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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Saddest part of the whole thing is, the CVs wont read this, neither of this will will ever happen when everyone knows this will fetch a 20TRP -_-

Touched my heart this is exactly what i want to see. BRAVO

I will let this talk

that means an A+ 😉

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Champa2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Laila2009
this was a really well written story except a rushed ending really hurt the story. I thought you did a fabulous job and wished you'd have added more to the end and given more about Asad and Zoya's inner reactions towards the end. You had a great climactic ending that could have been built up some more and the with more towards the end. It was too matter a fact rather than with the depth and emotion you gave in the earlier part. I really liked it and consider this one of the more mature and well thought out stories that I have read. i definitely think you gave us a much needed maturer Zoya whom I really liked. I just WISH it had not had such a rushed ending.

Thank you Laila for the comments. As I said earlier, I am not a writer. Just trying to find some other hobby than baking and cooking (this way I won't have to eat all of it and become fatter). I will definitely keep your points in mind when I write the next story.

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viya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice. My heart cried for Zoya for a good part of this story.

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krati

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Posted: 12 years ago

it should happen in show just like it... u hv written it perfectly

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Champa2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you all.
jinelle20, preet_21, ariel1985, iliveyou, dalene, Inshilover, Vansa, dreamygirl_95, reshiv, arshirulez, nilorina, Evalina, mottali, malar3, noesha, benaz, akaswan, paris-delhi, tinkerlove, Kalasivakumar, Asad143Zoya, Linsie, bindasss, sasir, cheeky_maddy, ksen, nada_a, PRINCESS19, kath1, xyzw231, arhi_rules, Ashlena8, indiansrock7, hasiniangel, avi_12, eternalasha, shreya_rc, annanyaksgian, swarobi1, amitasaily, irock321, hemvb, bigj66, canadiankudi, e_enigma, hsvs, shreya11mehra, cutestar12, shona16, sweetone, Chinnu.Munnu, pinkstars, Khushi2187, arna753, janestone6, aarundhati, IPKKND_Pyaar, fee-fee, Joavssk9, Clara20, rosamale, Nithiya95, life4me, sujataraje, kajen.asya4ever, Pisces_Gurl, Geet_Ha, Garimavirmanksg, LuvUAsYa, Indidesi, Npdeepa, skavya, mochhug, Mehvish_fatima, rkbala, s120, asyaforlife, xNinalove, sophie420, kandygrover, latanzia, shabana20, AKlover101, -Siaa-, asadzoya-12, sparikh, friendsall, jazmeen, samko, neenabinu, braich_gal, viya.mallik4eva, MisHumptyDumpty, --Kriti--, zan101, krati5, gmskasrkmadhu, roseflower_07, zhasan2, Manasi_16, freya123, rabzonedge, -Laiba-, crazy4KASH_AR, .Siham., shanakyasharan, Surya.Ravi,

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@daydream.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Omg, this is fantastic! Really amazing job! 👏 ❤️

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nknaini

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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely i luv it very much and the os was well written i luv it. it was awesome

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ritu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Kash ...I want this in QH.😳

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niharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

I just loved it!!
everything
And Asad deserved the treatment from Zoe in the end

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it..loved each and every part of it.
Awesome work 👍🏼

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