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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



aaj ka update mein mil jaayega...


it isnt a maaneet update... its mainly about geet in here
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Posted: 12 years ago
update kab milega???

its 1 now...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

update kab milega???

its 1 now...


half an hr more bas,,,.

and aj pakka dungii
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512



half an hr more bas,,,.

and aj pakka dungii



Ok paar try to make it fast nahi to nini ajegi!! 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
we gonna get update???? its 1:22 am alrdy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
o my dear neha

ninni aaying
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Posted: 12 years ago


IMPORTANT:

guys from next week my classes are going to start and then there is my office too, so I won't be left much time with me to give you an update in the frequency I used to'

now I will update maximum twice a week and possibly they will be on weekends or in weekends days (though less chance of it)

pms you already know will be once in a week or whenever I have time.

I know many of you just want to kill me but guys my career holds more importance for me than anything else!!!



I can't believe I just reached around 300 likes so suddenly in my last update'

Thank you and love you for your support. Hope to receive the same response in future too.😃

PART 44

damiyaan hai,

yeh jo tere mere damiyaan hai !

yeh bas tere mere liye hai

chahe mai isse aaj na maanu,

par phir bhi ,

yeh mere liye hai !

jo sab tera ,

tere mere darmiyaan hai !

darmiyaan

tere mere ,yeh aaj kaisi

unkahi ,un suni khushiyaan hai

wajah to hai har baat ki ,

par kya tu ,

hai har uss baat se rubaru !

haan ,

main jaanti hu har baat teri ,

pahchaana chati hu har aahat teri !

teri har chiz pe hai haq mera ,

tere har ahsaas ko hona chahiye

bas tere mere darmiyaan !

tu kissi aur sang haase ,

woh hasi bhi mujhe qabul nahi ,

tere saath koi chala

isme ,meri hi koi bhul rahi

kyoki tera har pal mera hai

tera har gum mera hai

tere har sukh ki saathi hu main

toh ,

tere har dukh se bhi myjhe gilla hai

kyoki ,

tera jo kuch bhi hai

woh bas tere mere darmiyaan hai

damiyaan hai

haan kuch khaas hum dono ke damiyaan hai

(By 9n9i9s9h9u9

thankyou dr its so beautiful)

Next day maan woke up will the shrill voice of his alarm and got shocked to see its 7:30 and geet hadn't woke him up yet. He shook his head to part up the laziness and got up to check on geet. He looked around the house only to find it so silent and moved toward geet's room and opened it wide only to see her sleeping in the bed in her famous style, throwing off covers and pillows.

"Geet!!! Geet!!!" he shrilled as he shaken her up. "umm" she said in her sleep pushing his hand away. Seeing her so deep in sleep, he picked up the water jug and poured it all over her, making her jump as the coldness hit her skin.

"maan!!!!" she shouted as she jumped up from the bed to hit him, but he held her before she could. "just look at the watch, its 7:35, your school will start in 25 minutes and you are still in bed just hurry up and get ready" he said pushing her in bathroom.

"well since I am already late, let me bunk the school, hows that!!!" geet said yawning a little. "geet how can you say that!!! Just hurry up and don't waste more time" he said and went out of the door shouting to be ready within 15 minutes.

Geet sighed, "School so boring!!!" she thought as she did what he asked her to do.

In all these months what she didn't noticed was that, hr priorities had changed so much that she had stopped thinking rationally. The school, basic education, which was her dream once, she had stopped worrying about that, non thinking that her entire life could be destroyed with her ignorance.

To say what she did in these 2 months in her new class, was to attend classes all lost, bunking them whenever possible so that she can be alone from all these hustle bustle, if asked what is being taught at present, she would be totally blank!!!!

She had started entering in the bad books of teachers, who were losing their hope in her, as now even yash and rohan, the stupidest student in class were better than her. Maan knew she wasn't focusing much these days, but meera never told him the extent geet had gone ignoring her studies. She thought geet's going through a tough time and telling maan about her ignorance would just add more to the trouble. He thought its just a break and then her tensed up mind needed to relaxed up too, but the extent of relaxation it had got, he was still unaware.

