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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Amazing hai yaar.I totally want this to happen. Wah Wah. Par yeh Cv's ko samjhayega kon. Lagta hai, hame aapki story ka printout karke Gul aunty ko bhej dena chahiye.. Oh and plz cont. soon. I totally wanna read more. Mai to keh deti hoon ki aaj hi next part update kardo. Oh plzz
Posted: 12 years ago
#22
just read both parts.. they r awesomeee
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON & do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Zoya seriously should do something like this 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
too good. This should happen in d show seriously
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

wow 2 parts

i totally enjoyed tannus suffering

plz do continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
omg!!! haha!!! billi getting the shock of her life!!!
now she will spill the beans herself 😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!!!TH ISS SOOO VRY INTRSTNG!!
LOVELYY!
continueee sooon!!
if possible plzzz PM me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice update... i really want Zoya to do something like this to billo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's awesome...please continue👏. Haha funny how Asad being the lead guy doesn't have a clue about what's going on and is just being lead by the nose 😆...man it would be awesome if Ayaan and Zoya do actually pair up to get rid of this Tannu in the show!!😡
Edited by Silver_19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks every one for your comment.
I want to tell one that in my story I cannot allow asad to touch tannu anymore. I seriously try to think on this side but my mind stop working. So more tannu jammy touching I think and also only love between asya.


Part 3

Tanveer in garden without lense thinking about what happen and then she said
No I cannot loose this game, I will never let it happen. Chahiye muje isle Ilya in dono ko hi Katham kyun na karna parye.
Main razia sadiquie se badlands zarror laker rahigi. Aur uske Ilya meri madad karege asad ahemad khan.
Her eyes full with anger and have a evil smirk in her lips.
Inside house Ayan and zoya in zoya room
Rabbert: Mona hamme ye video bhai Jaan ko Dika deni chaiye. Ye tannu bout kharnak hai aur main jantia hu bhai humari baat jaroor sune ge.
Mona: main janti hu k tum Kya Sochi rahe ho. Pur rabbert Socho agar hum ne ye video mr.khan ko Dika di tu vo tooth jaye ge. Ho sakta Hain ke phir kabhi kissi par vishwass na Karen. Wo tanveer per bout bahrosa karate hai humein tannu ka sach samne lana chaiye per ke dum nahi.
Humein unhe Bataan ho ga k vo jis tarah jo samne dikta hai usko sach Mann le latte Hain. Ye sahi nahi ha. Har baat ke do matlab hote Hain.
There was tears in her eyes. While talking to Ayan.
Ayan notice it: he has smile and said Mona Kya tum bhai Jaan se mohabbat karti ho?
Mitwa moment and zoya has flashback of all moment she spend with asad. By remembering them she has smile on her face but did not answer.
Zoya: rabbert tum batho k tum humerra se pyar karate ho.
Rabbert: pata nahi, aj tak main socta tha k mohabbat sirf use hoti hai jo bilkul apko jaisa ho. Per ab lagti ha k main galat tha pyar sirf ho jata hai.

They both continue their talks suddenly zoya remember something.
Zoya: Ayan sab kuch clear hai Magar wo stone eyed insan khon hai.

Rabbert: Mona tension mat lo hm uske barre main b pata laga ke rahe ge.

Zoya ask Ayan to come outside.
They both come outside. Asad was working in hall on laptop. They sat near to him and start their talk.

Asad stop talking, I am working
Zoya: we know u r working. But u can grave same chaat with us it will make u happy, mr.akdhu ahemad khan.
Asad with smirk: ok and leave his laptop on table.
Ayan wow bhai Jaan app to abhi se biwi ki baat manne lag Gaye. But it's really romantic.
Asad and zoya look at each and blush.

There door opened and tanveer came inside her clothes were torn and wound on neck.
She start running towards asad but Ayan come between and catch her from arm.
Ayan what happen tannu now to you. Did your husband come back. Please tell I will not leave him.ayan has naughty smile in his face.

Tanveer was trying hard to old his jammy hand but before zoya took asad hand in her hand and said mr khan ab Kya ho Gaya wo to bout khatarnak hai . Agar sune muj par fir se attack kiya to. Plz muje bacha ligye.
Tanveer with anger in her eye: par Jamie wo mujhe marna chahta hai
Asad I know tannu par usne zoya par Hama kiya do bar. Aur tum uske bare main muje kuch Batavia kyun nahi.
Tanveer act of being unconscious to ignore asad question.
Ayan asked zoya to bring water for with signal.
Zoya bring water Ayan make her wake up and ask her to drink it .
Tanveer: nahi hum theek muje nahi Pena.
Asad: thora as pani pee lo, tum theek ho jayo gi. Zoya tume dressing kar de gayi, tumhe doctor se dar lagta Hain naa.
Tanveer Hain jammy plz doctor ko mat bhoulana.and she drink water.
Ayan and zoya look at each other and smile.
In flashback zoya adding some sleeping pills in water.
In next 10 minutes tannu actually faint.
Asad get worried and was about to go near her but zoya sit before him and ask him to call doctor as now it is needed.
Doctor came and after check up she said no need to worry as tannu is pregnent and it is normal to fain in this situation.
Asad whith shocking expression pregnent?
Doctor yes she is. I want to ask you if I could her medical history report before giving any medicine.

Asad said I do not have any idea. Zoya: mr. Khan hum tannu ke room me check kar te Hain shay ad kuch mil jaye.
Asad and zoya went to tannu room and after checking in closet they find a report but zoya found one more thing a pair of lense of same colour as tannu's.
Zoya took them but hide from asad.

Asad start reading report and was shocked as report said tannu is pregnent with 4 month.
In flashback asad remember tannu telling him her husband left her 8 months before.
He was shocked and also in doubt why tannu lie to him and also hide pregnancy.

He gave report to doctor and she said I have write few test and medicine u can bring them. She went away.
Asad went to his room and was thinking why tannu lie to him.

Ayan and zoya sitting in hall talking, dilshaad Nama and appi also come their. Zoya told them what happened and all shocked.
Dilshaad: ya Allah tannu humare sath picle 3 months se rah rahi aur usne humme kuch nahi bataya. Phele marriage ki baat aur ab ye pregnacy. Ye Ladki hum se sab kuch chupha kyun rahi hai.
Nazama: ammi muje lagta is liye hi wo us din doctor se darne ka natak kar rahi thi.
Zoya : Hain phopi main b soch rahi thi k jab tannu mere sath hospital gayi tu wo nahi Dari Magar ghar par ke doctor se b dar gayi. Magar mr.khan to kabi meri baat sunte hi nahi.
Dilshaad: Magar tannu ye sab kuch humme joth kyun bata rahi thi,


Asad was listening all this and remember the whole incident and regret for not listening to zoya.

Everybody was talking. Zoya year bout bore ho rahe hai aur neend b nahi a rahi

Nama notice and said bhai app ne kabhi app koi song nahi Zuniga. Plz aj suna digi ye.
Asad in denial mood said no.
Zoya mr. Khan plz
Asad to app ko bhi mere sath gana ho ga
Zoya o.k
Here we come with humko pyar huya they did dance aswell. When everybody left and zoya was going to her room asad catch from her arm and said sorry zoya muje us din apko baat par yakeen karna chahiye tha.
Zoya: it ok mr. Khan and their we have eye look.
Next day morning asad and zoya in tanveer's room and asad asked her about pregnancy.
Tanveer start her darama as she do not want to tell in front of zoya .
Zoya intentionally start to walk out and asad hold her hand said tannu tumhe zoya ke samne hi Bataan ho ga. kyun ki wo meri zindgi ka part. Hai.
Big mitwa


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