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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aashika_virman

read full story again..cant wait for epilogue😊

awww... reallly... it feel soo good aashika 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima06

Res+ unres = jalebi's comment [:p] i know
awwe enna cyte se update 😃 ab meko ye mat poochna k cute kaise hote 😆 okkk... nahi puchungi... 😆
Finally happy happy ending..? yes finally... 😃 Arrey i've thought k arohi is upset then it must b about arjun or it might that shabbir had done something...but nahi she was worried about manvi 😃 arrey best friend wala bond hai aakhir.. yeah mannu aaru besties u know... 😳 First she dont want to face her off wid shabbir n then she was feeling guity about what shabbir did...i mean it wasn't her fault but she was feeling guilty coz bcoz of his bro, her friend got hurt :O *uff enni lambi line kaisi likhi meny 😆 tune ye line bhavnaon mein behkar likhi jalebi... 😆 aww duppatta part was cute, arrey shabbir was confuse ny himself, pehle he loved her then he got to know k status b koi cheez hoti n in the end arrey no i want to rewind my life :/
*back to virman, awein me shabbir pe philosphy bta rahi 🤣* yeah i also thot the same... i thot jalebi ko shabbir pasand aa gaya 😛 i loved virat n meher's bonding.???u expressed perfectly 😃 meher was soo cute...
Finally virat got to know about the baby *phew* enne clue waste karwa diye 😆 kia hoga virat ka :P arrey when i read k virat become silent hearing the news, i've thought he's gonna faint here too 🤣 but naah yahha pe he became extra ordinary happy 😃 yes faint manvi hoti hui hi achi lagti hai, virat nahi... 🤣
haww meher was already feeling insecure 😆 kids are like this only!! They feel like as iff no one loves them :) 😆 virat ne kia logic de k why should meher have a bro 😆 coz manvi have one 🤣 fish was a member too 🤣 lol
it was an awesome update nainu n superb ending too 😃 bass agar me 1st a jate toh kia he acha hota 😆 thank u sooo much jalebi... 😃 i know jalebi...
keep rocking
love ya ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..
I though Virat would faint here as well..😆from the time I have seen the latest IV, I can't stop laughing how can a guy reach that way..Damn..!! But loved it..every bit...Meher's insecurity was nice...as kids take time to even accept their new sibling..n how parents tackle such issue..Which is sweet..Waiting for Epilogue..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome..

I though Virat would faint here as well..😆from the time I have seen the latest IV, I can't stop laughing how can a guy reach that way..Damn..!! But loved it..every bit...Meher's insecurity was nice...as kids take time to even accept their new sibling..n how parents tackle such issue..Which is sweet..Waiting for Epilogue..!!!

thank u fauzia... 😊
nahi nahi... i wouldnt let him faint in my ff atleast 😆
me too laughing from d moment i saw it 😆
it will be updated soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Naina
amazing part and u write so beautifully
meher insecurity even i can totally understand her... he he he
virman convo section, arohi section everything is mind blowing
thanx 4 informing me
loved it ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was such a nice update..

I liked virat n meher a lot...

