni achi love story chal rahi thiaur ab gayi bhas paani mein
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Part 17

They all reach their respective homes

Maan and yash drops everybody.. and go to their own house to take some rest.

Rano Maa: aa gai meri bacchi.. kaisi rahi trip ?

Geet suddenly comes into reality.. she hugs her maa and says : was nice maa..

Maa : wat happened? Right now u were so happy and still in the trip mood but achanak se kuch ajeeb lagri ho..

Geet holds her mom side ways.. : no maa.. I m fine, jus tired a bit. Wanna sleep for some time..

Maa : m gong out for a pooja, will be coming late , may be in the eve time.. I hv prepared luch.. do hv it..

Geet : yess maa, nw u go' and dnt forget to bring Prasad for me..

Rano maa leaves the house.. geet runs to her bedroom..

Now seeing her mom, Geet was going through mix feelings..

She was happy that Maan likes her but she was a very Indian girl and dint believe in making fun before marriage.. she was very upset with herself that wat ever happened last nite was wrong.. she was busy cursing her self.. the thing was, she was not able to share it with anybody..

Geet : how can I tell someone, hw can I face my mom.. when she ll get to know about it, what she ll think about me'

She was lying on her bed and she was not well, due to stress she was having headache.. she don't hv food coz she was disturbed..

Here on another side, Maan was very happy with the moment he shared it with Geet, he was counting it very pure and somewhere symbol of their love..

Maan to himself : yesterday nite, Geet was full mine, she dint even denied me for any thing.. she totally gave herself to me.. I felt complete being with her,, I go crazy when m with her.. her presence is sufficient for me.. for my life and for my love..

Did I said love rt nw ?? ohhh myyy Goddd, Maan sighn Khurana, You love Geet.. dude you are in love..

With this he starts jumping on floor and his bed.. he wanted to confess it to Geet, as soon as possible but he wanted to wait for some time and then tell her.. he wanted to trouble her for some time..

Geet to her self : wat we did was rt or wrong ?

Does Maan loves me or it was just an attraction, lust ??

Will he accept me now ? will he marry me or not ?

Geet was full of fear and doubts'

The day ends.. that day Maan was busy in himself as he got to know that he loves Geet.. but Geet was too disturb..

Next day morning, she gets a call from Maaan.. but she doesn't ans it.. Maan tries her call continuous but the same, no ans.. he gets disturbed and decides to go her house..

He reaches, but it was lock.. then he contacts pinky, but even she had no idea..

Geet was in her own thoughts and did not like it , what ever happened that night. She was sure of it, that Maan doesn't love her but he had only a liking for her and for her body.. he had no interest in her heart,,

Geet started hating herself as she broke her mom's trust..

The day ends'

Next day, Maan decides to tell Meera everything from start to end'

Maan : Meera, I wnana tell u something..

Meera: that you love Geet..

Maan was surprised to hear that.. Maan : you know it meera ?

Meera : mujhe ye pehle se pata tha, you both are my bestest frnds but dint tell me.. but that ok, atleast you both have confessed to each other.. that's imp for me..

Maan : wait a sec.. who told that I hv confessed..

Meera : then last nite' Maan tell me everything..

Maan narrates her whole story.. then he comes to the picnic thing.. he doesn't tell word to word but he says..

Maan : Meera we shared our lives yesterday.. not exactly but she gave herself to me yesterday..

Meera : Maan' sorry to ask u but did you both had'

Maan interrupted her and said : no no Meera nothing like that but close to it..

Meera : hmmm I kn.. I saw you both sleeping cuddling each other.. but I thought u hv confessed her..

Maan she is very emotional yaar..

Maan : I kn it Meera, I kn her very well.. I want to tell her that I love her and want to marry her.. I dnt kn what happened but she is not receiving my calls and not even answering my msgs..

Plzz Meera jus check once, plzzz. I realy cnt live without her,, she is my life..

Meera : stupid, say these things to her.. with this Meera hugged Maan ..

Dnt worry Maan, I ll go now and talk to her..

Maan : thanks..

