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Disha

@daydreamer9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

"Shabbir : maan... agli baar humare beech kisiko mat aane dena aur na hi mujhe khud se door jaane dena... iss zindagi mein tum virat ki ho lekin iske baad ki har zindagi mein tum sirf meri hogi... promise me...

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Manvi : i promise... "

naina tell me one thing...if she truly loves virat then how could she promise shabbir to be his in next life?didn't make any sense to me.😕
care to explain?

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Athira soman

@athniamanvi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

me to get areality check... needed for me to realise the depth of my love for virat n now my love for virat has even strengthen more...
-------------> manvis love for virat wow

i don't like this shabir 🤔

nice update dear and thanks for the pm
❤️

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: daydreamer9
"Shabbir : maan... agli baar humare beech kisiko mat aane dena aur na hi mujhe khud se door jaane dena... iss zindagi mein tum virat ki ho lekin iske baad ki har zindagi mein tum sirf meri hogi... promise me...

_________

Manvi : i promise... "

naina tell me one thing...if she truly loves virat then how could she promise shabbir to be his in next life?didn't make any sense to me.😕
care to explain?

yes dishu i can certainly explain but u got to hear n understand my viewpoint... though i know we both have a difference in opinion everytym but still...

first of all... shabbir being manvi's first love will always effect her no matter how hard one denies that it doesnt... its human tendency to recall all the moment, he spent with a particular person he was in love, if he sees that person again in life.

secondly, what would have manvi replied to shabbir at that time... i didnt want her to behave like a tv serial types pati vrta patni types giving unnecessary lectures... i wanted to show her as a girl who just got a reality check n a girl who just lost whatever emotional baggage she was carrying from last 5 years.

thirdly, can any promise be greater than the vows a husband and a wife take at the time of getting married...?? 😳

so thats it... i am done...

Edited by naina927 - 13 years ago

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: athniamanvi
me to get areality check... needed for me to realise the depth of my love for virat n now my love for virat has even strengthen more...
-------------> manvis love for virat wow

i don't like this shabir 🤔

nice update dear and thanks for the pm
❤️

thank u athira 😊

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

UPDATING NEXT CHAPTER IN 10 MINUTES...

THIS IS PROBABLY THE THIRD LAST UPDATE OF THIS SS... OR MAY BE SECOND LAST... I HONESTLY DONT KNOW... 😳

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

I am not fully satisfied with the update but still i am updating it... u know why bcos aaj humari keertu bahut bore ho rahi thi n she was asking was update... so here i am posting it...

