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DARMIYAAN

STORY SO FAR

Geet who was 16 yrs old, had just given her 10th boards. her elder sister suhana was soon married off, leaving her at the responsibility of Chachi shalini and Chacha Mohinder.

Shalini due to certain reasons, fixed her marriage with Maan Singh Khurana who wasn't aware of his age. for him she was an adult, 21 yr old.

even after geet's denial, she was married off and brought to khurana's house. at the very first night itself, geet rejected her husband.

Her reaction wasn't acceptable to him and thus a tense environment was created in khurana's house. geet, tried her best to accept him, but always failed.

When her tenth's board result came, maan faces the harsh reality and took the decision for their life. he took her with him to mumbai where he got her admission in top school of the country on full scholarship basis.

geet then told suhana, her elder sister about the marriage and then suhana had a face off with maan and felt his pain, and took his side.

Geet finally joined her school and met meera and her gang. They easily gelled up and formed a nice bond.

Geet was offered free hostel facility and she expressed maan her wish to join it. maan was reluctant at first but then finally agreed for her happiness.

Geet finally shifted in hostel and nakul was appointed to help maan in house chores. Maan was missing geet terribly but her wish for his happy life motivated him to enjoy life.

A boy Rohan noticed geet's resistance to boys and was attracted to her. He wanted to friendship with her and thus was finding ways to talk with her.

Soon maan's birthday came and geet was unaware of it. Maan to didn't told her but still she made it special for him in her own sweet ways unknowingly.

Finally exams came and geet helped rohan in studies, thus building a strong friendship between them. finally it was diwali and geet and maan came more close emotionally to each other but then something happened and geet asked maan to get married again.

maan was deeply hurt while geet realized he feelings for the first time, but then his indifference toward her shattered her.




thanx all for your support.
its just because of you guys that i am starting a new thread that too so soon.



love you all
neha⭐️


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where is d update dear...
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PART 43


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Maan kept thinking whether to go or not to talk with geet. He felt bad that she left her lunch and though to go and cheer her up but then his Big Fatso Ego came in between refusing to go after her, and even since morning she is being weird and then will come back in a hour, so probably she would come out in an hour or so, when her stomach would start grumbling.

It had been more than 2 hours and she didn't come out. "It seems she had gone quiet angry this time, lagta hai I have to go only. This geet na only god knows what's going in her mind."

Thinking so, he knocked at her door, actually probably for the first time in the entire year. It wasn't in their habit to knock or ask permission before entering in each other's room, especially for geet. She would just barge into his room, without looking at the time or thinking what he might be doing.

He knocked thrice but no reply came, and thus leaving all this faltu formality, he just opened the door only to find her slipped inside the covers. "geet" he called her, but got response. "geet, you know I hate it when you don't reply, so just speak up!!!"

Still no response. Sighing he went to her bed and sat near her, only to find her in deep sleep. He looked at her face, which had some dried tear marks, probably she cried for long. "Damn!! He thought, whole day she had been crying for one or the other reason, and every time its me, how can I hurt her so much", he thought hitting his fist on the bed rim.

He caressed her face with his knuckles, caressing her cheek, rubbing his thumb over the dried trails. "am so sorry mishty, I know am bad to do that to you, that to on the very day, I owned you. Sorry for being a jerk and ass whole day. But it isn't my fault too, you really looked so cute and adorable, messed up with that flour all over you, and not to forget, you just love to tease and laugh on me, so today I got my chance. Their wasn't any need to be angry

" He bent down near her face, so close that his warm breath was fanning her cheeks. "happy first anniversary jaan" he said as he caressed his lips on her soft ones.

She felt something in her sleep and covered her face with sheets, trying to shoo off the thing which was disturbing her sleep. He couldn't help but smile at her antics, it felt as if she was shying from him, though he knew it was just a conclusion of his brain, but who cares.

"have you came today to celebrate the day with me, bolo???" he asked her sleeping form. "did you even remember what date it is??? Or its just the coincidence that you are here that too today" she turned away in her sleep, now facing her back to him. He shook his head as he said, "when you are awake, you don't let me talk, and now when you are asleep, still you aren't paying attention to me, aj to thoda bhav ka haq mai rakhta hi hu, hai na"

"umm" geet moaned in her sleep, as she again turned around facing him in sleep. "are you even sleeping or just portraying to do so???" he asked confused with her action. "umm" again came a low moan. "what had happened to you maan, she is asleep and you are talking with her, and expecting her to reply. Ye ladki mujhe sachi me pagal kar degi!!!"

