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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
hey just read last four parts together...
they were awsum...
omg sam has a daughter... arni fbs and samjun fbs were lovely...
ye blood ka kya chakkar hai?? and why was shree upset???? hope everything is okay...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Very nice...continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
back with next part this will be really long part
before i start somethings i want to tell CHAHAT is gone have disease in my story its a curable disease but if i hurt someone with i am extremely sorry in advanced

its an ArNI STORY

PAST AND PRESENT TWO FACE OF LIFE Chapter 4 part A

Arjun was in his cabin thinking how he meet Chahat, and went in memories of his lifes most pricious moments with his Roshni and best friend Sam, who is no longer his best friend.

SamJun/RoshMeer/Arni flashbacks

Sameer: Roshni where are you chalna, Rosh kaha hai tu jaldi kar hume Jun se milna hai
Roshni: haan bhaiya aa rahi hoon
the both brother and sister walked out the house to their car they had nice ride to Arjun's house. Roshni was taking about her college how she won the best student of the year and she won the prize for one of her painting.
Sameer: how much did make for that painting Rosh and what did you do with money that you won
Rosh: woh mein wo paise ek kid's ki hospital hai mere college ke piche waha pe donate kar diye
Sameer: koun si painting ki liye prize jita tha Rosh
Roshni: woh painting mein ek sunset tha aur woh bhi beach pe
Sameer: tumhe pata hai wo painting kisne kharede hai
Roshni: nahi mujhe nahi pata
Sameer: baato baato mein Arjun ka ghar bhi agaya
Sameer parked the car in front of Arjun's house they both came out of the car "ye Arjun ka ghar hai" Roshni asked
Sameer: haan ye Arjun ka ghar hai kyun
Roshni: nahi woh house kafi acha hai isliye
Sameer rang the bell of Arjun's house and Arjun opened it

Arjun's house

Arjun: come on in Sam please come in Roshni
Arjun: "aap log baitho mein abhi aaya Sam" he made them seat on the sofa and walked to his room, after a while he returnd with a painting in his hands, and Roshni was shocked to see the painting in Arjun's hands and mumble under her breath "ye painting innone kharede hai" Arjun saw her shocked face and then she quickely recovered herself from the shock. when she heard Sameer saying "ye painting to bahut khoobsarte hai Jun"
Arjun: "haina khoobsarte painting" staring at that picture with smile on his face
Sameer: haan bahut achi hai painting
Arjun: chale muje bahut bookh lagi hai
Roshni who was watching this thought to herself "kitani gahre dosti hai bhiya aur Arjun ki' Arjun ne sirfe ek painting kharede hai to bhi bhaiya ko batane ke liye unone bhaiya ko ghar pai bulaya hai" and she smiled at her own thoughts
Arjun: Roshni aap kaha kho gaye
Roshni: kahi nahi
they both shared eyelock and smile automatically appread on their face but Sameer's voice brought them back to reality and he smiled at them, they both got embarrassed and looked away from each other
Arjun: "dinner" he said as if trying to get rid of the awkwardness and make Roshni feel normal
Sameer and Roshni both agreed and they sat on a dining table for a dinner and they were eating when suddenly Roshni's phone rang and she picked it up and talked but then she said "execuse me" and got up from the table and walked aside to talk on the phone while she was talking the boys were eating their food
Roshni: bhiya hum ghar jaskte hai
Sameer sensed something is wrong with her so he got up from the table and asked her " Rosh kya hoonva tum tensed lag rahi hoon"
Roshni looked at Arjun who got up from his chair when he saw Roshni looking at him
Arjun: Sam if Roshni wants to talk alone then i can go in my room u guys can talk
Sameer: it's nothing like that Jun, Rosh what happend please tell me you are making me worried
Roshni: bhaiya woh mujhe hostel wapse jana ho ga
Sameer: WHAT but why
Roshni: mein aap ko car mein bataya tha na ki wo mere college ke piche aake kid's hospital hai waha ek bacche ke tabiat kharab ho gaye hai aur mujhe uske paas jana ho ga barna... she stoped herself...
Sameer: Rosh tum sirfe ek bacche ke liye wapse jana chahti ho, mein ye nahi keh raha hoon ki tum nahi jana chahiye par is waqat itne raat ko
Roshni now started crying and got angry at her brother for not taking her there
Sameer could not see her like that and said "hum jayenge par tum hai lagata hai ke hum time paye pohch jayeing"
Roshni between her sobs said "agar aap jaldi drive kareing to hum jaldi pohch jayeing"
Sameer: thik hai ab rona bandh karoo aur mere sath chalo
Arjun: mein bhi chalta hoon tum done ke sath
Sameer and Roshni both together said "thik hai"
Arjun took his cell phone with him and the trio walked out of Arjun's house to Sameer's car and they drive off to the rode that goes to St.Louis
Arjun to Roshni: waise use bacche ka naam kya hai aur kitane saal ke hai
Roshni: uska naam Chahat hai aur woh abhi kuch dino pehle hi born hoon hai
Arjun: tho uske mom and dad uske sath he hoonge na aap worried mat hoye
Roshni: nahi uske mom and dad usko hospital ko de diya kyun ki unke paas utne paise nahi thai ke woh hospital ka charge bhar sake aur use bacche ka dhayan bhi rakh sake Arjun: to woh aap ko kaise mile
Roshni: mein waha pe jake cancer baccho ko painting sikhati hoon aur woh bacche ek din bohut ro rahi thi to mein jake use chup karvaya
Arjun: woh iss waqat hospital mein kya kar rahi hai
Roshni: use anomia hai
Arjun: "anomia" all confused by the name
Roshni: its an blood disorder
Sameer who was listening to this while driving said " use bacche ka koye nahi hai"
Roshni: nahi bhaiya
after this the ride was silent the three of them was praying for her well being

