VIRMAN ||TERE ISHQ NE MOHE RANG DALA| epilogue upt - Page 23

Created

Last reply

Replies

329

Views

40.9k

Users

69

Likes

800

Frequent Posters

JESNIA thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
GREAT UPDATE.
BUT WHAT HAPPEND TO VIRAT?
kittu_11 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Superb update 👏

Iphone for 4yr old hehehe
Manvi told him everything continue soon 😊
fatzo.BFF.spyoo thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927


<font size="3">okkk jalebi... 😊will wait for ur unres 😊gdnyt</font>


see jalebi ne kitna fast unres kia nainu 🤣
virumanu thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowin
loved it
plz cntinue soon
shaimah thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Continue soon and please do pm me
naina927 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
here goes the second last part of this ss...
if possible try to listen to " aapke pyaar mein hum sawarne lge " from " raaz"
(made a new fb ac... u can add me guys https://www.facebook.com/naina.singhania.338)
PART 6
manvi : v..vi..virat... main -
virat : just shut up...
manvi : please...
virat : ek baari baat samajh ni aati...
i said nothing but the tears flowing my eyes said it all... i wished like i could go back in time n rectify all my mistakes... i felt like killing myself because this fear of losing virat was making me go insane. but if something really happens like this, if virat really leaves me then i wouldnt be able to kill myself... how can i kill this life taking shape inside me. i was immersed in my thoughts n taers continuously flowing when i fekt something cold against my skin. i opened my eyes to see virat cupping my face n wiping my tears. i somehow managed to say " i am.. so..sorry... i didnt mean... mean to.. hurt you... ".
virat : i am also sorry... i shouldnt have reacted this way... if u wanted, u could have hided this encouter from me but u told me... when you can trust me, why cannot i...?? manvi actually the thing is that i love you beyond everything... n the thought of being away from u kills me... i feared that i would lose you n losing you means losing every reason of my existence.
i was looking at him n thinking what did i do to get so lucky... what did i do to deserve a husband like virat.
virat : did u really feel like forgiving him n getting back to him...??
manvi : vi.. virat..
virat : did u really...??
i hugged him instantly unable to see pain in those eyes which only n only held love for me n today there was a doubt n a question in those eyes...
manvi : i forgave him but the thought of getting back to him never came in my mind bcos getting back to him meant going away from you which i cannot think even in the worst of my nightmare. leaving you means leaving every bit of my happiness... i can never leave you... i love you soo much virat... i would prefer dying rather than cheating you n leaving you...
virat : i love you too... manvi ji...??
i broke the hug n looked at him because he very rarely calls me manvi ji...
manvi : ji virat ji...
virat : manvi ji ab toh sab solve ho gaya hai toh...
manvi : toh...
virat : toh aa ab laut chalein... ab yahan kya kaam...
manvi : abh toh sabse mile hain... thode din ke baad chalegein na...
virat : i hope tumhe sochne ke liye time nahi chahie... i mean choosing between him n me..
manvi : i will kill you if say this again... i only n only love u... do u get that...??
virat : what if i love someone else...???
manvi : then i would murder you virat... khoon pee lungi main tumhara... samjhe...??
virat : hehe... haan... ab...???
manvi : ab kya...??
virat : ab patch up time... (leaning close to her face)
manvi : so jao chup chaap... so scared the hell out of me...
virat : this is not done yaar...
virman slept in each other's embrace letting go the past n dreaming of their future together.
next morning...
i woke up with a smile on my face as i saw virat beside me sleeping like a small baby... isnt it funny that he still looks like baby while sleeping when he himself is a father of a 4 years old girl n my nona... myshona babu (placing hand on my tummy).
i whispered to meri nanhi si jaan " daddy is still unaware of ur existence... but i will tell him... u dont worry mela baby... n as u heard whatever happened yesterday... better not tell it not anybody n try to forget it... n apne dad ki woh pampering waali baatein toh pakka bhool jana baby... let daddy spoil her princess but mumma will not let my prince to get spoiled... you will ba a responsible n protective brother like your viren mamu... you will love meher the way mamu loves your mumma... okkk... good boy... love u baby... "
i got up n was dressing in front of the mirror when i heard virat asking tarun to bring his coffee...
" tarun... coffee le aa yaar... "
i sometimes wonder what kind of life is this when every morning the first thing on the mind of my husband is tarun n his black coffe... how i wish someday virat would wake up n call me name instad of tarun's. ibrushed all those thoughts away n sat near virat n ruffled his hair...
" there is no tarun in your in laws house... you have to manage with this manvi vadera only... "
virat opened his eyes n realised that he wasnt in his master bedroom n said " sorry... actually... "
" i know... " my reply said it all n he got it n smiled at me taking me again his arms. now i am really expecting something romantic but what virat next said blew my mind off " manvi... tarun isnt here but i can get a black coffee... right...???"
i got up from the bed with disaapointment written on my face n said " sure... n i wil bringte newspaper also along with it... ". one thing i forget to tell yu, virat loves pissing me off n he never leaves a chance. he chuckled n replied " aww... u are such a sweetheart ". argghhh i went to the kitchen to make coffee... no black coffee for my patidev.
" good morning bhabhi... " i greeted jeevika bhabhi as she was alraedy working in the kitchen...
" good morning manvi... do u need anything...??? " she replied.
" actually i want a black coffee for virat n i hope meher didnt trouble you guys yesterday night... "
" no... she is a sweetheart... "
i took the coffee n newspaper to my room just to see that virat wasnt there... i wondered where he might be. i looked for him n found him chit chaating with bhai in the garden and by the expression on virat's face i know he was surely making fun of me or telling one or another stories to bhai. i was smiling at them when i felt a tug at my dupatta... i looked down to find meher standing there while rubbing her eyes...
" open your tiny miny eyes my honeybun... " i said to her while holding one of her hand n moved towards bhai n virat.
" good morning " i said to them n to my surprise viren bhai burst into laughter as if some realised laughing gas there.
" what happened bhai...?? "
" nothing... " bhai replied trying hard to control his laughter.
" what did u tell him virat...?? " i asked virat.
virat said nothing n took the cup from the tray, kept it at the table n picked meher in his arms.
" ggm meri princess... "
" ggm to u too dad... " meher replied n kissed his cheek.
me and bhai suddenly asked " whats ggm...?? "
meher replied " oh mumma... its goody goody morning... " and gave everybody-knows-it look
me and bhai looked at each other because we giggled.
bhai said " your daughter is just like you mannu... remember u also used to be naughty like her n the times when u used to hide my favourite watch n ask for chocolates in return... "
virat remarked " very demanding... i must say "
" dont embarrass me... " i said n was about to go inside when i saw arohi coming towards us.
i called her " arru... come here... "
arohi came n i introduced her to virat...
virat : so finally... i have heard a lot about your friendship with manvi n i really wonder how you handled her all these days...
ariohi giggled n replied " aww... so u seem to be very tired of my mannu jija ji... never mind leave her here with us for few months na... "
virat : arrey nahi nahi... tedhi hai par meri hai... wapas lene hi toh aaya hoon saali sahiba...
i was enjoying this but i noticed was really wrong with arohi... i can sense it...
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
naina927 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
will reply to all the comments and will send pm later
naina927 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sana...

