VIRMAN ||TERE ISHQ NE MOHE RANG DALA| epilogue upt

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VIRMAN OS

TERE ISHQ NE MOHE RANG DALA...
PART 1
I never thought it would feel so great. I mean cmon i m returning to my city after long 5 years... A young girl left this city n now after 5 years a woman is coming back. I still remember the day i left rishikesh... Oops i mean the night i left rishikesh was the same night i got married... I got married to a man who was a complete stranger to me... I knew nothing about him besides his name... Honestly speaking i wasnt in my senses at the time i got married... I never bothered to know the man i was getting married to... I didnt even see his face because it didnt matter to me... I was heartbroken then n was so immersed in that pain that i never realised when i transformed from a young girl to a married woman... I don't know when manvi chaudhary became mrs. Manvi virat singh vadera... But now this very name is my identity... I cant even think of living without this name for a second now... Manvi virat singh vadera - it gives me a pleasure that is just beyond words... I cant explain this feeling ever... I never knew something would leave me speechless but this does... I am very lucky to have a husband like virat... He is truly a gem... He is just like a bliss that god had showered on me... He undestood me and gave me the much needed comfort n space in the initial days of our married life... He never tried coming close to me... He never crossed his limit n decided on being friends with me... After some months, i was comfortable with him... Comfortable in being with him in the same room... Comfortable in sharing the same bed... I was so comfortable with him that i could share anything n everything with him... When i was sure i decided to share something with him... Something that he had the right to know... Something he should have known before marriage... I still remember that day... I entered the room after the dinner and sat beside virat who was working on his laptop.

~~flashback~~

Manvi : virat...

Virat : bolo ji...

Manvi : mujhe kuch kehna hai...

Virat : kahin tumhe finally mujhse pyaar toh ni ho gaya...

Manvi : pyaar... Hua tha...aur dil bhi

Virat : toota tha... Aise mat dekho... Mujhe pta hai... I saw it in your eyes manvi ji...

Manvi : but u never asked me anything about it...

Virat : why would i ask about something that happened in the past... You know manvi... That past would never affect our relationship... Our friendship... Our marriage

Manvi : our love... Yes i m in love with you... I donno when i fell irrevocably for u virat... I just wanted to tell you about my previous relationship before i step into a new relationship with you... I dont want anything to come between us virat...

Virat : really...??? U mean it right...???

Manvi : yes i mean it... I love you virat... I really love u

Virat : i love you too manvi... You dont know how long i have been waiting for this... I love u soo much...

~~flashback ends~~

The thing that happened was nothing but the most beautiful moments of my life... That night we consummated our marriage... That night we became man n wife... Thay day we claimed each other... That night we made love... That night we made this little bundle of joy sleeping in my arms... That night we made our princess... Virat's princess... Meher... Meher vadera...

Oh dats my mobile ringing, i picked up my mobile n it was virat... My dearest pati parmeshwar...

Manvi : hello...

Virat : jaate hi bhool gayi kya biwi...????

Manvi : haan... Almost bhool gayi thi, par tumhara phone aa gaya... Meri badluck...

Virat : haaye re tumhara badluck... I will make sure main zindagi bhar tumhara peecha karu...

Manvi : aisa badluck h toh goodluck kisko chahie... I love u virat...

Virat : i love u too manvi... By d way where is my jaan...???? Is she missing dad or not...???

Manvi : right now she is sleeping but she was missing u... Daddy's daughter u see...

Virat : hmmm... u know i still feel two weeks is way too much... How will i live without u n meher for long two weeks...

Manvi : two weeks once in 5 years is nothing jaanu... Cmon...

Virat : ok ok i understand... Love u...

Manvi : love u tooo...

I disconnected the call n looked out of the window... This is my home town... The place i was born... The place where i opened my eyes... The place which was my limit... The place i never thought j would ever leave... The place where i turned from a small girl into a teenager... The place where i experienced all those teenage things n emotions... The place where i first realised that the heart in my chest wasnt just an organ to pump blood... It was something more... I felt it first tym here at this place... I fell in love in this city... My first love... The first love of teenage... This feeling can be understand only by the ones who have ever fallen in love in teenage... Jawani ka woh pehla pyaar... Woh pehla ehsaas... Woh pehli pehli baar dil ka dhadakna... woh din bhar kisi ke sapne dekhna... Woh baar baar aine mein dekhke khud ko sawaarna... Woh raaton ko jaagna... Woh aane wala kal ke sapne dekhna... Kitna khoobsurat hota h na pehle pyaar ka nasha... Uska khumar...lekin jab pehle pyaar mein dhokha milta h toh woh bhulae bhi nahi bhulta... Jab pehli baat dil toota h toh aisa lagta hai jeene ka koi karan hi nahi bacha... It feels as if this pain will kill us... It eats us up from within n forgeting that person seems almost impossible to do... It is like holding the person u loved with each n every broken piece of ur heart... Though we somewhere deep inside our heart knows that that person will never come back again but we still chose to wait for him at the very spot he left... But is it all worth...??? Worth for the guy who mercilessly tore ur soul n break ur heart into minute pieces... I donno the answers to these question but i know one thing n it is that " whatever happens... Happens for a reason... A good reason " cmon seriouly if all dis wouldnt have happened with me, i would have never got what i deserved... I would have never got married to virat... I would have never come across like a lovely n warm hearted person like my viru... Mere patidev... I love him soo much... I will love him till my last breathe n my little angel is beyond everything for me...

I reached the station n saw viren bhai n jeevika bhabhi waiting to pick me up... I waved my hand n shouted " viren bhai ". Bhai came n hugged me while jeevika bhabhi took meher from me... Bhai n bhabhi have met meher twice when they came to delhi... Bhabhi n meher seem to share a very unique relationship with each other.

>> part 2 if i get an overwhelming response... so cmon like the update n do comment... 😃 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for the os dear pm me the link nainu
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res *unres* wow naina superb os! lvd hw u potrayd virMan's relatnshp... VirMan's phn convo was too cute. . . Do update soon nxt part.
Edited by surovita - 12 years ago
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waiting waiting and excited😃
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Thinking of dividing the os into parts as it has bcum too long n its not even complete...
Should i update or should i first complete the os n then post it...???
Wat say guys...?????
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Jo karna hai jaldi jaldi karo...
But plz jyada wait nahi...
Plz...
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naina jitna likha h utna hi post kar do
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Lo ho gaya res ka unres.šŸ˜‰
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Badi jaldi update kar diya!🄳
NAINA! Ek aur dhamakedhar OS! Waaah! šŸ‘
VirMan and their little Meher ... 😳 adorable!
Aur cho chweet the way they fell in love ...hai. 😊
Ab koi kebab mein haddi mat beech mein le ana.
Aur Virat ko bhi Rishikiesh bula lo, pleeease! šŸ˜†
Aur woh raat ... todha detail mein bata na tha! 🤣

As usual AMAZING UPDATE!! šŸ¤—ā­ļø Love you Naina ā¤ļø


Edited by .aliyah. - 12 years ago
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So i will b updating the first update within an hour...
Stay tuned...
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resšŸ˜›
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Jab pehli baat dil toota h toh aisa lagta hai jeene ka koi karan hi nahi bacha



i don't know why but reading this and seeing the pic beneath cracked me up big time🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


anyways...you know na i'll love whatever u write(*condition applied)
loved it naina...ā­ļø
but who's the first love??karan?kabir?prem?šŸ˜›


*virat has to be the good guy.
Edited by daydreamer9 - 12 years ago

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