He dropped her finally on the gates and she was late by half an hour. He couldn't still believe she just took half an hour in shower when he had asked her to be completely ready in fifteen minutes. He was about to zoom off when he heard her speak, "maan stop a second please" "hmm" he said looking at the gates worrying she would even be allowed even if she keep wasting time like this.

"I really don't want to go today!!" she said looking at him with expectant eyes. "geet just 2 days more, then its your summer vacation' and then you have to attend these last days to get your holiday homework and then your exam scheme too" he said in his strict voice.

"but I can take that from meera and rohan too later" "geet stop making excuses and just go!!!" he said as he kicked start the bike. "ok but firstly promise me that you will receive my calls and my messages" "ha baba" he said thinking maybe that's the reason she is reluctant to go now. "pakka promise" she again asked.

"Geet you have wasted another fifteen minutes in all these" he chided and just glared her to go into the class. Nodding she went still looking at him as he waited for her to go inside.

"so finally princess geet got time to attend her economics class!!! I thought we need to issue a special invitation for you to get you here" professor Shekhawat taunted as geet stood on the door. "wo sir wo'" geet stuttered to find some new excuse but was cut off by professor, " geet no need to lie in the morning. Just go and take your seat and care to not disturb my leftover class anymore" professor looked at her with angry eyes as she nodded and went to her seat beside meera.

She looked around her only to find everyone there; even misha was there too, giving her a sympathetic look. Meera saw the happiness in geet, and wondered where is that teacher pet that used to get tensed in teacher's every taunt. She surely disapproved the change in geet, but well she herself that carefree so it wasn't that big a deal.

But then she couldn't talked to her about it seeing the depression she was getting into, but well she looked happy now and in no way she will let her go this time.

Geet yawned as professor shekhawat taught the basic concept of inflation. "geet concentrate!!!" meera said elbowing her in her waist. "ya I am listening" geet said as she again looked back at the board trying to decipher what teacher is explaining. Already half of the class was missed, no much use of concentrating even, she deciphered.

"hiii rohan" geet said as she settled herself beside sweaty rohan in football ground. "geet just pinch me!!!" geet did as she was asked that too tightly making him yelp in pain and then asked innocently, "by the way why you asked that idiot!!!" "god you are smiling. After so many months I am seeing those dimples on your cheeks yaar, are you the same geet who was with us in past few months or some jinn has got into you ha!!!"

Geet as usual rolled her eyes on his lines, typical rohan. "just shut up, waise what are you doing here, bunking class again!!!" she asked. "well same implies to you too!!! but nah not bunking class, I have permissions from principal, you see football captain is to be decided and this time I will surely beat misha" geet just shook her head knowing its just his dream, misha is still far too better than him.

They both sat in a moment of silence when rohan got all serious and asked, "geet is everything ok now??? I mean the reason due to which you got so sad and depressed, is it solved now???" geet just gave him a smile as she remembered the last day, or rather say night!!! Probably the most beautiful one of her 17 years of life.

Rohan just kept admiring the beautiful smile that formed on her lips. He has actually seen that beauty in her eyes after so many months. Only he knew how much bad he felt seeing her so loft and forbidden, it felt as if she had lost the life in her!!! But it seems finally god had fulfilled his wish, and given back his friend.

It was math class and geet was again sitting on the last bench on the class, trying to hide from teacher's eye and took out her cell from her bag and thinking something, she went to maan's number in her list and messaged him, "what are you doing"

She waited and waited, time passing so slow for her that she felt it had been hours since the first message and again texted him the same message. Within five minutes, she had resent the same message at least 15 times.

After sometime maan saw his cell and got shocked seeing 15 messages from geet. He immediately looked at the time and realized, she should be in class. Why is she texting me that too so many messages???

He immediately replied, "am in office. Is everything fine there??"

Within seconds his cell vibrated signaling the arrival of new message. "yup!!! Just wanted to talk to you that's all <3"

"geet keep your cell back. You know it isn't allowed in campus and above all concentrate on class" his anger could be felt from his words but well his anger is better than the boring class.

