ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Banner Credit:LooneyLuna

Hello!

I'm back with what is probably going to be my last story on IF for a while. After a few weeks, asli duniya will leave me with very little time to write, so I will be forced to take a break.

However, until then, I hope that you will stay with me on this new journey as always.

The Story:

This will be a SS in 10-12 parts, and it will be completed within the next month.

This is a story of Arnav and Khushi in an alternate universe, a different setting altogether. It will have very little in common with the show, except the leads.

The inspiration:

Something that made me realize that the show never really fulfilled the promise in these lines...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gNojAA54TM8[/YOUTUBE]

The update alerts:

With 750+ members on my buddy list, it has become increasingly difficult to find the time to send out PMs for every update.

So with this SS, I will send out PMs only once a week, even though I will post two updates weekly.

Meanwhile, feel free to stalk this thread for updates, or follow me on Twitter: @Patronus31.

Disclaimer:

The characters used in this story belong to Four Lions, and I take no credit for the same.

Any resemblance to any character, living, dead or fictional, is purely coincidental.

The plot and story is entirely my own, and may not be reproduced anywhere without my permission.

The prologue is up now, do let me know what you think!

-Juhi.

Index:

Prologue: Scroll down please!

I) In aankhon mein nafrat dikhayi deti hai

2) Dono hain alag disha...

3) Hai dhoop sa woh agar, Woh chandni raat si hai...

Thread Two

4) Inhe Raasta Tuhi Dikha

5)Khamoshi hai zubaan meri (Parts One and Two)

6) Jo Pehle Hua Na (Part One and Two)

Ateet- An Interlude to 'Shattered'.

Thread Three

7) Kaash Main Tumse...(Part One and Two)

8) Na paas aa sake...na door jaa sake...(Part 1 & 2)

Thread Four

9) Yeh ishq hai ya...(Part 1 & 2)

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Shattered gives me goosebumps, cause

M tink dis b da more scandalous den Scandalous, more sinful den Sins, and more secretive den Secrets.

(vachan hai mujhe no troll language until the end of the post, nau!)

And then there is that 1st promo.

So many expectation...such an un-spectacular performance. I love the photos in the banner (lol), him in the rain, that photograph. I feel this story will love up to all that and more.

EDIT: For the Prologue.

You are spoiling us rotten with all the dedications! Thank you Hagrid wala 🤗

I am looking forward to the next month with this story (I poojali blank out at the word 'last').

I like that the sheesh mahal is back! And what an epic time of return 2 years anniversary ya?

In true expel style..the dhak dhaks are back..! The lady looks gorgeous even if she doesn't belong in her new "role" yet.

I love that the SKD's are back, the trust the belief, hard words to digest, now I get why this is probably not where it all began. There has to be a story, one thats creeping in the background.

It gives me the 1920s gatsby feel in the beginning, with all her statements about the high society..and their twisted way. Also that "he" has conveniently disappeared, and she is looking for him. And her playing an "integral" part in all this..what sort of alternative universe are we in?

I am trying not to take bait on all your clues, just cause I know you will LOL at my presumptions later. Its so freaking hard not to comment about it all though, when not only the ending but the whole chapter is a mashup of expel cliffhangers. But I think this has to be your best prologue yet. I was on the edge, and hooked. The beauty, the mystery..and the silent dhak dhaks. I dont know how you do it.

The whole her going through the various rooms trying to find him "cha kar bhi main tumse duur nahi ja sakti" but kya "Shayad mera dil tumhe pukarta hai" is happening also?

The man has broad shoulders! haha.

I think you having finally used Sheetal well! Enough trolling around, this seems like legit jealousy inducing business. LOVED IT! I wonder what it would be like if expel went awl "dark"? But thats not you..and I am grateful cause who else will serve me a hot platter of SKD's?

The eyes are back too and so is the staring wala looking. I wonder what emotion in "his" eyes can possibly justify this act to her..cause it clearly seems like the lady and the man have something going. "Inn ankhon me nafrat dikhai deti hai, kyun ki mohabbat inme dard ban kar rehti hai?"

I knew there was something about the word Shattered.

"Why else did she feel mortally wounded, even when there was no blood?"

"Until it finally lay there, broken into countless pieces."

"Shattered, just like her fragile dreams."

I cannot wait to read how these dreams came to be and how they were shattered.

And mostly "kash main tumse mohabbat kar pata" will be altered or not?

Who are we kidding this is an ArHi Story, I am sure no ramanchi in the prologue the lady = Khushi and the man = arnav.

Updex soon.

PM/Scrap/Tweet/Text/Email/Skype/Call/Kabootar Send ME.

TFS.

J (& S) phanki

Luna/lulu/lola

ps. ILUD

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

OHMYGOD! I am SO sorry for this horribly late un-res.The asli duniya man... it should be banned only.

