THE LOCKET(5) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED 1 - Page 96

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi u updated..y no pm! Did u clear ur pm list? Nyways superb update! Poor Dev! Dadi is a genius! update soon! Well written..do pm me!

I'll add you to the PMs. Thanks.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Greek mythology goes over my head but the characteristics of a certain Goddess resembles mine, or so had the poll I took spoke LOL.

I may be late but can never leave anything you write behind Avi. Me lubs you!

Me too...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thank you Krati! I am glad that their story is interesting to everyone. For your support..🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
finally am here !!!!!!!!!

surprised to see Dev soo irritated...and glad that he is...atleast now he should realise how NT feels whenever he irritates her...😳

Dev affected by NT...now thats good...
i love Dev-tara scenes in your story Avi.. y is it so? 😕 guess the reason is u n the way u portray them...
So NT has a bitter past , but the burn? hadnt she left her past loong bk ? no i guess...

glad that he called up geet n left the place before she woke up...i was worried if he stays back n she mu him...anyways am glad that you have given Dev a reason to soften up to her...

loved the part...sorry for being late dearie...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Avi kya aaj apni Madhu ka Happywala birthday hain😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dev toh pyar mein pasta hogaya
nice update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Avi kya aaj apni Madhu ka Happywala birthday hain😕

Haan Heytal. It's Madhoya's birthday...
Sowie for late replies... am in the middle of lunch stuffs...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Haan Heytal. It's Madhoya's birthday...
Sowie for late replies... am in the middle of lunch stuffs...



Its ok Avi
Wished her
Enjoy your Sunday
😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reply to your comment 😊

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3611985&PID=84535680&#84535680
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

First and foremost so sorry for late comment



Ay Ay Aye Phasa😉
Dev bura phasa
lekin bahot mazaa aaya
😆 😆 😆
I liked it too. Show off hai toh thoda line mein lana zaroori tha...
Bechaare Nakul ko kitna sunaya🤔

Tikhi mirchi ke saath rehke oops 😉tikhi mirchi khaate khaate
pheeka pasta kaise accha lagega😳

Dadi sensing an alert😈


So I am too smart for you has landed himself in a big big problem😕
Pari's immaturity and constantly tagging on irking him
Though I am happy that inspite of him knowing about her feelings he is keeping his distance as well as trying not to be rude or snappy at her

He is doing it as a favor to her father and in his heart he knows she is too innocent so as a protection too.

Like it is said expect the unexpected
Dev missing his shrew😳
To distance himself from her, her thoughts and also to pamper his bruised ego he cut himself off from Chopra project only to regret it

The chilled out attitude gone down the drain now was the time to slog and Dadi's time to seek revenge😈

Setting him up with his shrew😉

Daadi is taking advantage of the fact that they are always competing against each other.

This line really cracked me up
Ms. Kapoor who was looking at him like one looks at a fly in their coffee.

😆 😆 😆
I liked that too. My hubby says I have that look sometimes when I talk to someone I don't like.


About the dream😆 see I was right partly pink nighty laces your addition😉


Dev finally acknowledging and accepting all the qualities of Miss Kapoor. Admitting to himself that were in sync mentally and them together was surely a winning combo 😊


NT hurt and Dev helps her
His restlessness and worry for her, him smacking himself mentally for troubling her all the while, he noticing a slightly weak and frail I-star and somewhere feeling guilty for her state😒


Probably one of the rear insight of vulnerable I-star 'looks are indeed deceptive' sometimes😔

True. I don't like to reveal vulnerabilities I-star has no choice now.
Doctor reveals one of her closely guarded truth and Dev respecting her privacy and and decides to back out
😃

Fantastic update yaara
superbly penned down
just loved it
🤗 🤗

Heytal🤗 for your support always!
You know more than anything I am so glad that Dev Tara are making a place with the readers.

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