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Posted: 12 years ago

#931

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
I think I'm more eager to read about Dev and I-star then Maan and Geet... Is that bad? lol I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update, Avi!

I won't feel bad. It is more fun and easier to write the mirchi stuff. MG takes a lot more time.

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Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#932

Originally posted by: Tyro
Changes r in order ...

Thanks Jyoti..

Originally posted by: dumas
awesome update poor dev is losing his mind. nt is driving him mad just breathing around him and she is hurt burnt mark what happened to her loved the update amazing thanks for the pm

Glad you liked it Kathrina😊

Originally posted by: kiran_rati
superb update dear
thanx for the pm
cont soon

Thank you Kiran.

Originally posted by: mandy15
fabulous update dear:)

fantastic :)

Glad you liked it

Originally posted by: fatema_007
this is the very 1st time i am enjoying reading a Dev-Naintara's story 😃

Your comment made my day. It is easy for people to love Maan and Geet but having an interest in someone else, that is what I wanted to do.😃

Originally posted by: -Mishu-
Fabulous update...

Thanks Mishu.😊

Originally posted by: kashtilover
nce part 😊

Thanks!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#933

Originally posted by: reachsky2011
Thank you very much...for updating yesterday itself...

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Originally posted by: reachsky2011
I was wondering which song will u use here...

Originally posted by: reachsky2011
n u didn't use any

For the first time he got out of his happy go lucky nature and saw her as a person. Her hurt disturbed him so much that all his fooling around stopped. There was no music esp. for that reason. For shock value.

Originally posted by: reachsky2011
first time I guess Dev is running away ...
too much sugar from Pari...n spice from NT...

Originally posted by: reachsky2011
he is realising her value in his life...

Originally posted by: reachsky2011
next will be Maaneet ...me waiting for silent love...

Yes, Dev has to grow as a character. As a businessman, as a person who can love and be strong also. Right now he has everything too easily..😆

Yup, Maaneet next.

Thanks for the support Sky.

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#934

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya
that was an intense update ! to avoid the shrew and the feelings she is raising, he was trapped with the overflowing sweetness of pari . there is a change in him...from a playboy...easy going... happy with his life...to irritable...angry with himself...not able to either control his thoughts or avoid a clinging baby...! and what happened to naintara...all those bruises...burnt marks...waiting...

Glad you caught all I was trying to portray with Dev. He has to grow up and mature and some of this was towards that. Of course he will still be fun but he needs to be strong enough that NT will love him. Thanks Kavya.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#935

Originally posted by: krati5
dev... bechara... i would like to dedicate a song which i think suit him better...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=fg9G1dacXjk

oh... poor guy... sach mein.. kab tak uski aachai ka fayda uthaya jayega...😆. he needs d courage of jhansi ki rani... khus is terrible helplessness se freedom ke liye.. utha talwar aur khtm kr de sab pblms ko... ds d first ff where i m likng dev moe thn maan...😕... u r too good avi...👏

Thank you Krati! I am glad that their story is interesting to everyone. For your support..🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#936

Originally posted by: impoojaverma
i loved this part
there is some progress in DEV-NT relation although its really slow.
pari's constant nagging had made dev to loose his temper. well d way she was behaving with him any normal person will fed up of her
but m confused how did Nt got that burning marks on her shoulder???

NT has a past which will be revealed further along.

Sorry for the slow progression of relationships. That is my fault in the way I write.😕 If I speed it up it will end too soon.

Thanks for reading.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#937

Originally posted by: heytal

😃

I am happy for that, kyun ki mere saath who kabhi nice nahi hoti...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#938

Originally posted by: heytal
Avi tujhe Bhagwaan aur terewale blue ki kasam
Please mujhe apni pm list se mat nikalna😉

As if I could Heytal..😲 Aashu ko nikalungi..😆

tune promise kiya tha pm mein extra info ke liye
😆 😆 😆
Kab? Too many things crammed in memory box these days...😆 Waada kiya ho toh zaroor nibhaungi...😊

Cheer up yaara 😳
your loyal readers will always stand by you

I send out 270 PMs and have about 115 readers in this story on a good day. So have to clean up...

Have a great Sunday
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You too 🤗

Comment pe response later.. koi gift shift leke aaya hai...

c u tomorrow😃

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#939

part 18
excellent...
for the first time Dev is so unlike Dev himself...
way to go Naina...
Daadima is a smart cookie...
u know what am so loving Dev Naina track more than Maan Geet and i have no complaints at all to read more on Dev Naina...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#940

Originally posted by: spvd
part 18
excellent...
for the first time Dev is so unlike Dev himself...
way to go Naina...
Daadima is a smart cookie...
u know what am so loving Dev Naina track more than Maan Geet and i have no complaints at all to read more on Dev Naina...
cont soon dear...

Glad you liked it 😊