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Iqraimran thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
they always argued and shared their thoughts like life partners, like two people who met after ages.
whatever happened ten years, it was so dreadful that it took all hopes from arnav which he had a while ago it helicopter.that's freaking emotional, I was crying while reading it
the turmoil he felt when he entered in sheesh mahal, he just wanted to destroyed everything, without any care and any second thought.
what khushi done with him, its looked so painful and heartbreaking. He is so much in pain, he didn't care abt sheetal feeling at all, not his own feeling.
rain, kyu dard hai itna, past pain, revange we came cross the prologue...now I want to know what happened in past.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thnx for d pm..
Awesome updates yaar so intense..
Part 5.
Loved the whole expdetion part where arnav helped khushi n realized abt his own feelings n also wht they shared.
It ws nice 2 see his concern n possessiveness for khushi when he checked in on her while he ws out.
He almost hd an intimate moment with her b4 payal came in abt the news.

Part 6
They cme bck n khushi did all the damage control as he shared his personal stuff with her reg his dreams his family's wishes.
Then the ph calls arnav made 2 khushi n their convos showed how much close they came n khushi keepin their pic.
Thn his invitation to the party which khushi accepted inspite of their past.

Finally arnav hd acknwledged wht he felt for khushi n the only thng tht made him go to lucknow ws tht khushi ws goin 2 b there. he saw nothing pf his past when seeing khushi bt the moment he ws in sheesh mahal he turned into d man he ws 10yrs ago wnting 2 hurt khushi n instead of jus being with sheetal he went ahead n went 2 his room n made out with sheetal tho he cud only see khushi till he heard khushi's gasp n saw her running.
He ws so consumed by his hatred tht he dint think wht wud hve hppnd if someone hd walked in also he gve sheetal a wrong idea which she hd intended 2 b a ge8 idea.
While khushi also ran drenched in rain remembered thte past jus like arnav did.
When 1st read abt arnav planning on making khushi jealous n then d prologue thot tht explains it bt then reading further realized he dint mind hurting her coz he realized she felt d same for him 2 n he used her vulnerability for him 2 hurt her. u wrote tht he felt d same agony khushi did on seeing him with sheetal.

Khushi also hs been hurt by wht hppnd in their past if nt arnav wud nt feel this for her nor wud he feel she'll refuse d invite. khushi is probably innocent n yet is being blamed by arnav for no fault of hers n his family may hve tried 2 hurt her thts why she went away hs been adopted n NK n Lavanya are protective for her lest arnav n his family cause any harm 2 her.

The past hs affected her life in a big way yet she took tht step 2 go there jus like arnav decided 2 risk n go for khushi bt then when the test came he buckled n faltered n let his past control him instead of putting it behind bt khushi dint let her past bt now it'll be wht hppnd now tht triggered her past. This is diff in arnav n khushi's character. Here 2 arnav hung on 2 his past while khushi let go bt now he'll nt find tht same trust frm khushi coz if he hurt it ws fine bt she used sheetal 2 hurt her which will make her feel everythng tht hppnd other thn now ws an act by arnav 2 gain her trust make her fall for him n then hurt her n betray her for revenge.

I hve a question or rather more.
1. in the beg of part 5 where u sd khushi felt REALLY left her did it mean so far she thot he d nt leave her or does it refer to her relationship which ws hidden under llayers of hatred bt knw he ws hers.
2. in the prologue u wrote tht khushi sw tht look in his eyes which hd destroyed her b4. bt in this update dint get tht.
3. why did khushi think tht she'd prove d trust arnav hd in her even if meant forgetting wht hppnd at the carvern wht exactly she means by forgetting tht d part where she lost her track n hurt herself or wht hppnd bet her n arnav n wht hs tht got 2 do with present crisis unless arnav thinks she's incompetent.
Edited by renee.bee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fear has gripped my heart! I hadn't realized that this would be the chapter that would bring us to the present...I was so excited...but I wanna cry! Because ArHi are hurting!! What exactly happened 10 years ago...?? I'm DYING to know!

The transformation from Arnav to ASR, from the helicopter to when he landed at Sheesh Mahal...that was marvelous..and believable!!!!

And the whole lift sequence...Reminded me of the promo...and I was in tears...good old days!!!! *SNIFF*

Thank you for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was totally amazing. And one thing, I am hoping for the past to be revealed in the next part... O.o
And they were finally changing and caring for each-other. But Sheesh Mahal happened. :|
I am glad that Shaam is out. Well I guess. I just don't like him. ._. I love how you mix all the scenes from the drama and the elevator scene, was just like the promo. :') Oh and the Arnav and sheetal part. Really formed a lump in my throat. It was just for revenge. Poor Khushi! But then I really think about the possibilities of the past. ._. Which I am very much looking forward to.
Oh and the whole Cave thingy, was amazing. I loved how he picked her up and gave her his protein bar. ^_^ I love Arnav. :')
And the little bit of the past. Anjali was there. I thought she didn't exist in your SS. :P Lol. Or maybe you had some dislike for her so you didn't include her in your SS.Lol. :P But now that is not it, I really want to know where she is. Ugh! So many questions. I am really excited for future chapters doll!

And as always, beautifully written. I mean your writing makes me suck. :P I mean sometimes I think I should stop. :P Anyway! You're just amazing. ^_^ Everything you explain, in detail makes it so much fun to read and the mind just goes on with it. Everything is so nicely planned and portrayed that I just don't know what to say. ._. I am out of words. :| Speechless!

I would've written more but busy busy busy I am. Ah! Looking forward. Loads of love doll! And good luck with the next two. :D
Update asap!
-Mahnoor. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really don't have any idea what to say.

For the first time ever, she saw things from his perspective.

That's it. I don't know why but Khushi is the one , who is confusing me too much! In fact, I can understand that Arnav still feels something for her. But Khushi! She is hiding herself too much. Damn! I really can't understand what she really wants and what not. What I felt, she never ever tried to understand him, whatever their past was.

And sheetal! I don't hate her. (Not kidding Okay? 🤔) Even she seems to be a mature, not that kind of evil woman.

It's the first time I can't understand Khushi. I really can't. Something she did, that still hurting Arnav too much.

I need to reread last chapter.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg just read the last few updates!
This was Amazing!!!
Im so angry at arnav right now...i cant wait for the past to reveal!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
so have caught up with the prologue
so all of this wasnt meant to happen
at least not from his pov
yes he wanted to hurt her for what she did all those years ago
but when he saw her it didnt feel like victory
more like he lost all over again
so the past really was the trigger there
but when he was doing what he was with sheetal he thought it was khushi
ahhh this is bad
is the past repeating itself
hmmm so jha did turn out to be wrong
and her instinct was right but she never acted on it
does this man that he will be going back soon
damn sheesh mahal it broke them again
looks like there is much catching up to be done
so what now i wonder
cheers for pm
and dont worry if you cant do two for next week
am sure we can wait till then
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg omg..what an update it was..
So the biggest truth os going to be revealed..
i just wonder what happened which made him soo ruthles.
What spell sheesh mahal cast that he turned from an optimistic person to so cruel and ruthless..
What happened between them
and he has just Shattered Khushi..
Eager to know what happened between them
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update Juhi
Arnav kept saying hurtful things to khushi so the would keep going i thought that was really sweet
Obviously not the hurtful things he said but the reason behind it
So the dynamics have changed
We are back to the present
Hmm finally going to know what happened
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was a touching update! So much has changed between them in one month! And the past still looms...but atleast we are a step closer to the unveiling of the mystery...Beautiful as always!

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