thanks for likes and comments on my previous chapters
thats all for today hope u like it
please comment and like this chapter
this chapter is not done yet there is gone be a part B of this chapter and i will try to write it tomorrow
this flashback is the longest one that will continue in part B as well
i promise after this you wont read this big flashback for a while
sorry for any spelling mistakes
Love
Radhi




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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
yupiee me first
first moment mein hi eye lock 😆 nice
toh chahat aise milli hai so nice...
luv the update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
here i go with another part

PAST AND PRESENT TWO FACE OF LIFE Chapter 4B

Kid's hospital

Sameer to Roshni: kaha hai woh
Roshni ek minute bhaiya
Roshni went to the front desk and nurse where is Chahat
Nurse: Roshni woh waha use room hai so rahi hai
Roshni: ab woh kaise hai
Nurse woh abhi thik hai tum jake mil lo use
Roshni walked to the room where chahat was sleeping. Arjun and Sameer followed her and saw Roshni carrying Chahat in her lap
Arjun: ye kitni cute hai Sam ye she is "she is my PRINCESS" said Sameer in his announcement voice
Roshni comes out of the room with chahat in her arms Sameer took her in his arms as soon as Roshni came out. something inside him told him that she is his daughter
Arjun: Roshni ye bahut pyari bacche hai "haan she is the gift of God" said Roshni
Roshni: bhaiya, Chahat ko mujhe dedjiye na please
Sameer: nahi Roshni abhi nahi
Roshni: bhaiya that's not fair, aur waise bhi woh rona suroo kardegi please dejiye na Chahat ko mujhe
Sameer: what not fair Roshni, she is my daughter and she is happy with me and most important she IS NOT GONE CRY
Sameer and Chahat smiled at each other and Roshni made a face
Arjun: Chahat hey my name is "Arjun"
Sameer: haan ye hai tumhare Arjun aur mein aap ka Sameer DAD
Arjun and Roshni was shocked when Sameer said that his "Chahat's Dad"
and the four of them laughed together

flashback ends

Arjun had tears in his eyes thinking about the moments he then immeditaly wheeped his treas when he heard Ayesha calling him
Ayesha: may i come in sir
Arjun: haan aajavo Ayesha
Ayesha entered the cabin and told Arjun that we have a new case
Arjun: conference room chalo aur sab ko bulalo
Ayesha: haan sir