and if possible listen to the song " hum mar jaenge " from aashiqui 2

PART 5

i reached my house and dragged my feet inside. i saw everybody was sitting in the hall with lots of packets... no they were gifts n they were being unpacked and a smile was pasted on each and every face. i asked everybody what all was happening. viren bhai came forward with a smile on his face n asked me to go to my room. i was confused and went into my room when i saw what i least expected. i saw virat... my love and my jaana meher busy with each other. i whispered his name with softness in my voice and tears in my eyes. he turned around n smiled at me. a smile that healed me in a way nothing could. i ran upto him and hugged my small world. the moment i felt virat's arm around me, i broke into tears... i donno why... but i just did. whatever happened in the past one hour shook me from within and i felt as if i would have lost my everything. i would have lost my family, my husband, my daughter and each n every bit of happiness i have in my life. meher's voice broke my trance " mumma dad's here... no crying... right dad ". we broke the hug n i looked at meher n nodded in a yes n said " yes baby... i know". virat looked at me n put the hair falling on my face behind my ear n said " missed you so much... did u like the surprise...?? " i replied " like... i loved it virat... thank u for coming here... i missed u soo much... i love you... " virat looked at me in awe in replied " and i love you too mrs. vadera ". we had a cute eye lock while meher again said " what about me daddy...?? didnt you miss me...?? ". virat giggled n replied " aww... how can you think daddy will not miss his princess...?? daddy missed you thats why he landed up here... samjhi meri jaan ". meher thought for a while n said " haan... samajh gayi... i love you dad... ". i never say a word when my husband n his darling daughter have a conversation... when these two are talking there is no room for a poor innocent soul like me. meher again asked virat " dad... what about my fishie...?? is she eating at right time...?? n dadi... didnt she send anything for me...?? " i was looking at virat n meher which are the milestone of my life. virat sat on the bed with meher on his lap n told her " fishie is missing you... eating at right time... n dadi sent a huge basket of chocolates for you... n i brought soo many gifts for you... but u didnt thank me... " . meher pouted n said " but u didnt give me chocolates... n i dont know how to play PS 3..." this was enough now n i had to speak now. " virat... u got a PS 3 for meher... cmon she is only 4 n no more chocolates now... " i said with my hands on my waist. virat made meher sit on the bed n moved towards me saying " manvi trust me... i was thinking what all to bring for meher n i couldnt come up with anything interesting... so i thought why not PS 3... n u know- " i cut him in between n continued " woww... two months before u brought an i phone for her... what will she do with an i phone...?? virat you are spoiling her... ". virat relpied " manvi i am doing this for u all... for mom, for u n for meher... i want to give her everything... everything which i probably didnt get when i was a child... i never got the love of my dad... n u know what i want to become the world's best dad for my daugfhter... i want to pamper her... i want to love her... u are getting my point... right...?? ". i sighed n understood his feeling n replied " yes i understand but... ". virat said " no if and but manvi... its okkk... ". i had no option but to agree to my dear husband " i understand hubby... so u brought that gift shop outside..." . virat smirked pulling me towards him n said " arrey i am cuming to meet my in laws... i cant come like that without any gift... khali haath thodi aata... " i replied " toh delhi ka poora mall utha le aaye mere pyaare patidev... woww... waise kya kya laye...?? ". virat leaned towards me so that he can skip this very topic but i put a finger on his lips n said " first tell me what all things u brought warna... " virat made a cute pout and said " sherni... poori sherni ho tum... ". "jaldi btao... " i ordered virat and he started saying " i bought a rolex watch for dad n viren... n a suit piece for dad n a shirt for viren, 5 to 6 sarees for maa n jeevika bhabhi each... n a gold chain for maa n a pair of earings for jeevika... apni beti ke lie thode se gifts aur... bas..itna hi... thats it " my mouth was now opened in o shaped n said n shock " thats it...?? i mean... cmon virat... u brought so much things for them... why cant u think n spend money wisely... what was its need...?? did they ask u to pay compensation or toll tax in forms of gifts...?? ". we were busy shouting when meher shouted n jumped on the bed " why dont u guys chill...?? fir shuru ho gae dono... dadi theek kehti hai... pagal hai dono... " we both asked " what...?? ". meher looked down realising what she had said " i didnt say anything... dadi said it that day but i dont know why she said so... she probably thinks u both are mad... ". i started giggling listening to my sweetheart's explanation n pinched virat as he was narrowing his eyes n staring at meher. whole day passed like day n i must say everybody made a good bond with virat in a matter of few hours only. we all had dinner n virat n me made to our room while meher was dancing n jumping in the whole house... she was really not in the mood of sleeping tonight. i shouted at her " its enough now meher... stop jumping like a monkey n come... its time to sleep now... ". meher hid behind viren bhai n peeped at me n showed her tongue to me. i again said " come out meher right now... ". meher ignored looking at me n held a fistful of bhai's kurta n said " lemme sleep with you mamu... please... ". bhai picked her up in his arms n pecked her cheek n said to me " let her sleep with us tonight... cmon mannu... me n jeevika will take care of her... ". i agreed n came back to my room where virat was lying on the bed like it was his shahi raj gadi. i closed the door n laid beside him. he automatically forward his right hand n i got into his embrace, my head resting on his arm n my hand securely wrapped around him.
manvi : i have to tell you something... (while playing with his tee)
virat : we met after so many days and u still want to talk...
manvi : please listen to me na... i am dying to tell you something...
virat : what...?? dying to tell me n stuff... what is bothering you manvi...??
manvi : woh.. actually... u now na why i never came back to rishikesh...
virat : i know... but why is it coming up now...??
manvi : because i met him today...
virat : stop this right now... (his body going stiff...)
i felt that virat is really not interested in talking about shabbir n i wouldnt do anything that would hurt him.
virat : what did he say...??
i looked at virat for a minute n told him everything that happened excluding the part that i am pregnant. i dont want to tell him such a good news like this, in this situation. i was looking at him expecting for him to say anything but he was standing near the window thinking something. suddenly that 7 feet distance seemed like a distance that would be difficult to cover even in the next 7 lifetimes. my heart was thumping loudly n my eyes began to turn watery thinking what might be coming up next. his silence was killing me n making me more and more impatient n guilty... i was feeling guilty... guilty because for a moment i forgot that i am his wife and the mother of his kids... i was about to melt in shabbir's arms... my first love was about to make me go weak but just at the right time, virat's love saved me and made me decide what i want from life, whom i want to spend my life with, who is more important to me. shabbir's affection was about to make me again that young girl of 20 who got betrayed in love but virat's true love saved me n reminded me that i am no longer that young girl... i am a married woman now who is a wife, mother and daughter-in-law. aaj wo sab suni hui baatein sach lag rahi hai ki kyunki maine kuch palon ke liye hi sahi wo sab mehsoos kia tha... aaj mere pehle pyaar ki kasak dubara jaagne waali thi, log sahi kehte hai pehla pyaar humesha special hota hai par shayad wo log ye bhool jaate hain ki saacha pyaar sabse upar hota hai... virat ke liye mere dil mein saccha pyaar hai, wo pyaar jisse main marte dum tak nahi bhula paungi... wo pyaar jiske naa milne par meri saanse ruk hi jaengi...
manvi : v..vi..virat... main -
virat : just shut up...

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fatima

@fatzo.BFF.spyoo

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

res :D
unres 🤣
jalebu supa fast ho gaye...nahi 😛
awww finally virat ki entry 😊 woww virat is being so caring n responsible too..he brought gifts for everyone...thats sweet!!
While manvi was asking virat that what he got for everyone, then i thought that she's gonna de;and a gift for herself 🤣 but it turn out to b lyk a pure biwi, why did u spend that much money..lol..haww Ps3 for meher :o :o n iphone too :O hehe..but he was being right with his prospective..arrey he wanted to give her daughter a princess wali life 😃
haww i was rofling at the part wen meher said *u both are mad* 🤣 n then no no i didnt said that, dadi was saying that 🤣
last part omg virat said shut up :O haww but i think wo may be gussa na ho manvi se n being protective, he scoldes her ya phirr it might b k he leave her but ye option valid nhi laging :p
arrey but me kyu tension lun awein ki, nain hai na 😉
fab update nainu, usi ka asar k mera unres jaldi aya 🤣
keep rocking, take care 🤗
thanks for the upd!!

Edited by fatima06 - 13 years ago