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Posted: 12 years ago


U can write all these in one comment also..but never mind.. thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
UPDATE 16

RED=FLASHBACK
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"M-m-mayank wo"


"What Nupur?"


"Mayank actually"


"Yes Nupur say I am listening"
He said while enjoying her nervousness.


"Nothing."
Realizing what he was doing and suppressing her smile she turned around and started moving forward but suddenly she stopped on hearing his voice.


bholi si soorat aankhon



mein masti door khadi



sharmaaye Aye haye


Nupur turned around and raised her brows while a broad smile was fixed on her lips.


Ek jhalak dikhlaaye kabhi kabhi



aanchal mein chhup jaaye



Aye haye


He sang it while showing off his dimples and hearing this she just couldn't stop herself from smiling and just to hide it she turned around and moved in the forward direction .


Meri nazar se tum dekho to yaar

nazar vo aaye


Bholi si soorat aankhon mein


masti door khadi sharmaaye

Aye haye..

He followed her and soon they found themselves in the garden where all eyes were on them as he was following her while a beautiful tune was coming out of his mouth. He was not bothered about the surrounding but Nupur somewhere became conscious.

Saawan ka pehla baadal uska


kaajal ban jaaye


Mauj uthay saagar mein jaise


aise kadam uthaaye


Now, Mayank stopped her while spreading his hands in front of her and found a smiling and joyful Nupur which made him smile wholeheartedly and so he continued with his singing


Rab ne jaane kis mitti se uske


ang banaaye

He softly touched her hands just to feel her and show her that he was trying to figure out what she was made of, of course playfully.


Nupur just hit him on his head and he slowly closed his eyes and Nupur moved away while he continued singing with his eyes closed


Chham se kaash kahin se mere


saamne vo aa jaaye


He had just completed those words when he opened his eyes and found a furious Rhea in front of him.


"Huh?"
Rhea asked him with a confused expression on her face.


Rhea had seen Mayank following Nupur and singing a beautiful song for her. This irritated her a lot and hence she decided to stop it.


"Oh Hi Rhea."
Mayank greeted her with an expression which showed that he was a thief.


He wasn't one but at the instance he was feeling like one as he knew that all his attention was towards Nupur, which had always been for Rhea. It was strange for him also but he liked the way it was all going.


"Mayank I think we should start practicing."


Rhea knew that the previous topic was not something he would like to explain it to her as she was just a FRIEND to him even after 15 years of their friendship. If Rhea could develop those feeling for him, then why couldn't he do so? Rhea always had this in mind. But Rhea couldn't ask as she knew if this topic was brought up then certainly their friendship would be affected. She was just waiting for the right moment where she could just force him ,of course she wouldn't show it to him but she would make it a point that her parents said it all to him and he wouldn't refuse it at that moment she knew.


"Rhea"
Mayank uttered just to break her chain of thoughts.


"Yes.."
She said while coming out if it.


"Rhea you move towards the room I'll just call Nupur."


"Why do we need her?"
She instantly asked him.


At first he gave her a confused look then spoke
"Cause she will choreograph our performance."


"Oh yeah."


Mayank just smiled and left from there to call Nupur.


Mayank dint know how furious and irritated he had made Rhea in the past few days and of course he dint know what all she was going to do in the future.


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Nupur had just left that place though she expected him to follow but unfortunately he dint so she just moved towards the locker room to keep her books as she found them too heavy to be carried along.


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Mayank asked a few people and got to know about her. He too moved towards the locker room without realizing that she was going inside the girls locker room.
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HOPE YOU LIKE IT😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww..mayank sang for nupur :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Humayra

Aww..mayank sang for nupur :)



thanks😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rhea is the cause for mayur's sepatatioon?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

Rhea is the cause for mayur's sepatatioon?



Haha may b may b not [:p]
Abhi itni jaldi kaise bata doon yaar 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely updt
loved the song
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
i think some of past is amazing its my thought nupur MU mayank and rheaa relation coz mayank always treat rhea as friends i am think ending is bad of past life of mayur
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update! The song you used was the song on which my Mum and Dads LOVE STORY started!!!!!!!! Lol Or Whatt???
🤣
Nice update.
Rhea that ___________
Killed the buzz the awesome moment!
Loved the update though! Killer one must say...
Thankc for the PM... :)

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