espclly virats reaction after hearing dat he is gonna b daddy again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update he was happy when he was heard
good news and they both are love meher a lot
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
here i am posting the epilogue though i am not satisfied with it... i find it boring... just like a piece of crap... but this is what i come up with after trying soo hard... so please bardassht kar lena... aacha lga toh like kar dena aur nahi lga toh chup rehna... mujhe mat kehna bas... 😳i posted it today because... .(only abbay n meera n fatima know why 😉 )
n keertu u asked me to post somethina, so here it is...
EPILOGUE
" how dare you...??? leave it right now... " 8 years old meher shouted...
" haaawww... dad brought this for me " vihaan shouted who was no less than meher even though he is only 4...
" dad brought this for me u... u.. " meher warned vihaan.
" mummaaa... di is abusing... " vihaan shouted n started crying...
" what is the problem between you two...??? cant u both just sit quietly...??? " a pissed off manvi said.
"mumma... di hates me... " vihaan said holding manvi's dupatta while meher glared ta him as she would kill him any moment...
" he is such a liar... he took my mobile and is constantly playing games on it... n this idiot is saying that dad brought this mobile for him... " meher said irritating manvi even more...
" vihaan... stop this crying drama... tum bahut jyada nautanki ho gaye ho n sweetheart mum can make difference between real tears n the fake ones... return di's mobile right now... " manvi said in an authoritive tone.
" no body loves me... i am going to meet dad... " vihaan said.
" u are not going anywhere... n by the way tum jaoge kaise...??? " manvi questioned her little notorious prince.
" mere house mein na bahut saari cars n drivers hain... and dad told me its all for me... " vihaan innocently said.
" but dad loves me more... u are nothing but a mistake kido... " meher said while giggling...
" see... she called me a mistake mumma... " vihaan shouted and complained to manvi who was now looking at her children wondering when did they grow up... it seems as if yesterday only her little prince was born and now that little prince is fighting with daddy's princess.
" meher... please sweeatheart... dont repeat it again... " manvi went back to her room.
" mom but - " meher tried convincing manvi...
vihaan didnt try anything instead ran to vanshika's room n sat in front of her.
" ab kya hua...?? tumne fir di is fight kia...?? " vanshika asked vihaan...
" daadi wo bahut gandi hai... she fights with me... main toh bahut small baby hoon ... hai na daadi... " bihaan asked sweetily because his daadi can only save him.
" haan mere raj kumar... " vanshika said while kissing his forehead.
" daadi i also want a mobile like di... dad loves me... hai na daadi...?? " vihaan again asked.
" yes vihaan... " vanshika replied.
" daadi meher didi called me a mistake... wo jhooth bol rahi thi na... hai na daadi... ?? " vihaan again asked making a sad face.
" yes yes... di loves u soo much... wo gussa hogi na is liye tumko tease kar rahi hogi... " vanshika replied while control her laughter.
" daadi...?? " vihaan again asked.
" hmm " vanshika replied.
" yeh mumma ko kya ho gaya hai... bahut gussa kar rehti hai aaj kal... " vihaan asked.
" nothing baby... aap ne mumma ko tang kia hoga na isliye gussa ho gayi... " vanshika honestly replied.
" kahin dad ne mumme ko kuch kaha toh nahi...??? ho sakta hai na... hai na daadi...?? " vihaan continued speaking.
" hmm... ho sakta hai... go n ask your dad... " vanshika suggested vihaan...
vihaan ran out of the room n vanshika giggled to herself thinking that vihaan is just too different from virat... he loved cricket when he was a kid while vihaan loves talking... all thanks to manvi... apni mumma se mila hai usko ye talent...
scene shifts
manvi : main bhi na ainwai chilla diya meri nanhi si jaan pe... pta nahi aaj kyun itna sar dard ho raha hai... let me go n see where is he...
manvi went to meher's room n sit beside her...
manvi : princess...
meher : mumma i know i pissed u off today... i am sorry...
manvi : no baby... its just that i am having an headache n i shouted on you n vihu...
meher : mumma... i will get some medicine for u...
manvi : no baby... just give mumma huggy n i be alright...
meher hugged manvi and carressed her back.
meher : you will be alright mum... its just an headache...
manvi : hehe... its only an headache meher... dont over react...
meher : i have learned this from dad... we both love u soo much...
manvi : i know... mere patidev ki nanhi pari...
meher : love u mom but where is that brat...???
manvi : i dont know...
meher : daadi... he must be with his favourite daddi... i wonder how daadi patiently hears to his blabbering.
manvi : shut up meher... behave...
meher : ok ok... hehe...
manvi : lets go...
scene shifts
virat : do u get that...??? i need the sales report on my desk in the next two hours...
" hey you... " a high pitched sound came from outside...
just then leena, virat's assistant knocked on the door.
virat : whats this sound coming from outside...???