He wanted to wake her up for lunch, but then thought against it. May be she is just stressed and that's why is emotionally charged up, may be a proper sleep will relief her.

Feeling sleepy himself, he too slipped on the other empty side of the bed trying to catch some sleep.

It was around 7 when geet opened her eyes lazily, only to come across a sleeping maan. She looked at her position and turned beetroot red, realizing she had thrown off the sheets from them, and her legs were lying above his waist, while she was lying diagonally. She cursed herself, many a times suhana and even meera had taunted her about her sleeping habits and the way she sleeps, throwing off covers in sleep, lying diagonally or sometimes even falling off bed.

She immediately corrected her position and then her clothes, which had shifted above a little, exposing her waist and calf. Then she thought what he is doing here, in her room and on her bed!!! And simultaneously she tried to remember the reason for her anger, and immediately a ghostly picture of sameera laughing on her along with him appeared in front of her eyes and her anger reached to highest level.

She looked at sleeping maan and remembered how he was laughing on her too, that too with that kamini chudail, and thus collecting all her strength, she reached near him and gave him a rough push, making him fall out of bed on the concrete floor. His eyes slammed open as he groaned in pain, rubbing his head which banged with hard surface and looked at geet who was laughing off her ass on the bed seeing his expressions.

"geeettt!!!" he shouted standing up again, rubbing his head while she just kept laughing rolling on bed. He sat on the bed as he held her by both hands, pinning her on the mattresses. "what was that for" he asked gritting his teeth. "for laughing on me in noon" she replied twisting her lips. "but that was funny, it isn't!!" he said glaring her.

"oh accha ji!!! I fell from stool, that too all messed up in flour and you could laugh, and now when you fell from bed, it isn't funny, care to explain" she taunted. "that stool wasn't even half the height of bed, and secondly, that was your fault and you could have asked sam to help you in that, but no madam geet is help-me-not plant right!!!"

Hearing sam, her anger reached its peak and she started pushing him off her, "its touch-me-not mr intelligent and secondly leave me, I am not going to talk to you, huh!!" he struggled to maintain his hold on her, and hissed, "you are behaving as it's the first time I had teased you. And so many times you used to laugh on me, did I react that way nhi na!!!"

"yeah I agree that we had teased each other before too, aur agar aj bhi aap mujhpe haste I wouldn't had mind that, wo sab hamare darmiyaan tha and I don't mind that, but you were supporting that sam of yours today instead of me and I don't like others to interfere in our matter." She somehow freed herself from him, and went to the other side of the bed leaving him shocked and puzzled. She was being angry because of sam, but he knew sam since childhood, she just loves geet as much as meera, then why does geet hate her???

"Geet sameera was just laughing on your condition, she didn't mean any harm or any competition" he said trying to explain sam but that just pushed on the wrong button. "if you are here to favour her, then please leave me alone, mujhe nhi baat karni aap se" she said with finality going on the left side of the bed, covering herself with covers, trying to sleep.

That's when he realized she hadn't had her lunch yet and said,"Geet comeon have something, you hadn't eaten anything since morning, ab to 7 baj gye sham ke"

"oh you noticed!!! Am glad but I won't eat anything"

"don't irritate me now, bahut dekh liya tumhara drama maine, chalo utho ab" he said pulling her by her hand, but she snuggled more in covers, pushing him away.

"maine kha na I won't eat anything, and that's final, aap jao enjoy karo apna favorite pasta"

"geet!!!" he growled, irritated with her continuous denial. "there is some pasta in fridge, I am going to warm it up and till then I want you out."

"us pasta ka to naam mat lena mere samne, I don't even want to see it even" she said as she hid under the covers.

Sighing he went under the covers, laying beside her and then holding her by her shoulder he pinned her down to mattress to stop her struggles, "ok, you don't want to eat pasta, to why don't you make something yourself."

She hit his chest to free herself, but his hold was tight not letting her move even, "no I won't cook too" she said looking away.