Conference room

Sameer: team we have case
case decription: ek pre school me bomb threat hai, school ke principle ka coded call aya tha jise mein unhone ye kaha ki english class room bomb hai bacche darena isliye baccho ko ye kaha hai ki school mein kuch log aa rahe hai unke school dekhne aur baccho se melani
Arjun: english class room khali hai Rathod
Sameer: haan Rawte english class room khali hai
Ayesha: par sir principle ko kase pata chala ki bomb, woh bhi ek khali class room
Chotu: Sayad principle ko call aya ho
Sameer: Chotu Shree kaha hai
Chotu: sir woh apne tech. cabin mein hai
"aur Chahat" asked Sameer
chotu: pata nahi sir
Sameer: thik hai koi baat nahi
let's go team pn the way out Sameer told everyone "be safe"
Shree: chale sir
Arjun: Shree tum yahi raho tumhare zarurat hogi yaha tech. baje se
Arjun: Liza hamare sath chalo
and the team walked out of the ETF office
Shree: Chahat kaha ho aap
Chahat: mein yaha hoon Shree

Kids Pre-School Mumbai

Principle:thank you so much officer
Sameer: it's ok
Arjun: dekha ye woh class room
Principle: yes sir app aye mere sath

ETF office

Shree: Chahat , Chahat
Chahat: Shree kya hai kyun chila rahe ho
Shree: mein chila nahi raha hoon, aap mujhe answer nahi kar rahi thi isliye mein app ko uchi awaaz mein bola ya
Chahat: mein answer kiya tha app ne nahi suna
Shree: "oh i am sorry" saying this Shree bent down to Chahat's height and huged her she also huged him back

After a whle Liza came back from the school
Liza in her lab: oh God burai kab khatam hogi iss duniya se
Chahat ran to her and said " hey Liza" with smile
Liza also respond her with a smile " hey Chahat" how are you
Chahat: i am good how about you
Liza: i am good
Shree standing there with them just had a smile on his face

this is it for today
i hope you like it
thanks for my previous chapters likes and comments
love
Radhi




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey...nice start dear. Emotional... Continu soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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here i go with another part

ARNI FF
PAST AND PRESENT TWO FACE OF LIFE Chapter 5

Pre-Kids School

Principle: ye raha class room
Sameer: thank you hum dekhlinge
Arjun: mein ander dekhta hoon
Sameer: mein bahar dekhta hoon
Sameer: "Chotu tum purye school check karoo
Chotu: yes Sir
Sameer searched outside of the class room to find any clue on who could have done it
Arjun searched inside the classroom inside to find the bomb but he could not find it
Chotu also searched the surrounding of the school but could not find anything
Sameer who was searching outside of the class room for little more before giving in the case saying "there is nothing" was shocked as he saw something on the floor in corner
Sameer: Sikendar ke naam ka paper, ye yaha kya kar raha hai, "ARJUN" he almost screamed his name for the first time in this 3 years he said Arjun's name
Sameer started moving towards the classroom and suddenly heared a voice in the classroom he was worried about Arjun and decide not tell him anything about the paper and walked as fast as he could in between he called Chotu and told him "Chotu ek admi bahar bhaga hai uss pakdoo" Chotu said "yes sir and ran after the guy
and Sameer reached in front of the class room to see his best friend standing near the class room door looking at his hand, blood was ozing from his right hand where Roshni's name is written
Sameer rushed to him and said " Rawte tum thik hoona woh mein kise ke bhag ne ki awaz"
Arjun: Rathod mein thik hoon, yaha koi bomb nahi aur nahi bacche hai, par yaha koi tha jesi mein nahi dekh paya par usne mere hath paye waar kiya hai
Sameer: Chotu use pakade lage usse i have informed him, tum phikar mat karo
Arjun: thik hai chalo hum principle ko inform kar dete hai ki yaha kuch nahi hai
Sameer: thik hai lets go