leena : sir actually vihaan sir... he is going up and down the elevator from the past half an hour.
virat : what...??? are u sure its vihaan...???
leena : yes sir.
virat : excuse me gentlemen..
virat rushed outside and saw his little prince creating havoc in his office...
virat : vihaan...???
vihaan : dad...
vihaan ran to virat and hugged his leg.
virat : what are you doing here buddy...???
vihaan : i was missing u dad...
virat : u came here alone...?? where is mom...??
vihaan : i came alone with the driver uncle...
virat : hmmm... lets go... get back to work guys, the show is over...
virat took vihaan in his arms n went to his cabin. virat made vihaan sit on HIS chair and he himself sat on the table.
virat : what will my baby have...???
vihaan : hot chocolate...
virat : and...??
vihaan : and a burger...
virat : okk thats great...
virat called the poen and was telling him to bring stuff for vihaan when vihaan interwined.
vihaan : make it two...
poen : okk vihaan baba...
virat (to poen) : you should listen to me instead...
poen : sir wo vihaan baba humare next sir honge na...
virat : now u can go...
vihaan : hehe...
scene shifts
manvi and meher looked for vihaan in vanshika's room n then in thw whole mansion.
manvi was now in tears and meher panicked on seeing a single tear flowing from her mom's eyes. vanshika smiled on seeing the mother daughter bond.
vanshika : have u called virat...??? vihaan was talking of going to virat...???
manvi : yes maa... he was saying so...
meher : i am gonna kill him... he made mom cry...
manvi : call up your dad...
meher called up virat
meher : dad... dad vihu is missing...
virat : sweetheart he isnt... he is in my office enjoying his hot chocolate n burger...
meher : what...??? what about me...?? you love him more... right...???
manvi snatched the mobile from meher.
manvi : v..virat...
virat : he is with me... dont worry... he is having fun... learning how to handle such a big business empire...
manvi : thank god... give the phone to him...
virat : oh cmon... we are coming back after sometime... n please meri princess ko sambhal lo... ab tak toh wo gusse mein lal ho gayi hogi and must be getting up to go to her room...
manvi : haan... par hua kya...???
virat : will tell you once i am back...
manvi : u are spoiling him...
virat : i spoiled u n then meher... why should i be partial with my kido...??
manvi : arghh... its useless talking to you virat...
virat : i know... bye...
manvi : bye...
after two hours...
"yeeeyyy "
meher : mum they are back... i wouldnt talk to dad...
manvi : me too...
meher eye's popped out on seeing virat picking up vihaan in his arms and tarun bringing some gifts and polythene in his hands and then followed sundar with some flowers in his hands...
meher : mom... see...
manvi : u guys had real fun... right...???
vihaan : yeah
virat : no... missed you both soo much taht ended up buying gifts for u n my princess...
meher : liar... now u love him more... right...??
virat : no princess... i love u more...
vihaan : dad... dad i forget to tell something...
manvi muttered " ab phodega bomb..."
virat : what...???
vihaan : di said that i am a mistake... is it...???
virat looked at manvi with his popped out...
virat : what did meher said...??? princess...
meher : dad...
virat : u really think so...??? hehe... thats funny...
meher : hahaha... i thought u got angry... love u dad...
virat : love u too my princess...
seeing this vihaan started crying...
manvi took him from virat's hand n he hugged manvi tightly...
vihaan : he doesnt love me...
manvi : no baby...
vihaan : he also thinks i am a mistake... but mistake toh nahi karni chahie na...
manvi : vihu... mumma loves u... n u know what ur daddy is a mistake...
virat heard it n took vihaan from manvi's arm making him stand on the floor n stood in front of her...
manvi : what,,,,???
virat : kya galat salat seekha rahi ho bacche ko...???
manvi : haaww... maine kya kia...???
virat : main mistake hoon...??
manvi : toh kya mera vihu mistake hai...???
virat : maine kab kaha aisa...???
manvi : tumne saath toh diya na meher ka...???
virat : haawww... jhoothi...
manvi : jhootha kahin ka...
while this was happening meher n vihaan looked at each other n bursted into laughter...
meher : okkk i am sorry...
vihaan : i am sorry...
virat : nahi galti toh meri thi...
manvi : nahi galti meri hai... mujhe chillana nahi chahie tha...
vanshika : listen all four of u... i am sorry... now come lets have dinner...
all four started laughing n went for dinner...
they are a happy family with small nok jhoks happening everyday... infact many times in one single day... but they love each other like hell... isnt it a perfect family...!!! it is... it is just perfect...
~~~~~~ BAS ITNI SI THI YE KAHANI ~~~~~~~~~
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BAS STORY KHATAM AUR MERA KAAM BHI... AB PASAND AAYI YA NAHI... NOT MY PROBLEM... I AM RUNNING AWAY... BYEEE...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved it.
loved the epilogue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am the 1stt.. Yesss...

Just too good yaar...
Loved it ...
But why you ended soo soon???

But awesome yaar..

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