Arhi FF: Unforgettable. Completed!! - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daljeet

Wow Loved the update. It was worth reading. Pick up the pace please. I can't wait to see Raizadas reaction and how things are now.


But I still loved the pace pf today's chapter. Loved Lavanya and Aman.


Pace is going to be slightly slow...I just want to explore each instance and emotion. But they are going to be in Delhi soon..keep enjoying and giving the feedback. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gopikaaji

😊...let them have peace...


Nope...not so soon!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliantly written ..
Came across this while browsing the redemption list...and was blown away
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

the last lines of this chapter were so so amzing...

loved it to core. amzing


Thank you!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aura9

so, finally you updated.


Yes, I did. Next update tomorrow.. Hope you keep on liking it!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: serendipitylove

ASR is being ASR...i like! :) But he's suffering as well...i double like!!

I love the gaurded reserve that Khushi has around him...He totally deserves it... The way he had to prove to Aman that he won't hurt her...And how the old memories flit through both their minds of him ruthlessly trying to break Khushi...The impatience while she has her tea...The pleasure she takes in making him wait..! They both are being true to their characters... I loved his inner repentance and his vow to love her and woo her till she gives in along with the steely resolve to never let her out of his sight!!! I'm reminded of the ending of ur 1st chap, where he screams to an absent Khushi that she is the heartless ruthless one not him because of how he suffered for 12 long months coz of her absence..
I'm now waiting for some ASR-ish romance and wooing and an unrelenting Khushi!!!!

Thanks for the PM..Update soon...


Thank you. All this pressure is getting to me you know!!!

😃Just joking...will do my best!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ameena671

wonderful update loved it thank you for pm.


Thanks. Keep reading!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank god i stumbled upon this...

the major test starts now as she reaches Dehli and finds out and meets the rest of the family.

anxiously waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the story...
Read it all in one go...
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Posted: 12 years ago

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