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Rituparna

@fastforward

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Neha, I have no idea who Amit and Amita is..All I have understood is they are a married couple and your heroine is in a similar situation as our Anandi was, I mean Prats, in her final days in BV..She is completely, head over heels, in love with her husband and is unaware of the means by which she can express her feelings to him..Correct me if I am wrong..

It feels like I am reading few lines from a Mills & Boon Novel..It is awesomely romantic and carries with it a promise that the future chapters would be more engrossing..I have always liked your creations before too when I was just another reader in the forum..Now is the time, perhaps, to express my appreciation..Kudos to you!

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vibha

@vibraj

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Neha, Ido not watch this serial but was so very enamoured by your post. It is so beautifully written, the nuance of every emotion so well-captured, your vocabulary was perfect, simply awesome, Neha, I am a fan of your writings!

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Blukitten

@Blukitten

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

OMG seems like whole SY gang is here :-D
Thanks all for the appreciation I wanted to write an OS but seems like it will turn into a FF ;-)
For the ppl who dont knw the background...Amita's situation is worse than A ...Amit and Amita got married as a compromise...they didnt even like each other...Amita thawed out n now she is in love but khadoos Amit has no idea...n though he is attracted he is too stubborn to admit it :-D
So thts the whole background...I wld suggest catch the episodes n watch this show its awesome n the leads hav cute chemistry.

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Serviana

@Serviana

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Although...you know...I came here...for you...❤️

Lovely story...missing your Ansh-SY stories.🤗

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khushbuahmed

@khushbuahmed

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

omgg its sooo dreamy, wish this happenss 😊 i was smiling reading this...

so nicely written

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK dear

❤️

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emeraldeye

@emeraldeye

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Wow ! It was so beautifully written--nniks 😊. I felt as if I'm reading an Indianized version of M&B😉. You should write more AKA FF/OS's, all Amitians would surely love to read this. 👍🏼

BTW do post your OS link in the thread mentioned in the post.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/amita-ka-amit/3590599/the-creative-index-attn-ff-os-ss-writers

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Blukitten

@Blukitten

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: emeraldeye
Wow ! It was so beautifully written--nniks 😊. I felt as if I'm reading an Indianized version of M&B😉. You should write more AKA FF/OS's, all Amitians would surely love to read this. 👍🏼

BTW do post your OS link in the thread mentioned in the post.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/amita-ka-amit/3590599/the-creative-index-attn-ff-os-ss-writers

Thank u 😊
I will continue this FF actually i started it of as an OS but seems like it will end up as FF 😆😆
this always happens with me 🥱

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saviani

@saviani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

OMG Neha, you are back with a bang... 🤗

You know very well I am the biggest fan of your OS and was missing it so badly...

Are the couple really so good like our Ansh that they inspired you to write an OS

I don't watch AKA, Now I have to watch it atleast to see the leads... So I can imagine them in your OS 😳

I heard you saying you will make this into an FF... Yippee... I am loving it...

And... and you didnot PM me 💔... if I had not chkd few pages back on our AT I would have missed it...

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Blukitten

@Blukitten

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Hi Savi...I hav not Pmed anyone coz I m not sure who watches this Show...yup the lead couple is cute...they r diff frm SY I mean they r the kind of couple u can see in daily life not a gladrags model type 😉
But their chemistry is awesome...thts wat I love abt them...even for SY more than their good looks I loved their chemistry.
Anyways i got my new muse so started writing on them...catch the old episodes n see the storyline then u will enjoy it more 😊
Will PM u wen I do my next update.

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saviani

@saviani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: nniks
Hi Savi...I hav not Pmed anyone coz I m not sure who watches this Show...yup the lead couple is cute...they r diff frm SY I mean they r the kind of couple u can see in daily life not a gladrags model type 😉
But their chemistry is awesome...thts wat I love abt them...even for SY more than their good looks I loved their chemistry.
Anyways i got my new muse so started writing on them...catch the old episodes n see the storyline then u will enjoy it more 😊
Will PM u wen I do my next update.

gladrags model is also not bad darling.. accepted he has put on weight for what so ever reason but wo bhi kissi se kam nahi 😉

agreed that first we all watch for chemistry... and without reading chemistry, if you try to read Biology... we saw the result na 😆 😉

Thanks for your synopsis, will catch up the show tonight and you update your FF soon... 😛