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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Awweee Asad says that zoya is part of him and his family. Die Tanveer Die!!!!!😆
U r a wonderfull writer...please continue and pm and buddy me please

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it! Asad accepting in front of Tanveer that zoya is part of his life and she will not go anywhere.

Wah wah kiya bat hai Asad Miya!

Awesome!

Post soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
waaahh!!waaah!!waaah!! tusssi to kamaaal ho yaaar!!
lovely updt!!
hw I wsh asad wld hv replied in d same 2 billimaasi!!
olthough I loved d whole updt bt ths 1ns vry special!
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Tanveer start her darama as she do not want to tell in front of zoya .
Zoya intentionally start to walk out and asad hold her hand said tannu tumhe zoya ke samne hi Bataan ho ga. kyun ki wo meri zindgi ka part. Hai.
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hattss off 2 u 4 ths!! amaaazn!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
awesome story! The plot is extremely good! Somethng like this should definitely happen! Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! You're awesome!!! Just loved it 👏 Please continue soon and do pm me when you update. please...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4
As asad asked tanveer about her pregnancy and zoya was still standing there.
Tannu: jammy humane Socha ke jab hum app ko bataie gay tu app ko dard hoga. Kyun ki ab humare sath b wahi ho raha hai jo Khala ke sath hua tha.
Hum app ko tension main nahi dekh sakte. Hume maff kar digiye.

Asad was lost in his thought that what happened to him and his mother when his father left them.
By looking on him tanveer gave victory smile to Zoya.

Tannu: just started her old darama. Jammy hum iss liye hi app ko Bataan nahi chahate they.
By saying it she started to come closer to asad.
But zoya came in middle and Take her hands in her hands and said: koi baat nahi tannu, hum Jante hai k app ne assa kyun kiya. Hum app ke sath hai. Pur abhi tume rest karni chahiye.
Tannu: our wo hum jammy se...
Zoya: koi baat nahi main mr. Khan se baat karti hu tum bas rest karo.

Zoya to asad : mr khan humme tannu ko kuch time ke liye akele chod dena chahiye.
Asad and zoya went outside.

In hall dilshaad and Nazma preparing for mehandi ceremony.

Dilshaad: asad zoya aj ke function ke Ilya main tum dono se baat karna chahti hu.
Zoya ye kuch design hai mehandi ke tun koi select kar lo.

Zoya: phophi app hi select kar di jiye na, muje inta knowledge nahi hai iss sab ke bare main.
Dilshaad: zoya mehandi tumhari hai tu design bhi tum hi select karo gi na. Ha agar tum asad ki Pasand ka design select karna chahti hu to tum uss se help le lo.

Asad and zoya look at each other and then on mehandi design.

Asad select a design and point about it.

Zoya feel really happy and quickly she place the design on her hand which cover her arm as well.

When she looking over it asad was watching her smile. Suddenly he notice burn mark on her arm.

Asad: zoya ye tumhare hath per Kya hua hai. Ye mark kis tarah parha.

Zoya look at her arm and tear came in her eyes. She leave the place quickly.

She went outside and was sitting in garden. Looking at mark she remembering about her dream.


Assad came and sit near to her. He look on her face and there was tears on her cheeks.

He wipe her tears with his finger.
ASAP he touch her face for a moment they both freeze. Time stop for them. They lost in each others eyes.

After a moment asad: zoya muje nahi pata par agr Maine tumhara dil dukhaya ho tu I am really sorry.

Zoya: nahi mr. Khan asi koi baat nahi hai. Main nahi janti ki ye mark meri arm per kaise aye. But jab bhi main inn he dekti hu to mujhe uss nightmare ki ya ad ati hai. Mujhe lagta hai ke inn dono main koi connection hai.

Asad remembered what appi told him about zoya's mom death and he came to conclusion that zoya was hurt in that fire as well.

There was teass in his eye. He want to say something to zoya but cannot. He just put his hand on her hand to tell her that he is always with her.

Zoya and Ayan put the hidden cameras all over the house to keep eye on tanveer.
Ayan gave a wireless camera to zoya to carry with her always. All these cameras got connected to asad laptop and zoya iPod.

Tanveer made. Plan and call razia and ask her to help. She tell that she can rid zoya out this world but Ayan is becoming major problem.
She ask her to call Ayan back to home.

Razia call Ayan and asked him to to come home as She want to talk to him something important regarding hummera and his wedding.

Ayan went home but took iPod with him to watch live telecast from there.
ASAP he went home razia switch off his phone and hide it.

Asad home:
Tanveer ask someone from asad office and gave hime money. The man call asad and said that he want to see him for some important ant work.
Asad left the house with laptop.

Tanveer thought in her mind it is exact time or her plan.
She start crying in her room. Everyone come inside and ask her what happen. She pretend that she is feeling sick as she have pain in her stomach.
Dilshaad: it is not good as your pregnant and it could be something wrong with your baby.

Tanveer : Khala humme lagta hai k humme hospital jana chayie.
Hum abhi jate hai. Dilshaad tum akele kaise ja sakti ho. Ke Kama karo tum zoya ko sath le jayo.
Zoya also agree as he was thinking about her unborn baby.
They both left.

Driver was tanveer, s hired man so he knew where he has to stop.

Driver stop. He car near old hospital building.

Zoya: tanveer yeh tum kha le kar ayi hu ye to bout Puranas hospital hai.
Tannu with smirk: zoya ye building hi purani hai pur hum apnea treatment yahi se karvate hai.

They both went inside. ASAP theft enter tanveer closer the main door.

On other hand in office when asad open his laptop to do his work.
He found video coverage of his home, he was surprised and shocked. He thought that zoya might be put to help him to catch tannu's husband. Then he found ano ther footage of tannu and zoya. He started watching it.

Zoya: tannu tunne door ko band kar Diya. Aur yaha to koi bhi nahi hai.
Tannu: tum to janti ho na sab. She stated laughing.
Zoya try to catch his hand and she was shocked to see artificial skin in her hand.
Zoya tannu tumne ye bhi jooth bola ke tum jal gayi thi.
Tannu: to tumhe Kya laga ke hum kud ko sach main jala lete. Agar tum Bool gayi ho main yaad kara doon main jammy se Nikah sirf uske pass ke liye karna chahti hu na ke main us se pyar karti hu jo main je sab kuch Karoo.

Asad was watching it was shocked about . He fist his hand and hit on table.

Zoya tum Kya Karne wali ho ab
Tannu tum to janti ho ke main Kya karogyi. She laugh loudly.

Zoya afraid and try to escap but driver catch her.

On the other hand asad was sit breathless. Suddenly he took laptop and run to his car. He put laptop on passenger sheet and start the car towards the direction of building as recognise it.

Tannu zoya kuch nahi hoga bus hum yaha agg laga de ge aur humare kaam Katham.
Sab ko yahi lage ga ke tum agg se. Dart ho iss Ilya bahar nahi a saki. Aur hum sab ko kheye ge ke humare husband ne humme Marne ki kossish ki thi. Magar hum tumhe bacha nahi paye.

Asad speed up the car. His heart was beating fast. He broke all the signal.

In building tannu signal the driver.driver throw the fire around the building. Tannu and man came outside.
Zoya cannot do anything just standing there...








Note: I am sorry no proof reading.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Nice Update...Please PM Me When U Continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
it was a very nice one
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Nice Update..
I hope nothing happed to Zoya..
Hope ASAD reac on time...
Continue soon..
Thnx for PM...
Mariam...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Wow...glad ad saw the footage..hope he reaches there on time to save zoya...plz post soon.

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