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Applebee

@Applebee

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Posted: 12 years ago

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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

awww! this was beautiful.

I love reading your work and am missing shades of grey. any plans of updating it?

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

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Posted: 12 years ago

I have always marvelled at khushi's ability to forget and forgive sometimes being extremely shocked at her behaviour...but then isn't that what makes her so much loved😊

I just love your attention to detail...its like opening a present and savouring every second of it 👏

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Pavina

@Pavina

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely...
A real pic of arnav n khushi married life...
Very beautifully written...

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gata

@gata

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Posted: 12 years ago

I have always loved your stories on Arnav and Khushi .I love that you do not change their characteristics

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-Catharsis

@-Catharsis

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful...the way you describe things...feelings. Amazed. Excellent work. Now let me stalk and find other things you've written😆

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it so much! 😃 Khushi is the ever forgiving soul.

She doesn't keep grudges. The sweet soul.

That proves how Arnavji won't be a jalebi bhai himself and do jalebis for his birthday to ask forgiveness from his wife. They did that in the show.

I like this one better. 😳

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 12 years ago

Absolutely enchanting, he knows he is so wrong but continues to upset her, but the the pacifying almost makes his anger seem worthwhile..almost

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utopia13

@utopia13

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was beautiful..his words so simple...her acceptance of his love behind his words...beautiful in its simplicity! 👏

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

what to do with him
but nothing can be done right
his jealousy will never go away right
well he is one lucky man for sure

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