ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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tinsel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wow! i can't wait to read more.👏

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Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Wow, amazing start!! Your stories are always so catchy & addictive.. No matter how long is a chapter, I always crave for more :)

Is this elite women Khushi or La?

Can't wait for this ride to begin!!

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bellacoolio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Interesting prologue. Looking forward to reading more.

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ayushma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

I am so glad to see you back! I know I was disappeared for a while... real life took over.. but I am back. And I see that you are leaving soon?? Ahh shoot... but you're giving us something to dream about till the time being.

Somehow I think this story will end in a tragic note, not that I am keen of that... but I dunno why! When you showed the promo, I had a feeling that they will tear apart in the story, not come closer. I just have my fingers crossed and hoping that this will not come true.

Oh gosh... what a scene! I was not expecting that! Not Sheetal, not Arnav in another woman's arms, not Khushi seeing this... I can't even put the story together... I will just have to hold my heart and wait for Monday to arrive!

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katunkka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Oh im so glad you decided to write about that part of ipk we were promised but never got. I always wondered about it. Looking forward yo stalk this to full extent.

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-Anu13-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Nice start

I hope and pray he must be shyam

because i cant see Arnav as a bloody womanizer in all SS's 😒

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nazca

@nazca

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Prologue is so gripping, What a roller coaster of emotions, by the name Shattered I thought it will be angst and the whole prologue was wave of emotions and the end with the shattered vase made me think you are planning to give angst, but in authors note you stated it wont be sad, dark or tragic, my mind made a mental jig.
Thanks for giving this new SS, but hope this wont be last. Asiliye Duniya is more important but whenever you get time please try to write for us.
PS: Always in your cliffhanger I try to guess but never guessed correctly😛, but you are cliffhanger queen it is tempting to make wild guess, the person with sheetal is shyam.

Edited by avcmyd - 12 years ago

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ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

awesome start Expel! Your stories are always so amazing! I'm excited to read this one and I'm sure I will love it! I'm sad this is going to be your last one for a while, but I will wait patiently till you start writing again. Thanks for the pm!