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Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
UNRES


The bond of sisters...so beautiful.

Ihave an elder sister and I know what it is to have a sister. There was not a single day when she used to live with us that we did not fight and now that she lives in a diff city due to her job I miss her badly...DI I love you...muahhh.

You create absolute magic with the best scenes of the show. The haldi one was one amongst my fav. The flirt Arnav was awesome.

The 'chaukidari' done by Payal was too cute.

And what the!!!! You made Payal loose her payal.

Now I did not know that blackmailing done on Harry Potter's name work effectively on you.

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

Harry Potter ki kasam, ab update kar...



So here it goes harry potter ki kasam aap Finding solace part -2 likhiye with the protagonist Aditya and Arya

cheers
anukriti
Edited by dhakkanmaster - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res!!


Edit:

I was waiting for this update, and you delivered with a beautiful recreation of Haldi Ve!

Loved the sensual banter and the million kisses you brought in, and what is a rasam without an A-K fight?😆

My favorite part has to be her kostin about the Teri-meri lyrics. LOL, Saiyu!

The bond between the two sisters...who better to write about that than you?
Although I think that the show grossly underutilized that, just like so much else.


Also, I'm glad that ASR didn't suddenly confess at this point, because that would be really out of character for him!

Nicely written, and my only kostin is, why do we have to wait one more week for the next update?




Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Twiggy!

~Edit~

Methinks people write about sisters or siblings in genera; just to make me jealous. 😕

Whatever her jiji says is patthar ki lakeer, the ultimate truth. And she will follow it :P

Now they went from break-up plans to confession plans?

Loved the haldi scene, made me blush ☺️

Saiyyu is gettin' her groove back 😉 Now I want AAA18 jaldi !
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Payal...what is Khushi's fault...its ur hone wala jijaji who leaded the dance...these big sisters...daantne ka sirf ek bahana chahiye...
"I am awesome and you are awful"...wow Khushi...only she can say that to the great ASR...
Khushi...What u thought dear,that he would confess this easily...no darling,confession abhi bhi bohol dur hai...
So her jiji told that he loves her...really Khushi,as if u didnt know that...
So Payal's payal gayeb ho gaya...Payal's payal Akash ki paas hai,and Khushi's khushi Arnav ki paas...how cute...
loved the convo between the sisters...Payal is really so matured...Sanka Devi jaise pagli ko samhalne k liye ekdam perfect...
so its haldi...And Khushi dragged him to her bedroom to talk...And latched the door...WOW...
Arnav is always helpless to Khushi's tear...woh aasli ho ya nakli...
Then two of my most favorite scenes...the dialogues made me wish to see them again...
"Maar doon?""Chodo...Rehne do... Tum seh nahi paogi"...those awesomest episodes...how I miss them...
And After Haldi Romance...too intense...too romantic...and too beautiful...
And Khushi asked how HE knows the lyrics of Teri Meri...A million dollar question of IPK...
Awwee...Payal worked as the guard when her lil sister is romancing inside...she is sooo sweettt...she is the BEST...
And the dedication is for the sisters...perfect...they are the best sisters on screen ever...
U r right sisters are always like the genie in the lamp when needed...No matter how many times I tell
my sisters that I hate them,at the same time I love them the most...
Loved the update...sooo much...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
unRES !

omggg.!! this is jst faaab :D
i jst hd a replay of all the scenes..and these certainty r myy favs :D
Edited by Afsha29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

few seconds had I resed before I would have been on the same page! urgghh!!


now to the update!

oh this was one of the sweetest siblings related arshi story! seriously man loved it! my sister is going bonkers seeing me grinning at her :P *I love you sistah*

and then the confessions stuff! hes asr not for no reason! he.ll tell I love you when hes kidnapped or say when you dont agree to consummate :P in a scenario you wont expect he will express! I love you DAMMIT!!

and my cheek ur hand awesome i cnanot stop laughing!! dhimaag ki batti jal gaye! lol and his line you cannot bear it! I sincerely thought he would kiss her but that line blew me off!! our cvs!! 👏


eggjcatly i thought he didnt like CHITRAHAARS! how did he know teri meri byheart?

superb waiting for the next one!

Cheers

Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

ReallY Loved the update!!

Loved the cute little fights of arshi <3! They r really made 4 eachother!!
Hope arnav will confess his love for khushi in a very unique way!!
Superb update dear!! I'm totally in love with this story!!
Edited by Sona257 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Remembered d old tyms 😊
i still wonder hw he knew d lyrics 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ill be back :)

Unressing
Aaww that was such an adorable update!!
Payal jij's payal and Khushi's Khushi were missing and the reason was the two besotted bros!!!
I always loved Payal...but then CVs had to leave her to be jst a wallpaper in the background!!
I dont hav own sisters..but i ahv a cousin who is soo much more than an own sis can be!!
HALDI SEX!!! the best part in the remarriage track!!
Aahhh...awesm!!!!
Lol..khushi confronting ASR to confess his love was sooo hilarious!!
And those golden days of Payash wedding once more .with that thappad wala scene!!
Overall awesm update!! :)
Edited by ayeshafarhabs - 12 years ago

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