Shattered gives me goosebumps, cause
M tink dis b da more scandalous den Scandalous, more sinful den Sins, and more secretive den Secrets.
(vachan hai mujhe no troll language until the end of the post, nau!)
And then there is that 1st promo.
So many expectation...such an un-spectacular performance. I love the photos in the banner (lol), him in the rain, that photograph. I feel this story will love up to all that and more.
EDIT: For the Prologue.
You are spoiling us rotten with all the dedications! Thank you Hagrid wala 🤗
I am looking forward to the next month with this story (I poojali blank out at the word 'last').
I like that the sheesh mahal is back! And what an epic time of return 2 years anniversary ya?
In true expel style..the dhak dhaks are back..! The lady looks gorgeous even if she doesn't belong in her new "role" yet.
I love that the SKD's are back, the trust the belief, hard words to digest, now I get why this is probably not where it all began. There has to be a story, one thats creeping in the background.
It gives me the 1920s gatsby feel in the beginning, with all her statements about the high society..and their twisted way. Also that "he" has conveniently disappeared, and she is looking for him. And her playing an "integral" part in all this..what sort of alternative universe are we in?
I am trying not to take bait on all your clues, just cause I know you will LOL at my presumptions later. Its so freaking hard not to comment about it all though, when not only the ending but the whole chapter is a mashup of expel cliffhangers. But I think this has to be your best prologue yet. I was on the edge, and hooked. The beauty, the mystery..and the silent dhak dhaks. I dont know how you do it.
The whole her going through the various rooms trying to find him "cha kar bhi main tumse duur nahi ja sakti" but kya "Shayad mera dil tumhe pukarta hai" is happening also?
The man has broad shoulders! haha.
I think you having finally used Sheetal well! Enough trolling around, this seems like legit jealousy inducing business. LOVED IT! I wonder what it would be like if expel went awl "dark"? But thats not you..and I am grateful cause who else will serve me a hot platter of SKD's?
The eyes are back too and so is the staring wala looking. I wonder what emotion in "his" eyes can possibly justify this act to her..cause it clearly seems like the lady and the man have something going. "Inn ankhon me nafrat dikhai deti hai, kyun ki mohabbat inme dard ban kar rehti hai?"
I knew there was something about the word Shattered.
"Why else did she feel mortally wounded, even when there was no blood?"
"Until it finally lay there, broken into countless pieces."
"Shattered, just like her fragile dreams."
I cannot wait to read how these dreams came to be and how they were shattered.
And mostly "kash main tumse mohabbat kar pata" will be altered or not?
Who are we kidding this is an ArHi Story, I am sure no ramanchi in the prologue the lady = Khushi and the man = arnav.
Updex soon.
PM/Scrap/Tweet/Text/Email/Skype/Call/Kabootar Send ME.
TFS.
J (& S) phanki
Luna/lulu/lola
ps. ILUD
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