'Parinay' THD1, Next CHP up in THD 2, Link PG 131

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Manisha.

@Manisha.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Another one from you NB...my initial reaction 'what happens to CD'...your note was reassuring...

I can understand how it must be when mind is oozing with ideas...

Let me say, I am excited to know how the tale unfolds...

I am guessing both are ambitious and will probably understand each other and give each other the needed space...

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raws

@raws

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

different track...wow continue soon...and congrats for new thread of Chasing Dream one of my fav story continue updating that too...never the less take care of your self and your little one...

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meshas

@meshas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Nice titel NBji, Khushi already trying to make another comprimise by thinking to make the best out of this marriage, but at the same time I hope she will be able to chase her academic dream?

Arnav addresses Khushi is that women and this can't be good where as Khushi addresses Arnav as her husband, so, she has already accepted this marriage and Arnav hasn't.

Lokking forward to this interesting SS.😃

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Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

So here, the mighty ASR also has been forced into a marriage against his wishes 😃 Good!

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

wow...parinay..love the tittle itself

its a lovely story...just waiting to 1b to see what arnav had finally decided to do n tht forced marriage

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RITIKA..

@RITIKA..

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

loved the story...

just read both parts..

continue soon..

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

nice start... impatient to read more

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

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kaulpriyanka

@kaulpriyanka

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Loved it .quite interesting storyline.

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Idhar bhi RES!

I feel like a creepy stalker now, sorry NB!

UNRES

I like that their first real alone type meeting is their supposed "SG". You have set the scene so beautifully, keeping all the tiny details and emotions in mind. I love the awkwardness that can be SGs, perhaps more than the first meeting for an arranged marriage..

I love:

"He reminded himself that she was not responsible for this mess, and that she didn't deserve to be on the receiving end of his irate."

This is where your story differs from most out there. Characters who know themselves and understand the world around them. A little rationality can go a long way.

Its funny how I just said in CD, that self-less compliant khushis irk me because they usually are a product of un-payable gratitude. Yet you prove me wrong, its clearly not HER fault here. I love how you demonstrated through the flashbacks just how a person can be pushed into a corner. I think I am going to love this khushi. Really liked the last paragraph.

So basically they are both paying the price for their "dreams" through this wedding?

Also the best part about your stories for someone as impatient as me, is that you lay it all out on the table..the problems, the secrets. And even with all this out you keep me on my toes, waiting for the next update. I think that is your biggest strength as a writer.

Luna

Edited by LooneyLuna - 12 years ago