me first...running to read...

CONGRATS ON BEING NUMBER 1 SANA 😃
naina927 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

First of all i love tat song :D n coming to the update it was brilliant as always Naina 👍🏼 i juz loved each n every bit of it ❤️ Finally our hero ki entry 😉😉 meher is baat hi alag hai she is soo sweet 😛 baap aur beri mil jaaye toh bechari maa ko sab bhool jaate hai...meri mannu *pouts* 😆 haww virak ne meher ko Ps 3 not only tat i phone bhi diyaa tha...itni acchi choti si bacchi ko 😲😛 par virat ke baad main bhi dam hai ...he want to make her daughter feel like princess :D haww manvi tell everything to virat...it is a good thing par i hope virat kuch galad mat samjhe...😔 manvi feelings were portrayed so well 👏👏 superb Nainaa⭐️⭐️ waiting for next update...looking forward...thanx for the pm in advance Nainaa🤗🤗

I too love that song bhabhi 😃 high 5 😃virat is bent on spoiling meher but he loves her beyond everything... so its okk... 😳 😉 go n raed the next part... answer de dia hai maine 😉
naina927 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Huma0301

OH MY POOR SOUL -did virat jus say shut up to manvi but she told him all the truth omg 😲 ab kya hoga ab wohi hoga jo manjoor-e-naina hoga 😉

are manvi jaldijaldi tell him ur pregnant maybe that will cool his anger down heehee
lovely update naina- kasam se this meher is jus too adorable feel lyk pulling her cheeks i know huma... 😃
the main highlight of this update for me was the way u described the difference between pehla pyaar and sacha pyaar - seriously hats off to u cuz those words were 1000% sachiii thanx for making my believe about sacha pyaar so pakka cuz I thought I was the only crazy soul her thought about sacha wala love lyk that 😳 no no... i am with you... mere bhi love ke concepts aise hi hai... 😉 thank u soo much for this part
btw - hum mar jayienge is one of my fav songs these days - in college wen I get bored I listen to that song over n over again just love it 😉
fab update naina - continue soon
n sorry got a bit carried away with my comment i loved ur comment huma...

read in black

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".