"lets order something from outside then" he said hoping she will agree now.

"no!!!"

"then we both are going out and eat something there, and that's final now"

She didn't said anything this time, "lagta hai maan gyi", he thought taking a sigh of relief. "get ready in 15 minutes, we will go on beach, and eat whatever you wish ok???"

"beech aur wo bhi aapke saath, nhi, I am not mad" she said looking away.

He digged his nails in her skin, getting offended with her answer. "mere saath beech me kya problem hai, huh???"

"whenever you take me to beach, you just go and sit down and ask me to enjoy, agar akele hi enjoy karna hai to mai akele hi jau na, why to even accompany me till there" she twisted her lips remembering how much bored she gets with him on beach.

"you think I can't enjoy on beach??"

"yeah right!! That's what I think, aur ab hato mere upar se, you are quite heavy" she pushed him away finally and got out of the bed.

"geet get ready in 15 minutes, we are ging to beach and I will show you enjoy kaise karte hai" saying so he got up from the bed giving her a smirk, yet feeling happy inside with her changed demeanor, her rebelling and dominant side.

She knew it will be a waste, but then remembering finally she have him all for herself, she got excited with the idea and went up to get ready. She looked out at the atmosphere, only to find it pleasant, a breezy evening, pefect!! She immediately freshened up and changed into a white long skirt and a pinkish white tank top. She looked at herself in the mirror, as she clutched her hairs in a clutcher.

She somewhere felt quite different in that dress, she hadn't wore a long skirt or tank top before, but it was he who had chosen for her during the time of diwaali shopping, and she just wore it, knowing he will always choose perfect for her. She looked at her exposed shoulders and arms, and that deep neck top, which started just above her cleavage, and took a white long scarf, placing it around her neck, she sighed, just perfect!!

She was ready in fifteen minutes as decided and went in hall only to find him ready too in a white see through shirt and faded blue jeans. Her eyes were stuck on him, he was looking so handsome in that simple attire too, she kept drooling upon him without caring that he is noticing her reaction.

Maan's condition was not different at all. He remembered how nervous she was when he asked her to buy that dress, she had even out rightly refused, but then he had bought her that forcefully, and well he wasn't wrong, she looked awesome, just way to perfect in that dress. It completely complimented her natural white glow, not to forget she is the prettiest girl he had ever met in his 26 year old life, and this dress just reflected her youth.

Soon they both were set off to go to juhu beach, on his motor bike. The beach was full of people at the hour, families who had come to enjoy the weather and have some family time together, while some young couples occupied some places, trying to enjoy their togetherness sneaking out from their parent eye.

They too parked their bike and stepped into the cool environment of beach. Geet just wanted to go near water and enjoy the tides, but maan was adamant to have something first. "no geet, till you eat your supper, we aren't going on the beach" he said with finality, while she just fold her arms over her chest.

"see I told you, you are a spoil sport, koi beech pe ake khane ki baat karta ahi kya' she cribbed to him. "say whatever you want, but I am not moving an inch even for the beach till you fill your tummy"

"dusht danav" she huffed under her breath stomping her foot on the sand. "yeah I heard that" sarcasm filled his voice. "good for you!!!" she said as she moved toward the pav bhaji stall.

After half an hour, they were done with the food as they moved toward the water. She was about to go where all the people had gathered, but he pulled her by waist, talking her to that part of beach which was quite secluded. Except few couples and some seashell collectors, there weren't many eyes to see.

"aap yha kyu'" her words dies in her throat, as she looked in his dark orbs, his pupil had diluted, looking intensely into her. She dipped her head, not able to look at him, his gaze gave some jittery feeling in her stomach.

Bending down, he freed her legs from slippers, as he stood bare footed too, feeling the chillness of the sand on their feet. "it feels so great this time na"she said as she walked slowly on the sand, letting her feet covered with the sand.

"hmm" he said as he looked at the vast ocean in front of him, harsh waves crashing over the water, due to tides, probably the best atmosphere is today.

"comeon you are turning boring" she said hearing his one word reply.

