THE LOCKET(5) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED 1

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1081

I like the way jis tarah aapne geet aur darji ki bonding ko dikhya hai geet apne daarji ke liye apni padhi tak chodne ke liye tyar ho gai
Dev ka nt ki tiffin chura kar khana aur usse irritate karna this dev is amazing
Finely massorri trip
Its awesome isse jis tarah aapne likha hai mano hum koi movie dekh rahe ho
You areawesome avi

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2thless

@2thless

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#1082

awesome story --- and you are a fantastic writer... I have entered forum just this week.. Geet was one of my favourite one and i was going through the topics when i saw your FF listed as popular...
I would admit that i was a little apprehensive since it had 24 threads and over 100 parts... you see ... once i start reading i cant stop untill i finish --- i tend to give up my sleep and forget work😭... But i am happy that i started yours -- excellent story line --- i am loving this naintara better than the one in GHSP... Could you please ping me if you have any other writeups going on? i would love to start reading those too -- once i finish up with this one 😃

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#1083

Originally posted by: tmaddy
awesome story --- and you are a fantastic writer... I have entered forum just this week.. Geet was one of my favourite one and i was going through the topics when i saw your FF listed as popular...
I would admit that i was a little apprehensive since it had 24 threads and over 100 parts... you see ... once i start reading i cant stop untill i finish --- i tend to give up my sleep and forget work😭... But i am happy that i started yours -- excellent story line --- i am loving this naintara better than the one in GHSP... Could you please ping me if you have any other writeups going on? i would love to start reading those too -- once i finish up with this one 😃

Thank u for those nice words.

I am quite possessive of my work so a lot of parts for this story are on my blog. Access to each part has a separate password so do be prepared for that. I provide access to my blog when I see comments from readers. Hope you understand that as a writer reading comments from readers is the only payment for my hard work. This story is very close to my heart. Hope u will like it too

Avi