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this is my first attempt i have never write a story before and i am learning how to write a story. i will need your help guys with how to continue writing on the same page as your characters sketch? and contune on , or will i have to write each time in a new topic? how to sand pm for each new chapter? i am sorry i have so many questions, writing something and oprating is not something i am good with so plz guys i ll need your help right now i am just gone post this on the forum and see what happens ok now i ll stop my bak bak and a character sketch.
character sketch
ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod:ETF Chief, Arjun's best friend in past, Roshni's brother
ACP Ayesha Kapoor:Under cover Agent, has soft corner for Rathod
ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte: Second in command, best friend of Rathod in past
Roshni Damsingh Rathod: in school of ART(learning art), Sameer bhai's jaan, she is truly a light, have met Arjun couple of times {past}
Shreekant Sen: same as show
Liza DCruz: same as show
Chotu: same as show
i will write the first part and will wait for comments and like and then i will continue. here i go
PAST AND PRESENT TWO SIDES OF LIFE
he was sitting in his cabin at night in memories of her, wishing that he could have saved her. on the other side another person in her cabin was thing wish i could help him, maybe just give him his long lost best friend Sameer.
Ayesha was thing that to herself, when suddenly she heared a nock on her cabin door and their standing Sameer looking at her.
Ayesha: Sir aap yaha ?
Sameer: Haa, woh mein soch raha tha ki tum ab tak ghat nahi gai?
Ayesha: Nahi sir woh kuch paper work complete kar rahi thi. Aur app..App ghar nahi gaye sir? she asked him
Sameer:Nahi mein ghar nahi gaya woh aaj ghar jane ka man nahi hai
Ayesha: Sir app se ek baat puchu?
Sameer: haan pucho
Ayesha: app aur Arjun sir itna gussa kyun the aaj? she saw Sameer getting uneasy, and added sir app chaho tu hi bata na
Sameer:Woh aaj ke din kisi ko khoya...and stopped in middle and looked at her with angry look on his face and walked out of her cabin
after coming out of her cabin he looked at Arjun's cabin where he was sleeping on his chair. just when Sameer was about to walk out he heard a screem from his behind and turn to see his best friend in pain. Ayesha was also witnessing this and though to herself " pleae sir Arjun sir ko app ki zarurat hai please unke pass jaye" she did not know why Arjun was in pain but she still felt the pain and need of Sameer for Arjun.
let me know guys how you liked the story and plz comment and let me know if i should continue or not
thanks
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Radhi
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