A2 FF - Meri zindagi mein aaye ho - Ch4 updt Pg 6

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Momrin
Oh my allah! How can i miss this ff! Anyway i'm so happy..never thought that i can read ur writting again..hope u recongnize me..its as usual fantastic..😊

of course i remember u :-)
Even i never thought I will write again but I love AKA couple now :-D

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Momrin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: nniks

of course i remember u :-)
Even i never thought I will write again but I love AKA couple now :-D

hm they r cute..thats why i also like to watch aka..more than story this two attracked me to this serial..

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...Hanna...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

luv it neha ...enjoying it...thnks for this wonderfull story...

do update soon

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AMAN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

great... shopping shopping...😉

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Blukitten

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 4

Amita grumpily sat in the car..."Wat was the need to come shopping?" She asked
Amit replied "I hav to anyways buy stuff for the trip so why not ."
"But u dont like my company right ? So why did u agree to come along?"
He said "Wen did I say I dont like ur company?"

Amita looked in surprise "Thn why r u going away" She thought.

She retorted "Well U never said tht before so how wld I knw...really I dont get it why did u agree?? we dont get along anyways"
Amit looked at her amused She was cute wen angry.

He simply shook his head and went to a mall...
They bother strolled in the mall looking arnd in various shops...Amit picked a maroon shirt and asked Amita "Is it good?"
Amita replied "Blue looks better on u but why wld u beleive me"

To her surprise he took the blue one...
While Amit was busy selecting few accessories Amit wandered around and started looking at few bracelets and other trinklets to pass her time...She was so engrossed in trying out various bracelets tht she didnt notice a sudden voice near her...

"Do u like it?"
She turned arnd startled and found Amit looking at her.
She replied "No I was just doing timepass...Lets leave if ur done"

He replied "U seem to be fond of this bracelet" He picked up the one which she was trying "Buy it"

Amita felt touched by his genture but decided to continue being angry..."No thanks...We r not typical husband wife u knw so no need to buy anything for me."

She left angrily...Unknown to her Amit took tht bracelet along with his shopping.
It was late evening wen they left the mall.Amita asked "Kuch bhool to nahi gaye na hum log?"

Amit smiled n said "Yup we forgot one thing?"
Amita asked "What ?? uff now dont blame me for tht"
Amit laughed "Actually its u who forgot it"
He too out a package and gave it to her...She looked at it puzzled...He gestured her to open it.
Amit eagerly opened the package and out came the shinning bracelet which she was admiring in the shop.Dumbfounded she looked

at him and stammered "Why ??"

He replied "U liked it so I bought it simple".
Amita didnt know wat to think.On one hand he disliked her..on the other hand he was very caring...it was all so confusing.
She replied "Thanks" and wrapped the bracelet around her wrist..She was struggling with the clasp wen a warm pair of hands took the clasp and coolly snapped it shut.
Amit closed the clasp and gave a tug to the bracelet so tht it fitted in her hands..."Nice" he commented

Amita felt as if her heartbeat stopped for a min..."wat did he just do ?...I am surely dreaming..he is actually being nice to me!!"

She said "Thanks again" He just smiled back at her...they drove for some distance..They had stopped at a signal wen Amita spotted an ice cream vendor across the road.She blurted out excitedly "ice cream !!"
She realised then tht they had skipped dinner n she was ravished.

Amit said "But ur not angry ...right?"
Amita said "No..but..anyways leave it".
Amit looked at her dissapointed face and said "Its on the other side of the road..I will park the car somewhere here and walk across..Ur ok with it?"

Amita nodded...He parked the car near the road and they got out...The air was cool and there was smell of rain...Amita said
"seems like its gonna rain" Amit said "yeah we better hurry up"
While crossing the road he automatically held her hands to shield against the speeding vehicles, Giving another heartstopping

moment to Amita.They reached the ice cream vendor and he passed on the ice cream to her...She happily took the cone.

The cool night,ice cream and Amit did she need anything else...She threw cuation to the winds and decided to enjoy the time till it wld last.Amit seemed to be in a good mood too.
"I am sorry" he simply said
She asked "For what?"
He replied "For getting angry over the shopping thing"

Amita said "Its ok...Why do u get angry over small issues? u look nice wen ur smiling and laughing.I know I am clumsy and I irritate u at times but I never trouble u or hurt u intentionally...U know ur harming urlsef be being short tempered.Its just
a matter of sometime phir to aapko mujhse chutkara mil jayega na...But atleast be happy till ur here."

She felt a tear sting her eyes everytime she tought of his leaving her heart broke...But she composed herself.
Amit looked at her thoughtfully.Somehow he didnt feel very happy abt going to US.
He was about to say "Amita..I.." Suddenly the sky broke seemed to break into torrent of rain...It was so sudden tht they were taken by surprise.

Amit said "Oh Shit !! told u to hurry up"
Amita shot back "How come its my fault...I didnt call the rain"
Their car was on the other side of the road and with no other shelter other than the ice cream vendor they were soaked in minutes...Amit said "lets go back to the car fast"

He held amita's hand suddenly there was a thunder clap Amita huddled into him and hugged him tight.Amit stopped and simply stood there too shocked to react...he forgot for few moments tht they were on a footpath under a downpour...raindrops bounced off them...he just stared in her eyes dripping with rain.Time seemed to hav stopped.

Thir eyelock broke with the blaring of horns...They adruptly broke up.
Amit said "let run before we get drenched".
holding her hands he ran towards their car...

Amita was still scarlet...she had hard time believing wat had just happened...
Amit was frowning...Amita asked "Wat happned?"
He replied "How Am I going to explain mom why we got wet".

Amita looked thoughtful...

To be continued...