TERE LIYE (RN) : Ud.4,pg.6(18/12)

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

hi guys !

i dont know whether you remember this story or not...but hopefully you do n if you dont , hopefuly you'd try to derive some reference from previous chapter n will like this update too...

will be waiting for your comments and likes..

luv,

mana

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Nivedita Basu

@nivi26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

u know mujhe to pata hi nahi tha tumhri ye fic b h.., chalo achha h mjhe ek or RN fic mil gyi padne ko,, lgta h achhe din chal rhe esliye updates mil rahi h..

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Wow!!!! This is the one reaction i have when i read any of ur fics.. Really Mana m head over heal in love with all the stories u crop... 😊 And , reading each story i think this is the best one!!! but , surely now m confused that which one is the best , (scratching my head!!!) *sigh*😆 But, well on contrary y m i getting bothered, simply i come to a solution i love each and every story of ur's with the same emotions!!!...

Well, i read the all the 4 chapter's rite now after recieving ur pm.. And i found it so beautiful, Its a beautiful love story indeed, very natural very real.. U have been able to potrait all there emotions , yearning , love, passion ,affection for one other... Its truely beautiful...

I indeed loved each and every part ... the most humourous one being , when shalini predicts ritu to be dead.. and raj with all his innocence, asks.. when did this happen😆 I loved bro-sis convo..

The entire fic is great!!! I love it.. Thanx for the p.m , and do Pm me when u update next!!!

Continue soon!!!

Love.

Dee😛

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Nivedita Basu

@nivi26

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

nywys i read the first part, it was very nice starting n somewhat unique in its narrating style..👏 n Raj is north Indian n Naina is south girl, (intrstng elemnt of story)..

ye chauhan koi kam thik se ni krta,, but i guess usne esliye kaha taki Raj fatafat kam kr dale,, n abhi to ye janana baki h ki chennai me kya hua?

hmm aage k parts clear karenge,, hopefully i mean surely..

n at last, keep updating...