"please 5 minutes, talk to me na"

"geet m not replying you anymore!!! Just concentrate on class"

Geet twisted her lips thinking he doesn't even have 5 minutes for me now. But I want to talk with him. Ha I will keep sending him message, akhir kab tak reply nhi karenge. Deciding she again started sending him various messages, like, "have your lunch" "wanna talk to you" "this class is boring" "feeling sleepy" etc etc.

Maan started being worried seeing her messages. He couldn't believe his geet could show such ignorance toward studies, and it was going overboard now. He thought to talk to suhana about that, may be she would be able to explain her better on all this rather than him, as he would probably end up shouting on her or being angry.

Geet, on another side was busy messaging unknown that two pair of eyes was fixed on her. One of rohan, who was sitting beside her wondering whom she is texting so much and second the professor who caught her doing something and marched toward her seat.

"may I know miss handa in what are you so busy with???" the old professor shrieked. Geet got startled with the loud voice and looked up to see professor standing nearly on her head, trying to peak into the phone, with his hands on his waist. "ahh umm wo'" geet fumbled to explain herself.

"I hope you know miss that any electronic device is completely banned within school premises and is a serious offence" said professor as he adjusted back his glasses. Geet nodded as she looked down, "so since you know that, you must also know that if anyone is caught doing that, he/she is rusticated for a month from school" geet again nodded sweating profusely in fear.

"well since you are so intelligent miss geet, I will like you to follow me to dean's chamber so that we could call your guardians and deal the matter properly" geet's head raised in shock as she heard maan would be called to complain about her. Oh god!!! Kisi tarah kal hi to mane the, ab mai kya karu. Agar if he gets angry again, babaji mujhe to mar hi jana hai.

"but sir" rohan interjected trying to stop the professor but then got stopped in mid hearing nisha, his so called girlfriends voice, "rohan you should not be cutting off teachers, its bad manners" rohan looked at nisha in anger as he saw professor taking geet away. "ahha so finally miss geet handa is going to be rusticated, after a whole year I am getting this opportunity, how can I miss that" thought nisha tactfully.

"geet I am quiet disappointed with your behavior in this semester. I had received lots of complaints against you from many teachers, you had hardly attended any class without creating a ruckus in class and most of the time you have bunked them. I had tried to ignore that thinking its just some mental disturbance, but using mobile in school and texting within school hours won't be tolerated even a bit. You had crossed all limits and now I am forced to call Mr Khurana and tell him about your performance in this year of the school" said the dean of St. xaviors.

"sir I am really sorry, it won't be repeated again" geet pleaded with tears in her eyes. She wasn't worried of being rusticated or suspended or punished, but she was scared of falling in maan's eyes now. She hadn't thought that her irresponsiveness will result in such things and promised herself to never repeat that again.

"no geet, if we let you go, it will just make other students relaxed and they would stop taking school decorum seriously. So you just wait outside while I will call your guardian" dean said with determinedness banning any another word from geet.

PRECAP: maan knowing about geet's school performance.

Ab kya hoga!!!!

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Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
it seems to be ages... AM FIRST...

thanx for the lovely update... hayee is update ke liye kithna wait karwaya tumne neha!!!

am so happy with this update... the realistic approach u brought in is commendable... geet is behaving totally like a teenage love stricken gal!!! though still she havent voiced her love, her every actions is screaming it!!!!

the height of her carelessness is alarming me... she is not at all interested in studies, which once was only in her mind... i really wish she comes back to track soon... an am sure it will, as now maan is coming to the picture!!!

looking forward for maans encounter with this careless geet... and what have u planned for her summer vacation? will she be staying with maaan??

i know ur classes are starting from next week... and so the updates will be less from next week... but before that will u give an update more in this weekend??? i will be waiting

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
HOLY HELL!!!!!!!!!!! geet is gone... pakka gone... well i understand its imp to know maan abt geet's situation... but now his temper is goona errupt.. wait geet... maan volcano khurana is surely going to beat u... even in this scary situation i m so waiting to knw abt maan's reaction-action...
Edited by krati5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bechari Geet!

Aab to Maan se bhi daant parne wale hai! 🤢


Aab keya hoga?????
😲

Summer Holiday in Two days????? 😲

Wooow!!
Edited by memyselfndI - 12 years ago

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