VIRMAN ||TERE ISHQ NE MOHE RANG DALA| epilogue upt - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago
NAINA!! ur ff rocks!!! 😆!!! continue sooon pliiis!!!:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
New story!!!!😃
Great concept!!!!!!! Loved the bonding between virman in this story!!!!!!😊

i though it was an end when Manvi realizes about what Virat is meant for her, the story is still there...with some twists maybe coming up!😃

Update soon...& also update DMG, waiting for that story for a long time!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
there is surely something happend to shabir i hope only it doesnt affect VIRMAN,
and manvi couldnt tell him about her pregnancy ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
plzzz plzzz continue soon waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved ur story
it was awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome story progress 😊 and yes i agree this scene was much needed
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...
awe virat is so loving...
it was truely a suprb update... jus loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shreeya121

awesome update dear...

awe virat is so loving...
it was truely a suprb update... jus loved it...

thank u soo much 😊
glad that u liked it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
the last part coming in next 10 minutes...!!!!
but dont worry there will ba an epilogue... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 6 BEGINNING EDITED... DO READ IT PLEASE... 😊
PART 7
i held arohi's hand n said " aaru... come with me... we need to go... " and dragged her to my bedroom.
i striaghtaway said " now tell me... " while arohi looked down n asked " kya...?? "

i put my hand on her shoulder n said " i know something is bothering you... tell your mannu aaru "
arohi burst into tears n said " mannu... mannu i am sorry ".
i looked down n arohi continued " i am sorry for what happened yesterday... i am sorry...it shouldnt have happened... bhai... actually bhai really loves you mannu... n he just couldnt control his feelings... my brother has been going through hell... i seen him missing you mannu... i have seen him suffering and repenting... i feel so helpless that i couldnt help the two most important people of my life when they were going through their thick n thin... "
" you dont have to feel bad aaru... teri kya galti thi... jo kuch bhi hua wo shayad humari kismat thi... har pyaar ki taqdeer mein milan nahi hota... n i never thought i would say this - but i am happy all this happened between me and shabbir... you are not at fault buddy..." i tried consoling arohi.
arohi took out something from her bag n with another hand held my hand.
" bhai asked me to give this to you... he said he has no right to keep anything of yours with him... "
i looked at the dupatta arohi just placed in my hand.
" ye toh kahin gum gaya tha ' i said with tears in my eyes.

arohi said " bhai took this with him when he was going to mumbai... tumhari koi nishaani apne saath le jaana chahte the... "
i looked at arohi with shock written on my face " so u helped him in all this...?? "
arohi smiled with tears in her eyes n said " yes mannu... what to do i chose my brother that time over you..."
i smiled n hugged arohi n asked her " is he okk...??? "
arohi replied " he isnt okk... but bhai khud ko sambhal lega... i trust him mannu... he will move on in life someday..."
" lets go outside now... meri beti ab tak bahar toofan le aai hogi ya fir baap beti milke udham macha rahe honge " i said to light the mood.
arohi giggled n after some time she left.
i came back to our room n was cleaning the mess created by my dear hubby when i felt a pair of arms wrapped around me.
" i love you meri princess ki mamma " he said kissing my cheek.
" i love you too dad " i said.
" i love you three... " virat replied.
" oh god pati dev... i just dropped a hint n u ignored it... argghhh... " i said to myself.
" virat... what have u thought about our future...?? " i asked virat to just start a topic.
" future...?? kya sochun...?? maine itni planning kar rakhi hai, that i can take retirement after five years n enjoy our life to the fullest... and then also we wouldnt run out of money in the next 50 years... " virat proudly said.
i again shouted in my mind... this mn is just impossible... why isnt he reading between the lines... i calmed myself down n asked " virat... i mean about us... about our future... our family... "
" what about us baby...?? we five are so very happy in our small family... " virat innocently smiled n replied.
" what...?? five...?? does he already know... no how will he know...?? " i wondered.
" how five...??? " i asked.
" arrey u n me, then meher, then mom n gold fishie... " virat replied...
" but i thought u n me are one... " i pouted.
" we are sweetheart... " virat said as a matter of fact.
" virat i want to tell u something... " i said stammering...