"geet am not boring" he said but she just loved to irritate him and kept rattling, "boring!!! Boring!!! Maan singh khurana is the biggest boring person on this earth"

"geet, you dare not say that again" he warned, his teeth gritting. But she kept on her sing-song. "you call for it!!!" he hissed as he made a dash for her, making her squeal in surprise as she made a run for her life.

She ran for meters while he followed behind her, slipping her everytime from an inch just. "geet stop" he shouted but she kept running away while he followed her from behind.

Finally after whole fifteen minutes, she sat down on the sand, huffing-panting,"peace!!!" she said, when he too fell near her because of tiredness.

Both looked at each other for a while and burst out in laughter as they looked around seeing how far they had ran, their clothes had filled with sand due to their running making them a sitting dirty.

"but you have to agree you are boring" geet said after gaining her breath."main bore hu, ha ruko abhi batata hu" he said as he held her before she could run away again and pulling her on sand, he held her tight with his one arm, and fisting some sand in his hand, he threw it inside her top from back making her squeal at him.

"maan stop!!! My new clothes' aap kharab kar rhe hO" she said trying to free herself from him but he continued to fill her top with sand. "you should have thought that before making fun of me" he said as he rolled her in hand, covering her fully with it, making her eyes wide.

After he was happy with his task, he finally freed her and got up moving away, while he laughed at her condition. He turned his back to go the side they had came from, when suddenly from back geet jumped on his back, holding him by neck as she filled some sand in his shirt.

His skin itched with the feel of sand, as it get stored in his shirt, since it was tucked in his jeans. "geet stop that" he said, but she pulled him down by his neck giving him the same treatment he gave her few minutes back.

Finally, he able to get control over her pushing her off his body. They both laid on the sand beside each other, as they gazed at the twinkling stars in the clear sky. They both remembered the last one hour they played with each other, it was fun and a stress relieving too.

They laughed like this after 7 months probably, all that distance didn't hurt that much, as the happiness of today's togetherness swelled up their heart.

Geet looked at the clear sky and then at him, who was still looking at the stars. Slowly, she moved her hand and placed it near his left one, entangling her fingers with his. He looked at her as he felt her palm in his, seeing her looking at him only. He looked in her eyes trying to gauge her reaction.

She looked at him for a while and then back at those stars. He was about to free his hand from hers when he heard her spoke, "I am sorry for those words that I said to you during diwaali holidays." His body immediately turned stiff as he tried to remove his hand, but she held him tight. "I know you hate me for asking that to you, when I know what you feel for me, but believe me maan, I didn't wanted what I had asked you then. sachi ap mujhe jiski kasam chahe khila lo, but I hadn't wished that. Since that day, every day I tried to contact you, to explain myself to you, but you just pushed me away. I know that you weren't wrong in your stance, probably someone in your place would have reacted more badly, but please forgive me for it. Please"

"geet I don't know how to trust you now. Everytime you just say something and then ask for forgiveness. I am a human too, I have a limit too." he said looking away from her.

"agar mai ek last chance mangu to" she said looking back at him with expectation. "but I can't believe you now" he said looking away. "aap jhuth bolte ho!!! If you didn't believe me, then you wouldn't have let me talked to maa today" she said looking at him confidently.

"you are getting it wrong" he said looking back at her. "shayd pehle nhi samakhti thi, lekin ab mai aapko janti hu" she said, this time leaving him speechless too. he opened his mouth to say something but words refused to come out. "I know sorry is much small of a word for the pain I had given you, but aap ko to pata hai ki mai karne kuch jati hu aur ho kuch aur jata hai. Please sorry na" she said holding her ears.

He looked away, trying to hold back that smile that was trying to free of his lips, but then he felt her hold his chin making him look at her, "jab datna hote hai to ghoor ghoor ke date ho, aur ab has rhe ho to ankhe chura rhe ho"

'am still angry" he said trying to portray stiff, but she just hugged him tight, saying "jhuta gussa"

He too held her tightly by waist, closing his eyes as he relished the best moment of his life, when she is close to him without any inhibition, hesitation or restraint. Soon he gelt her hitting him on the chest, "aap bhut bure ho, I am very angry from you" she said now looking at him in eye, placing her chin on his arm.

