OS tanveer ka sach/ updated page 4/PART 3 PG6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am not a very active member of fourm yet. But today I want to discuss my story with u guys.
My story start after billi interrupt Asya date. So what happen next...

Next day morning everyone on dinning table except appi. As she gone outdoor.
Asad told dilshaad about tanveer's ex husband.
Dilshaad: tanveer tunne bataya nahi k tumhari shaddi ho gayi.

Tanveer: little in stree from Dilshaad's question. Khala wo hum apko tension nahi dena Cahte they. App to janti hi Hain k humari factory main agg Lange ke karan sab kuch Katham ho Gaya. Start fake crying.
Asad put his hand on her hand and said donot worry I am with u.😡
Zoya who was listening all this and has still picture in her mind how tanveer hug asad yesterday.
She gave a angry look to asad and he quickly remove his hand and said let start breakfast.😆

Dilshaad watched all this and thought that closeness between asad and tanveer is troubling to zoya and she have to do something about it.

On another hand zoya was upset she went to tanveer's room to talk her. As tanveer was taking bath she sit on bed.
Suddenly she saw some bills and she was shocked.
Zoya : Allah Miya what wrong with this tannu. Ussne mr.khan ko jooth kaha k uski factory jal gayi hai. Yeh bill to last week k hi hai.
Lakin tanveer aisa kyun kar rahi hai. In her mind she think to tell asad about it but then she said mr. Khan kahya meri baat ka yakeen Karen wale hai. Muje kud he sacchai ka pata laganna ho ga.


Zoya in her room think then she call to someone.
Rabbert: Mona darling aj humari yard kaise a gayi.
Zoya: rabbert, I need your help. She tell him everything and what she saw and about her doubt.
Rabbert: per Mona wo aisa kyun Kare ge.

Zoya without thinking muje Kya pata jab deko mr. Khan ko hug karti rehti hai. Mera Mann to kata hai k ek Barr use trapper mar doon, uski himmat kaise hui mere hone wale unko hath Lange ki.
Rabbert: laughing to app ko jealousy feel ho rahi hai.
Zoya: jealousy my foot, I donot care. Kya tum meri help karoge.
Rabbert: Han per plan Kya Hain .
Zoya: listen me and she tell the plan to him. Ok rabbert to tume pata Chal Gaya na Kya karna Hain.
Rabbert: Hain Mona. Ok bye bye
After disconnecting phone zoya said to herself jealous to hon main es jammy tannu se. Inta jammy jammy karti Hain ke mere to ab jam Kane ka b man nahi karts. Kaise wo mere jahapanah ko hath laga sakti hai, chudaial Kaye ki.


In asad room.
Asad and tanveer were sitting and talking and laughing.
Zoya enter and was angry. Asad notice it.
Zoya: mr khan muje shopping Karne jana Hain. App chlege ya nahi.
Asad: Hain actually main b app se kuch baat karna Chatha tha. Let's go.
Tanveer: start fake drama please jammy hamme chore kar mat jayiaye. Humme bout dar lag raha hai.
Dilshaad enter and said to tanveer: tannu tume Samjna chayiye inki shaddi hone wali Hain. Ab zoya ko kuch time to chayiye asad k sath. Main yaha hon tume kuch nahi hoga.
Asad tum zoya k saath jayo aur kuch time akele bato. Ek dusre ke saath.
Asad zoya left.

Tanveer to dilshaad Khala hum bahar ho kar ate hai. And she also left with a evil. Smirk on her face.


Zoya and asad did shopping. Asad saw beautiful red sari. Zoya was busy to looking for earring he buy it ask for gift pack. Then came to zoya. Zoya saw a beautiful necklace and try to wear. But was not successful , then she feel strong hand on her hand. It was asad. As he touch zoya star blushing her face become red. Asad took the earring and start putting them he was very close to her. They can fell each breath and hear beat.
After putting earring he stand behind her and start look at her then give her gift.
Asa: z..zoya wo actually main Sochi raha tha k app eske
Sath ye sari phene ge to teek lage ge. Mere matlab Hain k app sari main wo actually...
Zoya: bout khobsurat lagti hon. Yahoo kehna chate Hain app.
Asad: wo actually Hain wo...
Zoya: app ese Lyon Hain. Dil ki bath b nahi keh sakte. Emotionally challenged.
Asad: app Kya yeh pecan kar a sakti Hain.
Zoya look at him and go change room. Asad has smirk on his face.