First off, THANK YOU for the dedication. It makes me feel awl warm and fuzzy inside. ILYD, J! What can I say yaara? It's the pyaar ka bandhan.

Now coming to the prologue. I had missed this, you know. This crazy rush of adrenaline that comes from reading your stories. Reading your short stories is like sitting on a roller coaster, I swear. My poor heart. You never know what's coming next and where the story is going. Nothing is ever as it seems.

TeeGee was right. The whole freaking prologue is a cliffhanger. You didn't mention who 'he' is or even 'she' is, even once. So it could bloody well be anyone from Happy Singh and Buaji to Arnav and Khushi.

I know you want us to think that it's Arnav and Khushi. But I refuse to jump to any conclusions.

Then again, your prologue would most likely be about the lead couple.

ARGH!

So Sheetal's here and not a figment of anyone's imagination. 😆 Good. We need closure anyway.

There are far too many 'If's' and 'maybe's' here for me to make an educated guess about ANYTHING really. But since this IS based off of everyone's favourite promo, there is clearly history and background to all of this.

So I'm going to put my rep for being a telepathy buddy online over here and say that the people mentioned in the prologue ARE Arnav and Khushi.

And they have some intense nafrat-wala love going on with deception and betrayal and secrets into the bargain.

I don't give two hoots about the man making out with Sheetal. Pfft. This is YOUR story and you would never. *insert humein bharosa hai dialogue here*

I loved how you set this in Sheesh Mahal. So much scope there! And the attention to detail. LOVE. Because Luna mentioned The Great Gatsby--

So for now all I'm going to say is--

I can't WAIT to see what you throw at us and then go nuts analyzing and over-analyzing it.

TFS yaara frnz.

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Can't wait.Thanks for writing again.

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

**Edited**

Yayay u are back...🥳

And i am super duper excited.

But i don't like the word LAST that you wrote next to Story...Nahi 😭

Now waiting with bated breath for the prologue.

Arhi in any universe Juhi style and i am game 😃

**Edit for the prologue**

OMG Juhiji yeh kya tha...

App kyon kar rahe ho aisa hamare sath...

Tuhi bata meri juhi juhi, tuhi bata meri juhi.

Prologue toh daal diya, aab mushkil mai hai hum yaaha.

Abhi toh chaine ayaenga bas story ko padhne ke baad.

So who is this lady?

Khushi 🤔 but saree? wohbhi blue.

La 🤔 but the other lady is SHEETAL toh

Anjali 🤔 then the man has to be Shyam but whatz he doing in Sheesh mahal.

No the lady has to be khushi and the man Arnav...and this moment is already one mth into the story...Oh god what the hell happened between them.

Promo holds the key so i am thinking that maybe arnav is trying to hurt khushi once more as khushi is taking one more step towards loving him.

Nafrat paas anena de and mohabat door janena de...👏

Thats why juhiji i missed you so so much...You leave me hairan pareshan and i have no clue as to where this ride is heading towards...

Aab toh bas Tuesday afternoon ka wait kiya jayenga...

And ya as stated earlier i am going to continue to ignore the word LAST.

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Congo shongo balle walle...🥳

Eagerly looking forward to get submerge into Expell's spells before "Asli Duniya" casts its busy spell on you ...

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Waiting eagerly!! 😊

**Edited**

Loved the prologue Juhi! Thank God for the note! Otherwise, my mind was already going haywire thinking that it would be a dark story!

There's one outstanding thing that I love in your stories. Sheesh Mahal. You always make sure that it's re-visited 👍🏼 As well as Sheetal.

This prologue is definitely a 'tease'-r. Has got me thinking of various possibilities..

The broad-shouldered man could be anyone..

The blue saree-clad woman could be anyone..

But I do not wish to assume anything. Because as always, you'll definitely surprise me 😆

So, looking forward to Chapter 1, and future chapters, to see how the story will unfold 😊

Loved it!

Edited by SaRunLicious - 12 years ago

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Damn!

How...why...what the...!?

So...Arnav? And Sheetal? Was that female, Khushi!? Why you play hide and seek with us Juhi!?

It could totally be Shyam and Anjali too! 😆 The blue saree whispering...Khushi never preferred sarees, LOL.

I just loved it! Prologues are where you can entice us and tease us, and damn woman, you took that right to heart!

Ab main kya karun!?

And it will start 1 month before!? You mean I have to WAIT to find out what the hell breaks loose after witnessing this?

But all in all

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Wow another ss from you, I'm super excited to read it. I'm really sure that this story is going to be as rocking as your previous ones :)
Although I'm sad to know that after this story you won't be that active on the forum anymore. You and your writing will be missed badly. Still all the best to you and may you always prosper & move forward in your life. Your stories gave us readers such joy that I hope you get blessed with tons of happiness all through your life :), now waiting for the prologue.

p.s-just read the prologue & my curiosity is super piqued to read the story further. Also WHAT THE FU*%!^G HELL were shitall & Arnav doing??????

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