ETF OFFICE

Liza: Chahat app chocalate Pastry khayegi
Chahat: haan
Shree: thik hai mein tum done ke liye leke atta hoon
Chahat: Shree woh Ayesha unko nahi chahiye
Liza: haan Shree hum to bhule gaye ki Ayesha hai uske cabin mein, mein usse puch lete hoon
Shree: thik hai Liza
Liza walked up to Ayesha's cabin to ask her
Chahat: Shree aap ne Liza paye gussa kyon kiya tha
Shree: Chahat kab mein to kabhi Liza paye gussa nahi kiya
Chahat: joothe
Shree: mein joothe nahi bol raha hoon
"yes you are Shree" said Chahat
"no i am not Chahat" said Shree
Liza screamed from the cabin "Spyke Ayesha ne kaha ki woh Chocalate pestry khayegi" and walked up to them with a smile
little Chahat who catched the word Spyke just thought to herself "spyke" nice name she said and this time Shree caught her and ask her "what"
Chahat: nothing
Liza reached their and Chahat said " Liza Spyke is a nice name"
Liza and Chahat gave each other high five and Shree made a face
but suddenly Shree came up with a new name for Chahat and called her "Miss Chahat Rathod"
Liza: Spyke nice name
Shree: thank you Liza
Ayesha walked out of her cabin when she heard noices and what she saw just brought a huge smile on her face
Shree was running behind Chahat for some reason that Ayesha did not know and also she saw Liza standing there with a smile but then Ayesha heard Chahat screaming "SPYKE SEN , SPYKE SEN" and Shree screaming "MISS CHAHAT RATHOD, MISS CHAHAT RATHOD"
Ayesha walked up to Liza and asked her "what about my chocalate pestry"
Liza snaps out of her thoughts when Ayesha said that and she realised that Shree forgot about the pestry and called out for Shree to come there and Chahat also ran to them, by mistakely she bumped in to Ayesha
Chahat: sorry mein apko dekha nahi
Ayesha: no problem
when Ayesha tried to take her steps back she figured that Chahat is also being draged with her first she thought what is she doing but then realised that Chahat's neck chain has been tangeled in her shirt and she stopped moving and said "sorry" but to her surprise Chahat did not listen because she was so into taking that chain out of Ayesha's shirt
Ayesha: mein apke help kardu chain nekal ne mein
Chahat: nahi mein khud kar loonge
Ayesha: mein kardeti hoon
and Ayesha tried to touch the chain but before she can touch it Chahat slapped her hand and said "mein khud kar loonge, mein apse kaha na, mujhe accha nahi lagta agar koi meri isse chain ko touch kare too"
Ayesha: "i am sorry Chahat i was just trying" and she trailed off when she saw Chahat walking away
Shree was shocked and upset when Chahat walked away with a sad face and he just glared at Ayesha and he also followed her

ART Room

in the drawing room there were some pictures of hand made scaches and there were some paintings as well
Shree walked up to Chahat and saw her back to him Shree called her by her name no respone come from her and her respone even did not come when he called her " MISS Chahat" so he walked in front of her
Shree: upset hoon kyun ki Ayesha ne apki chain ko touch kiya
Chahat: haan
Shree: par kyun woh to sirf apke help kar rahi thi
Chahat: haan par mujhe unke help nahi chahiye thi
Shree: kyun, kya aapse chain se bahut zayad pyar karte hoon
Chahat: haan mein isse chain se bahut pyar karti hoon
Shree: boyfriend ne diya hai
Chahat: nahi Roshni bua ne she said in sobs
Shree was not able to see her in tears so he just hugged her tight
Liza and Ayesha was upset seeing her crying especially Ayesha
Shree lets go off her when he feels her grip getting loose on him
Shree: Roshni bua
Chahat: haan and she pointed her finger to one of the potrait of Roshni that she had made and Shree and Ayesha was shocked to see the potrait of Roshni

thanks for likes and comments
sorry for late update
i hope you guys like it
one question i am not sure if i have wrote spyke Sen correctly please help me
love
Radhi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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interestng...bt u didnt mention is it ariya or arakshi...update soon. and ur queries r ans by rockinggirl.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome. ..
lve shree n chahat's Bonding...
how sam cares for arjun...
love it...
I hve one confusion why chahat doesn't like Ayesha? ?..
why she is acting like this??..
plz update soon. .
waiting for next part...

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