On other hand Ayan was following tanveer . Tanveer stop near mall and start making injury marks on her body an tear her clothes. Ayan was making video and was surprised.

Zoya came after changing and when asad saw her. He was mesmerised by her beauty. She was looking like angel. His heart stop. He thought he will tell today zoya that I love her and cannot live without her. Their eye lock and they start coming close to each other.
But here tannu came jammy wo Hume kidnap kar le ga. hum bout Muskie se jaya pouche Hain plz hamme bachaiye. She hug him.
Zoya has tear in her eyes and looking at them.
Asad was shocked and cannot figure out what to do.
Tanveer crying jammy hume boot dard ho raha hai. Plz Hume doctor ke pass le Jayiea.
Asad look at zoya who was in tear. Asad feel guilty.
Zoya. Mr. Khan app tannu ko le Jayiea main ghar a jaoongi. Muje shooping complete karni hai.
Asad said sorry to zoya and take tannu with him.

Ayan came to zoya and show her video and said Mona app sach keh rahi thi. Ye to drama kar rahi a. Humme Bahai Jaan ko bata dena chayie.
Zoya: phele humme pata laganna ho ga k wo aisa kyun kar rahi hai. Mere pas ek plan hai. Humme usi ki chaal us Chaplin chayie.

Ayan and zoya look at each other and smile.

Asad house.

Tannu was doing her drama and the door opened.
Everyone shocked . Zoya was standing their. There was injury on her head and she was bleeding. There was injury mark on her hand and neck as well.
Asad world end he just push tannu away and yell on top of his lungs zooyaa...

Zoya was going to fall but asad catch her. He was crying and asking what happen. He kiss on her forehead.
Ayan enter he said that someone was trying to kill zoya but after watching him he run away.

Doctor visit and did the dressing on wounds . Asad was sitting on bedsides ans was crying and felling guilty to leave he. He took her hand hand said I cannot live without u.
Zoya was pretending to sleep but she hear everything. A small smile came on her face. Tannu was looking all this.
After while when zoya wake up asad asked her what happen.

Zoya: by looking at tannu said wo tanveer ka ex husband wo muje marina Chatha hai.
Everybody shocked and tanveer was looking like someone give her hot chilli to eat.

Asad: wo tume kyun marina chata hai. He was holding her hand so tight that he do not want to loose her.
Tanveer: Hain zoya tume kaise pata ke wo mere husband hi Hain.

Zoya: in scared voice and in tear usenet muje bata aur uski ankh patthar ki thi. Usenet kahya k wo muje maar de ga kyon ki app tannu ko use pass nahi Janne de rahe hai. Wo muje mar de ga.. Mr. Khan hum mana nahi Cahte muje bacha le jive plz...
Asad give her tight hug and said main tume kuch nahi hone doonga . Main tume nahi kho sakta. Kabi nahi.

Ayan was watching it and has smile on his face.

How is it should I continue or not

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its amazing please continue..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOL! Nice payback from Zoya! Give Tanveer a dose of her own medicine. Pls continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please continue. It is really good

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me like please continue- I am so fed up with Tanveer that anything that has to do with her exit excites me. 👍🏼 Really hope she gets kicked out soon -especially with all the gross touchiness she keeps doing with ours...sorry , Zoya's Jahapanah. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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YOU CONTINUE THIS RIGHT NOW!!!!

Pretty please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! i wanna know so bad how zoya will reveal tanveer's truth!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome i loved it..continue pls.
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very nice do continue it sooon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for your reply everyone. I will try to update but like zoya I did not planned what to do with billi next. I really want her suffer more and start her down falling in asad's eyes.😛

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