"and here I was thinking I am angry" he muttered. "nhi I am, pata hai aapke karan mera sabse jhagda ho gya, sabse let it be dii or hostel friends, yha tak ki I forget her anniversary too'"

You forgot' that's your fault, how am I responsible" he said rolling his eyes."of course you are, aapko manane ke chakkar me I forgot the world, now ab apko mujhe manana padega" she said making a puppy dog face.

"I am not doing anything" he said moving her away standing up. "till you don't do anything, I am not moving from here" she said sitting on her place.

"soch lo" he said his voice have that naughty spree which made her skin tingle. "umm, soch lia" she said trying to feel confident but her insides were damn nervous.

"ok then" saying so, he bent down lifting her in his arms and taking her to the water, he threw her in it making her squeal. He laughed going back on shore, while she kept standing in the water, her half body till lower chest dipped in it.

"geet come out", he said after few minutes, while she just refused to move from her place. 'geet the water is chilling, you will get ill' come stop your drama and come out" he said now getting worried as she refused to move.

"ok am sorry now' please come out" he said, this time really pleading to her but she just looked down as she covered her body wither hands. "I'. I can'. N't" she said stammering.

"why" he asked. "m'my ski..rt it go..ot stic'ked up, I ca'n't walk" she some how said trying to free her skirt from her legs, but they were stuck like second skin, and them being completely transparent, due to white didn't helped up either.

Realization dawned him as he felt really sorry for doing that. He didn't noticed that it would be difficult in skirt. He immediately opened up his shirt, keeping it on san, stepped in water moving near her. Lifting her in his arms, he brought her out of the water, while she kept trying to keep her hands on her lower body, hiding herself in his arms.

Not once did his eyes wavered from her face, how much his physical body wished to look at her naked beauty, yet his love was stronger now, able to control these physical urges for her.

Making her stand on sand, he passed his shirt to her, without looking at her. "umm tie it on your waist" he said while she immediately did as asked. After she was sure that it had been tied securely, she asked him turn around.

His eyes wavered a little lower to look at her, while she turned beet root as her temperature raised even after being dripping wet in cold water. "well that shirt didn't hid much, but it was atleast better than before.

Moving near her, he lifted her again, his palm could feel her skin where he held her on thigh, he tried to brush of the sensations that it sent to his lower body, well it was difficult to ignore!!

Geet looked at him with love and admiration, her savior and protector only hers!!!

It was good, that it was already 12 by the time they were going out, so beach was empty and their apartment didn't take even 5 minutes by bike. Taking out the spare towel from his bike, he handed her, so that she could tie that and he wore back his shirt.

Soon they were in their home, as he carried her in his arms everywhere and made her step in her room.

Placing her on her feet, he held her waist and said, "get changed and sleep ok!!! Its already late and tomorrow is your school" giving a peck on her forehead, he whispered, happy anniversary on her skin.

He immediately moved to door after that and then paused near the door, as he called back, "don't forget to wake me up, I will be dropping you" it was his order for her, no response was needed and saying so, he was out of the room closing the door behind him.

So finally the anniversary ended and I hope you all liked it.

Please I expect long comments on this one please!!!

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Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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Awww Neha!

I was ready to throw something at Gadha but you made me love him instead...😊
Loved the beach scenes a lot.
The fact that they talked and she said her sorries to him..
Protecting her with his shirt and still caring for her. Lovely.
Thanks for updating...
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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wow...dey r both back...deir manaoing each other...her indirect confession...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Nice part..Atleast they spend evening together..Geet din't wish him anniversary..I hope before she sleep she went to his room..
How about Geet ask him she can sleep with him..
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What should I say? Um, congrats for 8th thread...

I love this part the most... mostly there outing to beach... it was great and lovable. Hope slowly they start living together as couple...

Update soon
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awesome update!!!!!!!
Maaneet anniversary did turn out to be awesome!!!!
maan inside is confused
then maaneet have cute argument😛
then they go to beach and enjoyed like never before 😃
geet asks forgiveness for her words during diwali (i was like YES finally) and pacifies maan
they come back home and maan wishes her "happy anniversary"
so our geet will be back to normal, maan too
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congrats on the new thread loved the anniversary lunch / date both did not realized they were on loved that she apologized for what she said geet not realizing she is becoming possessive of maan loved the update beautifully done thanks for the pm




Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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