Meera goes to Geet's home..

Geet was happy seeing Meera..

Rano Maa : are Meera beta, kafi dino baad ayi..

Meera : nahi aunty, vo maa ke sath kuch Kaam khatam karne the.. I was busy in that..

Meera and Geet sits in her bedroom.. seeing Geet, Meera knew that these three days after trip were horrible for Geet.. she had cried a lot.. her eyes were red, she had dark circles and she had become weak also..

Meera closed the door and then came and sat near Geet, Meera hold her hand and said..

Meera : bolo Geet, wats the prob..

Geet : I cnt tell u Meera..

Meera : I kn it Geet , I hv a hint but I want to kn it from u..

That day when I and Yash came back to farmhouse early morning, I was finding u but u were not in ur room so I got tensed.. then when I went to Maan' s room, I saw you both lying together in each others love..

Geet started looking down..

Meera : Geet u dnt hv to feel ashamed for whatever happened.. that's ok.. it happens when we are in love.. and these are the moments to cherish not to feel ashame of..

Geet : but this is all not good before marrage.. I m not like that..

Meera : I kn Geet, but when you are in love, we dnt see right or wrong.. we jus do it as our heart tell us to do..

Geet : love' hmmm love, I dnt even Know that he loves me or not..

Infact , .. what he must be thnking about me' I m so characterless..

Meera shouted on her in anger : he loves you Geet..

Geet : hw cm u kn.. he has never said these words..

Meera : have you said ?

Geet : no..

Meera : you are of 21st century girl, dnt wait for a boy to propose, even u can take a step first..

Geet, dnt avoid him, talk to him, tell him ur fears.. m sure he ll understand u..

And yes Geet, he loves you.. I can see love for you in his eyes but so strange.. I can see it but u cant ?? think about it'

Bye Geet, talk to u at nite..

With this Meera leaves..

Maan tries calling her but still she doesn't receives the call'

Next day Geet goes out with Pinky.. she has few works to do.. they do it and while returning back..aadi calls pinky..

Aadi : pinky can we meet now..

Pinky : ok done, I ll meet u at coffee shop..

Aadi : done..

Pinky : uuhhh Geeet,..

Geet : its ok pinky tu jaa, almost everything is done. No probs..

Pinky : love u yaar..

Geet smiles and walks ahead..

Maan already knew about this.. so he stops the car infront of Geet..

He gets out of the car.. seeing Maan, Geet gets disturbed and turns her face..

Maan : I hv not come to talk to u or plead you to come with me..

Geet feels odd with this strange line of his.. she looks at him and at the same moment, he picks her up, puts her in car and drives away..

Geet : plzz leave me, I dnt wana come.. plzzz let me go..

Maan : till I dnt tell you the truth.., I ll not leave u.. once we are done talking if u say me to go from ur life forever, I ll do as per ur orders..

With this a guilt , a strange type of feeling comes to Geet.. was she wrong?

Maan stops the car in the same place, where they hugged for the first time..

Seeing that place, Geet becomes a bit emotional..

Geet : dnt stop here..

Maan : why coz u hate this place..

Geet : what.. what are u saying this..

Maan : yaa, if u dnt like me, if u hate me then u must be hating the place also where we came close to each other..

Geet : its nt that..

Maan : yes it is' yes Geet I have used you.. I came close to you only for my needs to complete.. I hv no interest in you' you were just a toy for me'

Geet starts crying' and said' I knew it.. I m not a girl that any one will like me.. college me itni sundar girls thi bt u chose me' mujhe hamesha se lagta tha ki I m not that speciall then y u chose me' mujhe apse koi shakayat nahi hai, mujhe apne aap se hai.. u tried on me but I couldn't satisfied you and so u decided to leave me'

Precap : what next'. Acceptance or rejections'.

Previous Part: 16
Next Part: 18

So Guys this is the 17th Part

Enjoy reading

Please hit the like button n comment as reducing likes n comments is making me disappointing.

Hoping you all will like this Part


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Edited by angelic_cute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i feel so sorry for geet
thanks for the pm

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