" tum pregnant ho kya... ?? " virat mockingly said unaware that he was absolutely correct...
" haan... " i smiled with my smile reaching my eyes. but soon it faded as i felt virat's grip on me getting loosened.
i immediately turned around to see virat looking at me with his eyes wide open n his mouth open.
" virat... are u okk jaan...??? " i said while shaking his shoulders.
virat didnt gave me a reply which scared the hell out of me. what if he doesnt want another child... this very thought shook me from within n i started shivering thinking if he asks me to get rid of it, which i know he would never suggest. but still i was scared... may be a mother in me was scared while a wife had full confidence on her husband.
" virat why are u saying anything...?? u are scaring me jaan... " i said slowly in a weak voice.
" kitna time ho gaya...??? " virat asked.
" its over a month... i got to know about it last week only " i replied looking down fearing whats coming up next.
"wwwooo " virat shouted n i shivered.
he picked me up in his strong arms n spinned me n now i knew that he was more happy than i was... he put me down n hugged me...
" i am sooo happy taht i acnt tell you... i will again become a daddy... i mean congrats to u too to be mumma... but i feel like i am flying... junior vadera coming... wohhhuuu... that would be great... this time a baby boy that would complete our family... i am way too happy... " virat said in one breath.
i was overwhelmed with his reaction and pulled him even more closer n whispered " now we are complete... "
" u both forgot me...??? " we broke the hug and looked at the source of the voice which was none other than our little bundle of joy.
i went up to meher n sat on my knees n said " awww... we cant forget u honey... mumma papa loves you jaana... ask dad if u dont believe me... "
meher ran to virat... " so typical... daddy's daughter " i uttered under my breath.

virat picked her up in his arms n made up with meher in a matter of few minutes. really dont know what stories does he tell her n she... she agrees on it in a blink of an eye.
virat asked meher " sweetie... u know me n mom are thinking to get you a younger brother... whats ur take on it...?? ". meher looked at virat with shock written on her face n then she looked at me. i know my sweetheart is utterly confused from her sweet daddy's words.
" what happened meher...?? are u not happy baby...??? " i asked meher sitting beside virat.
" what is happening...?? mujhe kuch samajh ni aa raha... my brother...?? " meher said.
" yes baby... your small brother... a cute small baby with whom u can play... " i said to meher while virat looking at both of us in awe.
" but i have so many dolls n a new PS 3... why a small baby...?? " meher questioned me but constantly looking at virat.
" because... " i dont know what to say... i was speechless...
" because every girl needs a brother like mumma has viren mamu... " virat very calmly said to meher...
" oh... okk... " meher again agreed to whatever her dad said.
" again... " i said while my dear husband giggled in response...
i was getting up from the bed when a felt a tug on my dupatta. " virat... " escaped from my mouth but when i turned i saw meher was the one holding my dupatta.
i sat again n asked " whats the matter sweetheart...??? "
meher was about to cry n she innocently asked " will you both love me less now...?? will dad not bring gifts for me...?? will u not sleep with me at night mumma...?? "
i hugged her n said " no baby... we love you very much... n no one will ignore u after the small baby comes... you are dad's princess n it will remain like this... n coming to mumma... mumma loves meher sooo much... more than anything in the world... u dont need to worry mera baccha... ".
" promise" meher asked hiding herself in my chest.
" we promise meli princess " saying this virat joined us in a hug.
in the evening, we broke the news in front of the family. they were so happy that i can never forget their happy faces n million words are also less to express that zeal and enthusiasm.
at that night
meher was sleeping between us n i was unable to sleep thinking of meher's reaction. virat noticed it n asked me the reason...
virat : whats wrong manvi...?? everything is so perfect but still you are lost somewhere...
manvi : virat i am thinking about meher.
virat : what are u thinking about...???
manvi : virat meher being the single child has been pampered a lot n now she is insecure... insecure thinking what if she doesnt get that love, time, space and attention after this baby comes... she is scared thinking what if the new baby will take all your love... virat meher is very attached to you n you are her world, her universe... she is ur princess as u say... so we have to be extra cautious virat. in the process of taking care of our new one , we have to act in a way that doesnt make meher feel ignored even for a second. u know what i mean... i mean she can feel neglected sometimes n even think that no one loves her like they used to. kids are over sensative u see...
virat : i know what u mean n stop worrying... when virat is here not to fear... meher is my priced possession and she will always be... even after she gets married na, she will be my princess n i will make sure she gets best of things in her life...

manvi : i love you virat...
virat : i love you too...
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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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