ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#651

I don't how you write what you write. But it leaves me dazed..in a good way..:) there is this toe-curling excitement in your stories and the mystery of what happened 10 years ago is killing me..

I like this Kushi..smart and gives it as good as she gets, and how can we blame her..Mr. Raizada jibes and digs can test any one's patience..

I don't know what to think of them..where they in love 10 years ago? But something big happened for her to flee Lucknow with her family to Bangalore and him to leave for US and never to return.

Thanks for the pm..

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Tiramisu_coffee

@Tiramisu_coffee

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#652

Another awesome story !!! Can't get enough of ur stories!!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#653

thats okay take your time no worries dear
see ya soon

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@..mrinalini..

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

I like this ASR.No,I love him.I take comfort in the fact that he is more Heathcliff-ish than Mr.Darcy-ish.Or maybe he's an exquisite alloy of both.But Heathcliff is in there,somewhere.And that makes me happy😛😆

Now coming to the story,

Cold,visceral ASR-Check👏

Calculative,placid Khushi-Check👏

Sarcastic jabs at one another-Check👏

The heat waves of passion that's disturbing and alluring at the same time-Check👏

Author-Juhi-Check😆

Your stories are immaculately ArHi-ish.You wouldn't and probably couldn't picture any other couple saying the same dialogues.And not to mention,your nuanced build ups!!Even the most ordinary of tales attain epicness with the way you shape it all up.People are left guessing and imagining what happens next.Such is your ability as an author.Now they call you "Cliffhanger Queen" not for nothing dudette😃

Take your time.I don't write myself.And I absolutely suck at anything fiction😕But it is because of you and a host of other talented souls that I read stories and try to pen down my feelings.🤔So thanks👍🏼

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS
Hello!

It's 2:30 am here, and I'm trying to finish writing the update.
If I'm unable to complete it within the next two hours, I'll post it tomorrow.

Sorry to keep you all waiting!

-Juhi.

Deer, M fiddlin wid ma laptop, vile w8ing 4ur upd(s)ex. Updt soon.

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#656

waiting for ur tomorrow to come soon...

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti

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Deer, M fiddlin wid ma laptop, vile w8ing 4ur upd(s)ex. Updt soon.</font></font>

Deer, for M (s)exchange laptop to pone plis.

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#658

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#659

MEEE

~Edit~

I hate to do this at the beginning of a comment, yet, why are you making me wait to Tuesday amma ?? Torture wonly!

They are opposites, with so much venom for each other within them, yet they make the perfect team. Driven, focussed, no nonsense. And as if this contradiction wasn't already bothering them, you add physical attraction to the mix and boom - you've got an explosion.

Arnav is being...petty. He knows it but he can't help himself. Yet, he wouldn't let her be alone on a deserted street in the middle of the night. Good. I love how you talked about Khushi's journey in the Indian bureaucracy - from a naive idealist to this experienced queen of tact. Lovely!

And whats with Snakewa, Khushi finds him shady and that cannot be without reason. Also, with her experience, one should not ignore instincts. Guess Arnav will have to learn it the hard way?

Now whats his condition?

*dhak dhak* *dhak dhak* *dhak dhak*

Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago